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I've just started reading, can anyone tell me if there will be romance or a lonely character? And why is there no tag for one piece? I just found this novel on a random discord
the thing about badly translated novels, is you'd be unable to appreciate everything else. It's completely translated though, so I guess there's that.
Really a great fan-fic.If you said Oda write this book i would absolutely believe it.You can really appreciate the author for researching one piece and combining other theories and speculation to complete an interesting novel.If you can tolerate the 3 stars rate translation then i recommend you to give this novel a try.
5/5⭐ Must Read I already finished this and... it's quite surprising for chinese fic, the power level, the story line, the character and personalities is very very good IMO. Well there's something that's not rly good but none is perfect. Sooo you must read this👌
Все очень круто!!! Не читал ещё такого произведения про Ван пис и Наруто. Понравилось. Жду похожего произведения..... Оооооооооооооооооооооо
Well written, good pacing, good usage of the world but taking it in the authors own unique direction. I think the most impressive thing is how characters and actions have consequences from beginning to end.
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Solid read a little bit confusing at first but still a good story definitely recommend to everyone. This 140 character limit is annoying xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxcccccxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
The best one-piece fanfic I've read by far, the amount of world-building and creativity was incredible, even if I wasn't in it at first after 20-30 chapters, I was completely hooked. The translation is not the best, but it is decent. Rarely have I seen an author who can take an established world and make it his own. Thanks for the good time.
I don't know anything about this novel but when I read the first chapter I was flabbergasted the MC's name is Longinus what the f... I thought I'll probably drop this such a sh.tty name I don't want to read it especially if it appears for several chapters 😅😅
is there romance. if yes, who?is there romance. if yes, who?is there romance. if yes, who?is there romance. if yes, who?is there romance. if yes, who?
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Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!
I really love the novel I really love the novel I really love the novel I really love the novel I really love the novel I really love the novel I really love the novel I really love the novel I really love the novel
From the 200 chapters I've read there are many timeline errors, such as the destruction of Ohara earlier than required, and Vivi's birth in 1506 not 1505, it can be seen in the One Piece timeline in fandom.
One of the best fanfic i've ever read, even though it's translated the author did a great job editing it, there is some mistakes but still good job. Story development is fantasic, i'm at chapter 500 and the story have a lot of twists and interesting parts which i wouldn't say since it's a spoiler. Character design is marvelous, the characters stay true to the anime/manga and there is some dialogues that is really funny. I don't know about update stability but I'm gonna take the other's words and say it's good. The World background is the best one on a fanfic that i've ever seen. The World in this fanfic is really precise to the anime and the original author makes auxiliary and author's note in the novel to explain the misundet standings (bonus points for funny author's notes). Anyways all and all an amazing fanfic and great translator. 10/10 would recommend
This novel is good, nice character dev, good plots but sadly it has flaw which is the writing quality, it's hard to comprehend each sentences that ruins the flow of story. Hope the author re-translate this novel.
It is a very good one piece fanfic, which almost caught up with current episodes. 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
Si bien encontrar el origen del personaje es una mamada la historia tiene su encanto, .muchos huamasos y vergazos a la antigua... Aunque no mueren tantos como SNK se van los menos necesarios y tiene de donde sacarte una risa de vez en cuando.
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i wanna be the very best like ash ketchup could never be. i wanna stay in one place and not travel. actually catching them all. btw this is a great story
the story is very good. as far as originality goes it barely has aspects of the original story making this fanfiction seem more like it's own story rather than just a different flavor of the original like most others.
just that good. djdkkekdkddkdkkddkskdkdkkddkdkdkdkkddkkdkskskskskskdkskskskskdlslsldldldldllddkdkldldldldldldkdkdkdkddkdklddkkdkdkdkdkdkklk
this book is a treasure ///////////////////////////////////////// //////////////////////////////////////// /////////////////////////////////////// /////////////////////////////////////////
Author-san, you're story is so good that I'm jealous. Sure some words don't make that much sense, until you read a little further. Over all this deserve to have some type of reward, cause this is a +SSS story that can't be replaced by any stories.
this is actually fun to read...😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😋😋😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😉😆😆😆😆😆😃😃😃😃😀😀😀😀😀😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😃😄😃😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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I've just started reading, can anyone tell me if there will be romance or a lonely character? And why is there no tag for one piece? I just found this novel on a random discord
the thing about badly translated novels, is you'd be unable to appreciate everything else. It's completely translated though, so I guess there's that.
Really a great fan-fic.If you said Oda write this book i would absolutely believe it.You can really appreciate the author for researching one piece and combining other theories and speculation to complete an interesting novel.If you can tolerate the 3 stars rate translation then i recommend you to give this novel a try.
5/5⭐ Must Read I already finished this and... it's quite surprising for chinese fic, the power level, the story line, the character and personalities is very very good IMO. Well there's something that's not rly good but none is perfect. Sooo you must read this👌
Все очень круто!!! Не читал ещё такого произведения про Ван пис и Наруто. Понравилось. Жду похожего произведения..... Оооооооооооооооооооооо
Well written, good pacing, good usage of the world but taking it in the authors own unique direction. I think the most impressive thing is how characters and actions have consequences from beginning to end.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA<NMLLLLIUTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Solid read a little bit confusing at first but still a good story definitely recommend to everyone. This 140 character limit is annoying xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxcccccxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
The best one-piece fanfic I've read by far, the amount of world-building and creativity was incredible, even if I wasn't in it at first after 20-30 chapters, I was completely hooked. The translation is not the best, but it is decent. Rarely have I seen an author who can take an established world and make it his own. Thanks for the good time.
I don't know anything about this novel but when I read the first chapter I was flabbergasted the MC's name is Longinus what the f... I thought I'll probably drop this such a sh.tty name I don't want to read it especially if it appears for several chapters 😅😅
is there romance. if yes, who?is there romance. if yes, who?is there romance. if yes, who?is there romance. if yes, who?is there romance. if yes, who?
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one of the Best one piece fanfic [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!Fantastic!
I really love the novel I really love the novel I really love the novel I really love the novel I really love the novel I really love the novel I really love the novel I really love the novel I really love the novel
From the 200 chapters I've read there are many timeline errors, such as the destruction of Ohara earlier than required, and Vivi's birth in 1506 not 1505, it can be seen in the One Piece timeline in fandom.
One of the best fanfic i've ever read, even though it's translated the author did a great job editing it, there is some mistakes but still good job. Story development is fantasic, i'm at chapter 500 and the story have a lot of twists and interesting parts which i wouldn't say since it's a spoiler. Character design is marvelous, the characters stay true to the anime/manga and there is some dialogues that is really funny. I don't know about update stability but I'm gonna take the other's words and say it's good. The World background is the best one on a fanfic that i've ever seen. The World in this fanfic is really precise to the anime and the original author makes auxiliary and author's note in the novel to explain the misundet standings (bonus points for funny author's notes). Anyways all and all an amazing fanfic and great translator. 10/10 would recommend
This novel is good, nice character dev, good plots but sadly it has flaw which is the writing quality, it's hard to comprehend each sentences that ruins the flow of story. Hope the author re-translate this novel.
It is a very good one piece fanfic, which almost caught up with current episodes. 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
Si bien encontrar el origen del personaje es una mamada la historia tiene su encanto, .muchos huamasos y vergazos a la antigua... Aunque no mueren tantos como SNK se van los menos necesarios y tiene de donde sacarte una risa de vez en cuando.
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i wanna be the very best like ash ketchup could never be. i wanna stay in one place and not travel. actually catching them all. btw this is a great story
the story is very good. as far as originality goes it barely has aspects of the original story making this fanfiction seem more like it's own story rather than just a different flavor of the original like most others.
just that good. djdkkekdkddkdkkddkskdkdkkddkdkdkdkkddkkdkskskskskskdkskskskskdlslsldldldldllddkdkldldldldldldkdkdkdkddkdklddkkdkdkdkdkdkklk
this book is a treasure ///////////////////////////////////////// //////////////////////////////////////// /////////////////////////////////////// /////////////////////////////////////////
Author-san, you're story is so good that I'm jealous. Sure some words don't make that much sense, until you read a little further. Over all this deserve to have some type of reward, cause this is a +SSS story that can't be replaced by any stories.
this is actually fun to read...😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😋😋😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😉😆😆😆😆😆😃😃😃😃😀😀😀😀😀😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😃😄😃😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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