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this is a great novel but I'm very confused why there is only 7 chapters when a moment ago there were tons more. I really hope the author can explain this. and font give up author, it's an amazing book I really enjoy
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It may change with more chapter's but all look good so far There's a brief backstory on the world some that's a plus a few plot's going around while the MC goes through the survival arc that do need interlude's to work as plot hook, The grow pace on lv's is a lot slower that before the rewrite the story is overall better but i can't make a more detailed review without seeing more interaction betwen character's or an even Battle The MC just doesn't have the time or chance to do anything aside trying to survive and the lack of suporting cast make hard to fully get a full read on the MC personality
Will the MC possess a Human Form soon... Hope so. Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler
how can this book be deleted did it not get as popular it had a good character design and is unique and original could have been one of the best
The author is rewriting the story and it shall return at a much later date around the beginning of next year (2022)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm writing this post deletion. I really enjoyed this story while it was up, it was one of the stories I kept up regularly on. The action was decent, and it was a nice lighthearted story I could get behind. It was improving as the story was going on, and I was looking forward to how it would turn out in the end.(I believe her humanoid form much later, or as a temporary form that her power is seriously decreased in). Despite that bias, I loved this charming story and hope for a reboot/rewrite.
The book says last updated 51 years ago... i rated everything 5 star because of that no other reason... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Why deleted author? I really like your story. please, at least don't delete your novel. π₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ί
deleted.... it's all gone..... it was so good too.... why? at least explain to let us have ease of mind........ please..... what happened? why was it all thrown away...... did something happen? please.....
Why did it get deleted? I was saving it for when it had more chapters out! I was looking forward to reading it to! That's too bad...........
why though ................................ ................................................. .................................................
I was really enjoying this so I hope it isnt gone permanently... Big O O F ππππππππππππππππππππ©π©ππ©π©ππππππππππ
Whoa? Deleted? What happened? The story was going great so far. At least I thought it was. I hope it's just a rewrite or something, it had so much potential.
WHYYYY!!!!!! this was one of the best novels i read and now its gone *sigh* it is what it is i guess.............................................
I think this is a great story but the way she is always in a weakened state against the big threat kind of takes away some of the development
okay I'm just throwing this out there u dont have to do this but can you give us skill descriptions to we know what they do for the confusing ones like for the imprint skill does it make it possible to imprint onto other creatures as her mate or somehow get them pregnant, or show that creature is close to her
I really like this novel especially the work that is putted on the system. It is incredibly hard to find a well planned and thought out system I hope this goes on until the very end
I really like this story because I think the storyline is good. That's all I can say so thank you: ^_^ ~γβββββγ~ [img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp]
I love the story really good and like how the mc is naive/dumb because she is in a new world and it helps her grow when she gets new information it's not that she is dumb in iw or int stat it's just she has no new common sense, and like the game system because it shows us her skills and how strong she is when ever there is a story with out a system in my opinion it's how to tell the mc skills and how strong they how most novels that I read like that u get to little to know information on their skills or strength at all or they just never include new abilities when they them untill later on and we had no idea, so that why I like when their is a system to help the mc grow and show their strength.
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Thisis so far a good book. I would love if she met her master again and they get close..... thatd be very touching. please keep the chapters coming!!!! I cant wait for the neXt chapters to come out.
Itβs a great start and I hope thereβs going to be more. I really hope you could add he meetings her master in the near future while the master figuring out who she isππΌπ₯³
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I quite like how the story has developed in Over the chapters and am in interested in what going to happen if she ever meets up with shrio again.
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Honestly this feels very similar to The Time I Got Reincarnated as a Slime but thats a good thing as I loved it. However try to be more unique It feels so far like a copy.
I love it. it is amazing. I just wish the author would release chapters more often... but this is an amazing book! Thanks author!
Hey there! Shameless Author Review, let's go! A year ago, I wrote this story, but I felt like it needed some changes, so I made a rewrite. This rewrite follows the original, but its better in my opinion, so I will be saying what I think is better. First off, I think the writing. I remember my descriptions being childish last time I wrote, seeing as how it was my first time writing. I don't think that fact has changed much, but I believe there is a visible difference. I'm not that good when it comes to the writing aspect, although the ideas are in my head, bringing them out into words is a bit tough! But I believe its better than before. Next, I can promise that I'll be updating everyday. As has been observed by readers, I haven't failed to update even a single day. Going so far to bring up Power stone challenges and bringing those 5 chapters out, not even taking them as a part of my weekly schedule! I promise a minimum of 5 chapters a week, so you won't be bored a single day! Also, the story development! This part some might find annoying since its in my opinion, a BIG story! It starts of with a feeling of mystery and there being more than what everything seems, but those won't be focused on, since they only blur out the current happenings. I believe that the story is very slow paced, but this aspect will be picking up the pace with each arc. Slowly, but surely, you will notice certain events happening quicker and quicker and before you realise, the pace will be too fast to keep up with. Until then, I hope you enjoy the arcs in between them! Then there's the diverse cast. Or what I hope to be diverse. The monsters are very cliche, same common traits, looks and stereotypes. A few unconventional creatures, but not a lot, all with their own traditions, cultures, characters, attitudes and perceptions on life. I hope they blend colourfully to enthrall you readers! I spent a while thinking about the world (A year) and to be honest, after a bit of chipping and cutting out chaff, it is quite a small one, compared to what i was envisioning at first. It takes place in a small continent in a completely random world that has been altered by the actions of "gods". The land is divided into a few zones, with different races, and other twists and turns, lore and history and the other good stuff I won't be mentioning now. This is it for my review at the end of the 2nd Arc, Chapter 40 something (lol, Idk) In short, enjoy!
this is a great novel but I'm very confused why there is only 7 chapters when a moment ago there were tons more. I really hope the author can explain this. and font give up author, it's an amazing book I really enjoy
Interesting story[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It may change with more chapter's but all look good so far There's a brief backstory on the world some that's a plus a few plot's going around while the MC goes through the survival arc that do need interlude's to work as plot hook, The grow pace on lv's is a lot slower that before the rewrite the story is overall better but i can't make a more detailed review without seeing more interaction betwen character's or an even Battle The MC just doesn't have the time or chance to do anything aside trying to survive and the lack of suporting cast make hard to fully get a full read on the MC personality
Will the MC possess a Human Form soon... Hope so. Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler
how can this book be deleted did it not get as popular it had a good character design and is unique and original could have been one of the best
The author is rewriting the story and it shall return at a much later date around the beginning of next year (2022)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm writing this post deletion. I really enjoyed this story while it was up, it was one of the stories I kept up regularly on. The action was decent, and it was a nice lighthearted story I could get behind. It was improving as the story was going on, and I was looking forward to how it would turn out in the end.(I believe her humanoid form much later, or as a temporary form that her power is seriously decreased in). Despite that bias, I loved this charming story and hope for a reboot/rewrite.
The book says last updated 51 years ago... i rated everything 5 star because of that no other reason... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Why deleted author? I really like your story. please, at least don't delete your novel. π₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ί
deleted.... it's all gone..... it was so good too.... why? at least explain to let us have ease of mind........ please..... what happened? why was it all thrown away...... did something happen? please.....
Why did it get deleted? I was saving it for when it had more chapters out! I was looking forward to reading it to! That's too bad...........
why though ................................ ................................................. .................................................
I was really enjoying this so I hope it isnt gone permanently... Big O O F ππππππππππππππππππππ©π©ππ©π©ππππππππππ
Whoa? Deleted? What happened? The story was going great so far. At least I thought it was. I hope it's just a rewrite or something, it had so much potential.
WHYYYY!!!!!! this was one of the best novels i read and now its gone *sigh* it is what it is i guess.............................................
I think this is a great story but the way she is always in a weakened state against the big threat kind of takes away some of the development
okay I'm just throwing this out there u dont have to do this but can you give us skill descriptions to we know what they do for the confusing ones like for the imprint skill does it make it possible to imprint onto other creatures as her mate or somehow get them pregnant, or show that creature is close to her
I really like this novel especially the work that is putted on the system. It is incredibly hard to find a well planned and thought out system I hope this goes on until the very end
I really like this story because I think the storyline is good. That's all I can say so thank you: ^_^ ~γβββββγ~ [img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp]
I love the story really good and like how the mc is naive/dumb because she is in a new world and it helps her grow when she gets new information it's not that she is dumb in iw or int stat it's just she has no new common sense, and like the game system because it shows us her skills and how strong she is when ever there is a story with out a system in my opinion it's how to tell the mc skills and how strong they how most novels that I read like that u get to little to know information on their skills or strength at all or they just never include new abilities when they them untill later on and we had no idea, so that why I like when their is a system to help the mc grow and show their strength.
122O33OO3O3O2O2O2K2KWKWK2K2KK2K2K2K2K2K2KWKWKWWKWKWKWKAOAOAOAOOAOAOAOAAOAOokKkkakakammMMazmzmzmzzkzkzkkkisoosossosososos00100010109110p11010101020aL
Thisis so far a good book. I would love if she met her master again and they get close..... thatd be very touching. please keep the chapters coming!!!! I cant wait for the neXt chapters to come out.
Itβs a great start and I hope thereβs going to be more. I really hope you could add he meetings her master in the near future while the master figuring out who she isππΌπ₯³
I am the exp of my sword. webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless review. Unknown to death, nor known to life. Have withstood pain to create many reviews. Yet, those hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray...Unlimited Exp Works!. - [ ]
great light novel ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
I quite like how the story has developed in Over the chapters and am in interested in what going to happen if she ever meets up with shrio again.
Reveal Spoiler Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Honestly this feels very similar to The Time I Got Reincarnated as a Slime but thats a good thing as I loved it. However try to be more unique It feels so far like a copy.
I love it. it is amazing. I just wish the author would release chapters more often... but this is an amazing book! Thanks author!
Hey there! Shameless Author Review, let's go! A year ago, I wrote this story, but I felt like it needed some changes, so I made a rewrite. This rewrite follows the original, but its better in my opinion, so I will be saying what I think is better. First off, I think the writing. I remember my descriptions being childish last time I wrote, seeing as how it was my first time writing. I don't think that fact has changed much, but I believe there is a visible difference. I'm not that good when it comes to the writing aspect, although the ideas are in my head, bringing them out into words is a bit tough! But I believe its better than before. Next, I can promise that I'll be updating everyday. As has been observed by readers, I haven't failed to update even a single day. Going so far to bring up Power stone challenges and bringing those 5 chapters out, not even taking them as a part of my weekly schedule! I promise a minimum of 5 chapters a week, so you won't be bored a single day! Also, the story development! This part some might find annoying since its in my opinion, a BIG story! It starts of with a feeling of mystery and there being more than what everything seems, but those won't be focused on, since they only blur out the current happenings. I believe that the story is very slow paced, but this aspect will be picking up the pace with each arc. Slowly, but surely, you will notice certain events happening quicker and quicker and before you realise, the pace will be too fast to keep up with. Until then, I hope you enjoy the arcs in between them! Then there's the diverse cast. Or what I hope to be diverse. The monsters are very cliche, same common traits, looks and stereotypes. A few unconventional creatures, but not a lot, all with their own traditions, cultures, characters, attitudes and perceptions on life. I hope they blend colourfully to enthrall you readers! I spent a while thinking about the world (A year) and to be honest, after a bit of chipping and cutting out chaff, it is quite a small one, compared to what i was envisioning at first. It takes place in a small continent in a completely random world that has been altered by the actions of "gods". The land is divided into a few zones, with different races, and other twists and turns, lore and history and the other good stuff I won't be mentioning now. This is it for my review at the end of the 2nd Arc, Chapter 40 something (lol, Idk) In short, enjoy!