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Write a reviewno up? is this novel drop sir?hayssttttt................................................hsjajaknabbzjabsjsjshdibshdojq8xisisvsushshsshsbsbsjksksk donowatodo
hay author kun are you dropping this fanfic I hope you don't because I will hunt you down even you dreams.๐ป I really like your work and I'm a fan so please work hard or just drop it as it's better than having a false hope. ๐
next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next!!! Please don't Drop author?!!!!!!
It's very good..................................................................................................................................
I gotta say I'm proud of myself, I've been able to guess what would of happened more then 20 chapters in with just the "Harem" and "System" tags, like the mc literally just repeating the plot of DxD but just takes care of the enemies easier then issei.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Hi there AUTHOR DONO. first and foremost thank for the amazing work that U are making, I love all the details and characters even some characters that i don't know, you made me look to new and good animes soo thanks a bunch. nevermind,the only discouraging thing about this fan fic is the updating stability please reply on this comment because i really love your work and i don't want to drop it. ๐ on of you greatest fans๐
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1) The author is not on friendly terms with logic. 2) The author lifted with his moronism "until she said in chapter 7" or "remembered what he saw in chapter 2"
Awesome there is a whole lot of randomness everywhere that's what I pike mostly about this and gender bender was so funny for me and overall would be 4.7 for me but I gave a 5 for author's hard work
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Pls don't stop writing The story development is really good and character buil is superb and don't stop writing if Some people don't like the story or comment bad about your story but personally I want you to continue writing and pls update the novel fast, I can't wait to read ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐๐๐
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๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ง๐ช๐ฆ๐ฒ๐ฆ๐ธ๐ฆ๐ฒ๐ฆ๐ธ๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ง๐ฉ๐ฆ๐ผ๐ฆ๐ธ๐ฆ๐ฒ๐ฆ๐น๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐ธ๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐น๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐น๐ฆ๐ฒ๐ฆ๐น๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐น๐ฆ๐ผ๐ฆ๐น๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐น๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐น๐ฆ๐ผ๐ฆ๐ธ๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ฆ๐ด๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฒ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐จ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฒ๐ณ๏ธโ๐๐ฆ๐ช๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ช๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ธ๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ธ๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ง๐ฉ๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ฆ๐ฟ๐ง๐ฉ๐ฆ๐ด๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ฆ๐ธ๐ฆ๐ฟ๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ฆ๐ธ๐ง๐ญ๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฟ๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ด๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ด๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ง๐ฉ๐ง๐ฉ๐ฆ๐ฟ๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ฆ๐ธ๐ฆ๐ด๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ฆ๐ธ๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐บ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฒ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฒ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ด๐ณ๏ธโโง๏ธ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฒ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐บ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฒ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ธ๐ฆ๐ด๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ด๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ด๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฒ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฒ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฝ๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฒ๐ฆ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ด๐ณ๏ธโโง๏ธ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ด๐ฆ๐ฑ๐ฆ๐ท
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im not really into reading a year old being so op I would have considered if he was a teen so I'm holding this for a while. ill be back when there's more chapter cus i don't like reading a 5 year old beating up op characters :))
Great novel, really. congrats, but just a little to slow ( personal opnion, dont like novel with mc child ) pls post more. and little tic mine that its a little anoying, mc uses katana arts try to specify the weapons. (sword means all kinds of sword, and katana its a specific kind ) but great novel, pls dont drop
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As a shameless Author, I would like to give myself 5 stars (So don't mind me :) ). Just to be clear to anyone who not yet see or ignore the synopsis, this is my first time writing and English is not my main language. So I appreciate it if anyone is willing to notify me if there is a grammar wrong as I try to Improve myself into a better writer. Also, feel free to give me some question and suggestion, if the suggestion is good, I will try to apply it in the novel.
no up? is this novel drop sir?hayssttttt................................................hsjajaknabbzjabsjsjshdibshdojq8xisisvsushshsshsbsbsjksksk donowatodo
hay author kun are you dropping this fanfic I hope you don't because I will hunt you down even you dreams.๐ป I really like your work and I'm a fan so please work hard or just drop it as it's better than having a false hope. ๐
next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next!!! Please don't Drop author?!!!!!!
It's very good..................................................................................................................................
I gotta say I'm proud of myself, I've been able to guess what would of happened more then 20 chapters in with just the "Harem" and "System" tags, like the mc literally just repeating the plot of DxD but just takes care of the enemies easier then issei.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Hi there AUTHOR DONO. first and foremost thank for the amazing work that U are making, I love all the details and characters even some characters that i don't know, you made me look to new and good animes soo thanks a bunch. nevermind,the only discouraging thing about this fan fic is the updating stability please reply on this comment because i really love your work and i don't want to drop it. ๐ on of you greatest fans๐
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1) The author is not on friendly terms with logic. 2) The author lifted with his moronism "until she said in chapter 7" or "remembered what he saw in chapter 2"
Awesome there is a whole lot of randomness everywhere that's what I pike mostly about this and gender bender was so funny for me and overall would be 4.7 for me but I gave a 5 for author's hard work
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Pls don't stop writing The story development is really good and character buil is superb and don't stop writing if Some people don't like the story or comment bad about your story but personally I want you to continue writing and pls update the novel fast, I can't wait to read ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐๐๐
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im not really into reading a year old being so op I would have considered if he was a teen so I'm holding this for a while. ill be back when there's more chapter cus i don't like reading a 5 year old beating up op characters :))
Great novel, really. congrats, but just a little to slow ( personal opnion, dont like novel with mc child ) pls post more. and little tic mine that its a little anoying, mc uses katana arts try to specify the weapons. (sword means all kinds of sword, and katana its a specific kind ) but great novel, pls dont drop
Reveal SpoilerHA YOU WERE EXPECTING A SPOILER, BUT IT WAS ME DIO! 8.5/10 book btw. pog, poj, poggers, pojjers, lรจ pog, lรจ poj, _______________________________________
Reveal SpoilerAfter rereading it I give it 5 stars [img=recommend], even though the start is very cringe a bit but I can see you improve in later part, well hope you update more frequently.
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As a shameless Author, I would like to give myself 5 stars (So don't mind me :) ). Just to be clear to anyone who not yet see or ignore the synopsis, this is my first time writing and English is not my main language. So I appreciate it if anyone is willing to notify me if there is a grammar wrong as I try to Improve myself into a better writer. Also, feel free to give me some question and suggestion, if the suggestion is good, I will try to apply it in the novel.