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As far as i've read the story is a decent read the only real problem i have with the story is the occasional odd word choice and the constant flipping of He/She Him/Her.
Really good and definitely worth the read and I hope the author keeps writing this so anyway keep going so I can give energy stones hahaha 😉 😊 😀 😄 ☺ 🙂 😉 😊 😀 😄 ☺ 🙂 😉 😊 😀
hello everyone, I'm the one responsible for the creation of this fanfiction, this is the second novel I'm trying to write. I hope this doesn't turn out like my previous series 'rebirth in naruto world'. for those of you who are wondering whether the previous novel will be continued or not, then the answer is yes. but I won't post it right away because there really wasn't a schedule for it from the start. This series is arguably my main project at this time. I realize that my English skills are very limited, though from the start this project was created to improve my English language skills. hope U like this fanfiction. [img=update]
As far as i've read the story is a decent read the only real problem i have with the story is the occasional odd word choice and the constant flipping of He/She Him/Her.
Really good and definitely worth the read and I hope the author keeps writing this so anyway keep going so I can give energy stones hahaha 😉 😊 😀 😄 ☺ 🙂 😉 😊 😀 😄 ☺ 🙂 😉 😊 😀
hello everyone, I'm the one responsible for the creation of this fanfiction, this is the second novel I'm trying to write. I hope this doesn't turn out like my previous series 'rebirth in naruto world'. for those of you who are wondering whether the previous novel will be continued or not, then the answer is yes. but I won't post it right away because there really wasn't a schedule for it from the start. This series is arguably my main project at this time. I realize that my English skills are very limited, though from the start this project was created to improve my English language skills. hope U like this fanfiction. [img=update]