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For a danmachi FF, its not weird,,,,pretty decent eng and ****. The MC seems to be a normal danmachi SI MC. meaning. Shy around chicks, easily flustered, a hero. Just went through some extremely traumatic **** but the author ignores it...ie; this dude was killed and woke up in a fantasy world, but reading this, u wont know this, its like he dosnt even remember what happened. And reading MC's personality, and the 3 Chps this is anime perspective....completely disregards the dark **** [ also I suggest author dosnt try to add dark **** cause it wont exactly suit the tone of the bk u've built so far ] IDK, hopefully u wont do generic damanchi FF **** and go weird. GL **: Danmanchi is a fked up world, the gods are more or less manipulative cunts, if not sluts or both and more or less looks at anything other than themselves as toys. Child slavery, child prostitution and murder are more or less the norm. The characters are all arrogant idiots, or heroic retards, like decent characters like bell, hestia...more or less completely ignores the fked up **** that happens. Point is, its a fked up world. its lawless and unless u OP from the start u screwed
For a danmachi FF, its not weird,,,,pretty decent eng and ****. The MC seems to be a normal danmachi SI MC. meaning. Shy around chicks, easily flustered, a hero. Just went through some extremely traumatic **** but the author ignores it...ie; this dude was killed and woke up in a fantasy world, but reading this, u wont know this, its like he dosnt even remember what happened. And reading MC's personality, and the 3 Chps this is anime perspective....completely disregards the dark **** [ also I suggest author dosnt try to add dark **** cause it wont exactly suit the tone of the bk u've built so far ] IDK, hopefully u wont do generic damanchi FF **** and go weird. GL **: Danmanchi is a fked up world, the gods are more or less manipulative cunts, if not sluts or both and more or less looks at anything other than themselves as toys. Child slavery, child prostitution and murder are more or less the norm. The characters are all arrogant idiots, or heroic retards, like decent characters like bell, hestia...more or less completely ignores the fked up **** that happens. Point is, its a fked up world. its lawless and unless u OP from the start u screwed