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I like the way the author write, she is doing the "show and don't tell" kind of principle in writing a story which is what I like. I like Alvia already. Since it is a fantasy with a mixed of romance, this story is a woaa to me. Anyways, keeeeeep writing, author! :))))))
The fantasy mixed with a romance novel again from one of a kind author! Ufaeri seem kinda confused me in the start, but it's part of the character development in the exact plot line of it!
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The word choice for every sentence and every paragraph made me feel as though I, myself was there, feeling what was happening and it was just happening to me. Basically all I can say is, KEEP WRITING! Good job and keep it up! More backstory and character description would be appreciated though. And, the characters are good and the story too.. But for me, it seems a bit rushed. For others, it can be different. So it’s just totally upto the writer. But enjoyed it so far. 💙
I really do like this book. The transition from the prologue to the first chapter sorta confused me. But chapters 1-5 had strong development. The details are on point and would definitely recommend this book to anyone and everyone!!!
This Story very interesting, I like how the author introduces the characters. There are some grammatical mistakes, but overall I am very excited to see how this story develops.
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I'm so in love with the MC OMG she is do cute and adorable and so innocent but later her sassy attitude is so epic. I can't wait to read further please do update!!!!!
I like the way the author write, she is doing the "show and don't tell" kind of principle in writing a story which is what I like. I like Alvia already. Since it is a fantasy with a mixed of romance, this story is a woaa to me. Anyways, keeeeeep writing, author! :))))))
The fantasy mixed with a romance novel again from one of a kind author! Ufaeri seem kinda confused me in the start, but it's part of the character development in the exact plot line of it!
Reveal Spoiler The word choice for every sentence and every paragraph made me feel as though I, myself was there, feeling what was happening and it was just happening to me. Basically all I can say is, KEEP WRITING! Good job and keep it up! More backstory and character description would be appreciated though. And, the characters are good and the story too.. But for me, it seems a bit rushed. For others, it can be different. So it’s just totally upto the writer. But enjoyed it so far. 💙
I really do like this book. The transition from the prologue to the first chapter sorta confused me. But chapters 1-5 had strong development. The details are on point and would definitely recommend this book to anyone and everyone!!!
This Story very interesting, I like how the author introduces the characters. There are some grammatical mistakes, but overall I am very excited to see how this story develops.
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I'm so in love with the MC OMG she is do cute and adorable and so innocent but later her sassy attitude is so epic. I can't wait to read further please do update!!!!!