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I thought Eros was the primordial of love, pre-creation, and emotions from Greek mythology, or was it the Eros that was the son of Aphrodite and Ares?π€ Either way, I love the concept of the story, I always disliked certain harem MC's and I'm not ashamed to say I loathe some of them (F*** you Mokoto Itou you dumb indecisive b**t**d! Even WIKI agrees with me that you are a despicable a**h***) and I feels great to at least read them get replaced by someone else that's not as awful as some of them (I'm glaring at you Mokoto-teme you useless pig!) it's a good thing there are some decent harem MC's. Sorry I turned into a rant instead of a reviewπ
I'm sorry but this is unreadable. The quality of the English is basically at the level of a really bad MTL. I've read a lot of novels with questionable grammar and sentence structure but holey moley this novel beats them all. It was so bad I couldn't even get past chapter 1.
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Author, did he move the villagers to his world? If so, only girls? I hope only girls, if there is a male gender, it will ruin the world and ideality. Hello author, you can answer.
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01.09.2020 - 2 ΠΊΡΡΡ 4 ΡΠ΅ΠΌΠ΅ΡΡΡ (Π·Π°Π΄Π°Π½ΠΈΠ΅ Π΄Π»Ρ Π·Π°ΡΠ΅ΡΠ°) Π³ΡΡΠΏΠΏΡ 2 Π’Π ΠΈ 1 Π’ΠΡ 01.09.2020 - 2 ΠΊΡΡΡ 4 ΡΠ΅ΠΌΠ΅ΡΡΡ (Π·Π°Π΄Π°Π½ΠΈΠ΅ Π΄Π»Ρ Π·Π°ΡΠ΅ΡΠ°) Π³ΡΡΠΏΠΏΡ 2 Π’Π ΠΈ 1 Π’ΠΡ 01.09.2020 - 2 ΠΊΡΡΡ 4 ΡΠ΅ΠΌΠ΅ΡΡΡ (Π·Π°Π΄Π°Π½ΠΈΠ΅ Π΄Π»Ρ Π·Π°ΡΠ΅ΡΠ°) Π³ΡΡΠΏΠΏΡ 2 Π’Π ΠΈ 1 Π’ΠΡ 01.09.2020 - 2 ΠΊΡΡΡ 4 ΡΠ΅ΠΌΠ΅ΡΡΡ (Π·Π°Π΄Π°Π½ΠΈΠ΅ Π΄Π»Ρ Π·Π°ΡΠ΅ΡΠ°) Π³ΡΡΠΏΠΏΡ 2 Π’Π ΠΈ 1 Π’ΠΡ
Π‘ΠΏΠ°ΡΠΈΠ±ΠΎ Π°Π²ΡΠΎΡΡ Π·Π° ΡΠ°Π±ΠΎΡΡ) Π‘ΠΏΠ°ΡΠΈΠ±ΠΎ Π°Π²ΡΠΎΡΡ Π·Π° ΡΠ°Π±ΠΎΡΡ) Π‘ΠΏΠ°ΡΠΈΠ±ΠΎ Π°Π²ΡΠΎΡΡ Π·Π° ΡΠ°Π±ΠΎΡΡ) Π‘ΠΏΠ°ΡΠΈΠ±ΠΎ Π°Π²ΡΠΎΡΡ Π·Π° ΡΠ°Π±ΠΎΡΡ) Π‘ΠΏΠ°ΡΠΈΠ±ΠΎ Π°Π²ΡΠΎΡΡ Π·Π° ΡΠ°Π±ΠΎΡΡ) Π‘ΠΏΠ°ΡΠΈΠ±ΠΎ Π°Π²ΡΠΎΡΡ Π·Π° ΡΠ°Π±ΠΎΡΡ) Π‘ΠΏΠ°ΡΠΈΠ±ΠΎ Π°Π²ΡΠΎΡΡ Π·Π° ΡΠ°Π±ΠΎΡΡ)
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I love this fanfic. Very good work author. Not drop ........................................................................................
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I have always been looking for a book like this, no sophisticated things, just an op being getting the women he likes and not living them for others because of the were together in another timeline. Although the grammar can be improved but still thanks.
Good best novel netori and op mc hahahahah Update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update
More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More ππππππππππππππππππ
Awesome so far! Fu*k Mc's who think they are op cuz they came back in the past, Our Mc is gonna NTR all of 'em. What's the next world btw? just curious~
Good best novel netori and op mc hahahahah Update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update
I have always been looking for a book like this, no sophisticated things, just an op being getting the women he likes and not living them for others because of the were together in another timeline. Although the grammar can be improved but still thanks.
I like this novel, but please add Yun Che's women I like this novel, but please add Yun Che's women I like this novel, but please add Yun Che's women
Lanjut jangan di drop nih... Genre netori + op mc Auto jadi favorit orang indo akwkkakaka Lanjut trosss Mangat buat lanjutan chapternya wkwkwkwk good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
look promising fanfic but just 1 chapterπlook forward to the story development.. Btw just suggestions can u add Against the god Wu dong qian kun Battle through the heaven Strike the blood Danmachi Etc????
I like this novel, but please add Yun Che's women I like this novel, but please add Yun Che's women I like this novel, but please add Yun Che's women
WARNING WARNING WARNING MC shares his wives. WARNING WARNING WARNING MC shares his wives. WARNING WARNING WARNING MC shares his wives. WARNING WARNING WARNING MC shares his wives. WARNING WARNING WARNING MC shares his wives.
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Reveal Spoiler I thought Eros was the primordial of love, pre-creation, and emotions from Greek mythology, or was it the Eros that was the son of Aphrodite and Ares?π€ Either way, I love the concept of the story, I always disliked certain harem MC's and I'm not ashamed to say I loathe some of them (F*** you Mokoto Itou you dumb indecisive b**t**d! Even WIKI agrees with me that you are a despicable a**h***) and I feels great to at least read them get replaced by someone else that's not as awful as some of them (I'm glaring at you Mokoto-teme you useless pig!) it's a good thing there are some decent harem MC's. Sorry I turned into a rant instead of a reviewπ
I'm sorry but this is unreadable. The quality of the English is basically at the level of a really bad MTL. I've read a lot of novels with questionable grammar and sentence structure but holey moley this novel beats them all. It was so bad I couldn't even get past chapter 1.
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Author, did he move the villagers to his world? If so, only girls? I hope only girls, if there is a male gender, it will ruin the world and ideality. Hello author, you can answer.
A good harem fanfic with multi world travelling.ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
I like it . aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaakakakakkakakakkakkkakkakkakakkakakakakakakakakkakakakakakakaakakakakakakkaakakakkakkaakakkaakkaakakakakakakakaakakak
01.09.2020 - 2 ΠΊΡΡΡ 4 ΡΠ΅ΠΌΠ΅ΡΡΡ (Π·Π°Π΄Π°Π½ΠΈΠ΅ Π΄Π»Ρ Π·Π°ΡΠ΅ΡΠ°) Π³ΡΡΠΏΠΏΡ 2 Π’Π ΠΈ 1 Π’ΠΡ 01.09.2020 - 2 ΠΊΡΡΡ 4 ΡΠ΅ΠΌΠ΅ΡΡΡ (Π·Π°Π΄Π°Π½ΠΈΠ΅ Π΄Π»Ρ Π·Π°ΡΠ΅ΡΠ°) Π³ΡΡΠΏΠΏΡ 2 Π’Π ΠΈ 1 Π’ΠΡ 01.09.2020 - 2 ΠΊΡΡΡ 4 ΡΠ΅ΠΌΠ΅ΡΡΡ (Π·Π°Π΄Π°Π½ΠΈΠ΅ Π΄Π»Ρ Π·Π°ΡΠ΅ΡΠ°) Π³ΡΡΠΏΠΏΡ 2 Π’Π ΠΈ 1 Π’ΠΡ 01.09.2020 - 2 ΠΊΡΡΡ 4 ΡΠ΅ΠΌΠ΅ΡΡΡ (Π·Π°Π΄Π°Π½ΠΈΠ΅ Π΄Π»Ρ Π·Π°ΡΠ΅ΡΠ°) Π³ΡΡΠΏΠΏΡ 2 Π’Π ΠΈ 1 Π’ΠΡ
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I love this fanfic. Very good work author. Not drop ........................................................................................
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SI 00011111010110101010101010101010101010011001010101001101010101010101001010101010101010101010101101010101010101010101010101010101101100101010101010101101011011010010200010100100010101101001101001
I have always been looking for a book like this, no sophisticated things, just an op being getting the women he likes and not living them for others because of the were together in another timeline. Although the grammar can be improved but still thanks.
Good best novel netori and op mc hahahahah Update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update
More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More ππππππππππππππππππ
Awesome so far! Fu*k Mc's who think they are op cuz they came back in the past, Our Mc is gonna NTR all of 'em. What's the next world btw? just curious~
Good best novel netori and op mc hahahahah Update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update
I have always been looking for a book like this, no sophisticated things, just an op being getting the women he likes and not living them for others because of the were together in another timeline. Although the grammar can be improved but still thanks.
I like this novel, but please add Yun Che's women I like this novel, but please add Yun Che's women I like this novel, but please add Yun Che's women
Lanjut jangan di drop nih... Genre netori + op mc Auto jadi favorit orang indo akwkkakaka Lanjut trosss Mangat buat lanjutan chapternya wkwkwkwk good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
look promising fanfic but just 1 chapterπlook forward to the story development.. Btw just suggestions can u add Against the god Wu dong qian kun Battle through the heaven Strike the blood Danmachi Etc????
I like this novel, but please add Yun Che's women I like this novel, but please add Yun Che's women I like this novel, but please add Yun Che's women
WARNING WARNING WARNING MC shares his wives. WARNING WARNING WARNING MC shares his wives. WARNING WARNING WARNING MC shares his wives. WARNING WARNING WARNING MC shares his wives. WARNING WARNING WARNING MC shares his wives.