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This is another great book from the author. It really make me want to read more as i continued to read more chapters until the chapter for sword and other techniques, and magic! Looking forward for more chapters
Just like a chinese series! I like ot and support it! Hope to see more stories from you author! I recommend this book to everyone out there.
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I'm very sorry everyone! Today's date is 17 October 2020 and I'm going to pause my first Volume of this story... I have been pirated by some guy called Cory Branton acting like he is the owner of my story! But I hope that story will be reported and taken down... he pirated this story on 14 October 2020 so just three days ago... To those who read my story, I'm sorry once again :(
This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505
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woww this author has a great way with describing his character's and that's so cool I loved the storyline I love the character's and their story it is great, interesting and entertaining
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i will give it a 5 star. Even though this is not my fav genre, it was intriguing. The author definitely put a lot of effort in them, the plots and descriptions are on point. The development of the plot keep us reading! Good job Author! Keep it up, don't be discourage!
I'm helping myself by putting a review on it so please no hate... I love my story and I enjoy it, I need your support and please help me! Support my story guys and I'll be more motivated!
this book is so good! it's storyline got me really hooked. it's my cup of tea! good job author! you have such a wide and wonderful imagination!
Actually, the story before had lotS of grammatical errors until just now. The chapters are now Incredible and very nice! I enjoy the story and like to Share the world i saw in this story! I heard also the author Is practicing to draw his own manhwa! I love to see The arts the aUthor will make🥰🥰
The story is a promising one. The characters are well defined like Mathew, just have some minor gramatical error but overall it is good to read.
I love the storyline although I've got no idea about the seven seas. The story is well developed and i love how the characters are display. I would totally read it.
I LOVE THIS BOOK SO MUCH! PLEASE POST MORE CHAPTERS! I NEED THEM FOR MY WELL BEING! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I'm not familiar with the 7 seas, but I find this book really interesting. To the author, please post more chapters. [img=update][img=update][img=update]
What an interesting synopsis, that was one of the many reasons I was drawn to this book. I'm hopeful that the wonderful author can post more chapters!
Impressive story, update more often, and you’ll definitely get more reads. The book is really interesting and seems really promising. Oh and the grammar is spot on. 👍[img=update]
It has good plot and no plot holes which is nice. And also it's consistent in its world build-up. It's good with character development too. I only have a few complains: 1. Grammar needs improvement. Punctuation is important. 2. Too fast. The plot moves super fast and sometimes it's confusing. And it's even more confusing when one character has like, 3 names. That's it. besides this, it's a great read.
Tbh, I love the book. This is usually the writing style I like. But! But, that doesn't mean that other readers will like it. Lemme tell you why! First is the synopsis! You don't have too put that much info dump on the first thing your reader will read. They will immediately get bored out of it or basically ignored it. What I recommend you to do is just make it more simple and mysterious. This way, you can arouse your reader's curiosity and at the same time make it easier to understand Second is the story itself. Just like the first reason, too much info dump. This is the problem when your setting is a fantasy world. Make it shorter and descriptive as possible. Avoid repeating the same adjectives and nouns. Use their synonyms instead. Plus, grammatical errors are found including the tenses. You often mix it up probably. Lastly is the fighting scenes and other things that need in-depth explanations. Basically, you sometimes overestimate the descriptions or you are stating the obvious. Please refrain from biasing your mc. If the first sentence describes how a sword pierces the arm, you don't have to add nonsense like, the arm was bleeding. Why? The reader can picture out the bleeding part you are telling too. Instead, add some excitement to it. For example, 'His arm was pierced by a sword. And the pain inflicted in it caused his body to lose control for a split-second'. This way, you can open up a lot of possibilities in the next fighting scene. Your readers will have a hard time determining the future and the excitement will make them more attached to the book Overall, this book has potential. If you have any questions directly ask me in discord.
Pretty cool because thw story goes so fast that it entertains me. each chapter has some exciting events In it. i love the latest Chapters and it really hypes things up. reccomend this book to those patient readers
one you get to read the latest chapters, it gets really sicK and pretty cool. the author also hands out preferrence in his own server To let Us imagine what the characters look like. i reccommend this Book and love it
I really liked the description by author, it's really good. Just some little grammar problems other than that awesome story. I think you can write quite well so keep on writing and update soon..
The story really caught my interest. This seems really promising. Though I am not that familiar with the 7 seas, the intro has given me the needed information. The plot is somehow smooth sailing(no pun intended). The characters have their distinct traits and they're likeable.
My honest review: It doesn't seem exciting to me. Not saying that it's exciting to less people, its just in my opinion doesn't interest me. Grammar needs some work, and I think you gotta work on action scenes. Don't just state stuff like "A KNIFE WENT THROUGH HIS HEAD" because... It's kind of boring. Stating the obvious. If all of these problems were solved, it would make a great story. That's my opinion. Good work, otherwise.
What an impressive world based on the 7 seas! The characters are all really properly fleshed out and you feel like you want to associate all about their backstories just from the way they communicate, principally once the seal is disintegrated. Please continue writing!
So, let's just keep it short and straight, it is well-paced, twists and turns are nice, characters all have their unique traits highlighted. the story is improving nicely, which overall makes it a good novel. Note for author: You did a good job.
It'd be good if you left some spacing for your synopsis. Its current state is pretty compact and reading it is a little hard since you read it and suddenly you can easily loose track of where you stop. The story however seems promising. There was just one part where I was a little confused. I thought the MC was heavily injured in chapter 1, how was he able to run and sneak around towards the end of chapter 1?😂 Maybe I'm wrong.
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This is another great book from the author. It really make me want to read more as i continued to read more chapters until the chapter for sword and other techniques, and magic! Looking forward for more chapters
Just like a chinese series! I like ot and support it! Hope to see more stories from you author! I recommend this book to everyone out there.
Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email kenreview@outlook.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
I'm very sorry everyone! Today's date is 17 October 2020 and I'm going to pause my first Volume of this story... I have been pirated by some guy called Cory Branton acting like he is the owner of my story! But I hope that story will be reported and taken down... he pirated this story on 14 October 2020 so just three days ago... To those who read my story, I'm sorry once again :(
This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505
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woww this author has a great way with describing his character's and that's so cool I loved the storyline I love the character's and their story it is great, interesting and entertaining
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
i will give it a 5 star. Even though this is not my fav genre, it was intriguing. The author definitely put a lot of effort in them, the plots and descriptions are on point. The development of the plot keep us reading! Good job Author! Keep it up, don't be discourage!
I'm helping myself by putting a review on it so please no hate... I love my story and I enjoy it, I need your support and please help me! Support my story guys and I'll be more motivated!
this book is so good! it's storyline got me really hooked. it's my cup of tea! good job author! you have such a wide and wonderful imagination!
Actually, the story before had lotS of grammatical errors until just now. The chapters are now Incredible and very nice! I enjoy the story and like to Share the world i saw in this story! I heard also the author Is practicing to draw his own manhwa! I love to see The arts the aUthor will make🥰🥰
The story is a promising one. The characters are well defined like Mathew, just have some minor gramatical error but overall it is good to read.
I love the storyline although I've got no idea about the seven seas. The story is well developed and i love how the characters are display. I would totally read it.
I LOVE THIS BOOK SO MUCH! PLEASE POST MORE CHAPTERS! I NEED THEM FOR MY WELL BEING! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I'm not familiar with the 7 seas, but I find this book really interesting. To the author, please post more chapters. [img=update][img=update][img=update]
What an interesting synopsis, that was one of the many reasons I was drawn to this book. I'm hopeful that the wonderful author can post more chapters!
Impressive story, update more often, and you’ll definitely get more reads. The book is really interesting and seems really promising. Oh and the grammar is spot on. 👍[img=update]
It has good plot and no plot holes which is nice. And also it's consistent in its world build-up. It's good with character development too. I only have a few complains: 1. Grammar needs improvement. Punctuation is important. 2. Too fast. The plot moves super fast and sometimes it's confusing. And it's even more confusing when one character has like, 3 names. That's it. besides this, it's a great read.
Tbh, I love the book. This is usually the writing style I like. But! But, that doesn't mean that other readers will like it. Lemme tell you why! First is the synopsis! You don't have too put that much info dump on the first thing your reader will read. They will immediately get bored out of it or basically ignored it. What I recommend you to do is just make it more simple and mysterious. This way, you can arouse your reader's curiosity and at the same time make it easier to understand Second is the story itself. Just like the first reason, too much info dump. This is the problem when your setting is a fantasy world. Make it shorter and descriptive as possible. Avoid repeating the same adjectives and nouns. Use their synonyms instead. Plus, grammatical errors are found including the tenses. You often mix it up probably. Lastly is the fighting scenes and other things that need in-depth explanations. Basically, you sometimes overestimate the descriptions or you are stating the obvious. Please refrain from biasing your mc. If the first sentence describes how a sword pierces the arm, you don't have to add nonsense like, the arm was bleeding. Why? The reader can picture out the bleeding part you are telling too. Instead, add some excitement to it. For example, 'His arm was pierced by a sword. And the pain inflicted in it caused his body to lose control for a split-second'. This way, you can open up a lot of possibilities in the next fighting scene. Your readers will have a hard time determining the future and the excitement will make them more attached to the book Overall, this book has potential. If you have any questions directly ask me in discord.
Pretty cool because thw story goes so fast that it entertains me. each chapter has some exciting events In it. i love the latest Chapters and it really hypes things up. reccomend this book to those patient readers
one you get to read the latest chapters, it gets really sicK and pretty cool. the author also hands out preferrence in his own server To let Us imagine what the characters look like. i reccommend this Book and love it
I really liked the description by author, it's really good. Just some little grammar problems other than that awesome story. I think you can write quite well so keep on writing and update soon..
The story really caught my interest. This seems really promising. Though I am not that familiar with the 7 seas, the intro has given me the needed information. The plot is somehow smooth sailing(no pun intended). The characters have their distinct traits and they're likeable.
My honest review: It doesn't seem exciting to me. Not saying that it's exciting to less people, its just in my opinion doesn't interest me. Grammar needs some work, and I think you gotta work on action scenes. Don't just state stuff like "A KNIFE WENT THROUGH HIS HEAD" because... It's kind of boring. Stating the obvious. If all of these problems were solved, it would make a great story. That's my opinion. Good work, otherwise.
What an impressive world based on the 7 seas! The characters are all really properly fleshed out and you feel like you want to associate all about their backstories just from the way they communicate, principally once the seal is disintegrated. Please continue writing!
So, let's just keep it short and straight, it is well-paced, twists and turns are nice, characters all have their unique traits highlighted. the story is improving nicely, which overall makes it a good novel. Note for author: You did a good job.
It'd be good if you left some spacing for your synopsis. Its current state is pretty compact and reading it is a little hard since you read it and suddenly you can easily loose track of where you stop. The story however seems promising. There was just one part where I was a little confused. I thought the MC was heavily injured in chapter 1, how was he able to run and sneak around towards the end of chapter 1?😂 Maybe I'm wrong.
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