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This is not a hate review, just an honest one. honestly, everything was good apart from the mc being THAT OP in a span of 40 years or so. Author, I suggest you to not read much comments in the chapters and write what you feel like for the plot to move on fluidly, since you're most likely pressured by the other readers. Remember, its YOUR story, YOU are the one who decides at the end. If you're out of Ideas, put a non chapter poll for votes etc.. -Peace, a random shitty author (me).
well volume one i really liked but volume 2 its went out the window ... the story was all over the place and author did a really bad skip and kept going like it didnt matter with now explanation. so i dropped it. i leave it yall to do what you want but v1 was worth a read... read v2 at your own risk lol
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overall I thought that the beginning of the story was great. it had it's ups and down but that rings true for every story. I enjoy watching the MC get Stronger. The whole story though took a drastic fall after he got teleported away while fighting the black dragon. after that point, the story just sucked tbh .So much happen without much explanation for my liking. Plus there wasn't any mentioning of aiz or aria after they teleport for a few chapters. I dropped this story at ch 36 because I didn't like the way the author wrote it. Its like he got lazy and just said screw it and started writing random events. which disappointed me because he had an excellent story building going and then it turned into a smorgasbord. Overall the first half of this story I enjoyed. Though unfortunately I had to drop it because I no longer was interested after the teleportation. It's like the author wrote the first half and then someone took over for the other half. Anyways, the story WAS enjoyable. I like the character development. The plot was good. So yeah 3 stars.
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This is not a hate review, just an honest one. honestly, everything was good apart from the mc being THAT OP in a span of 40 years or so. Author, I suggest you to not read much comments in the chapters and write what you feel like for the plot to move on fluidly, since you're most likely pressured by the other readers. Remember, its YOUR story, YOU are the one who decides at the end. If you're out of Ideas, put a non chapter poll for votes etc.. -Peace, a random shitty author (me).
well volume one i really liked but volume 2 its went out the window ... the story was all over the place and author did a really bad skip and kept going like it didnt matter with now explanation. so i dropped it. i leave it yall to do what you want but v1 was worth a read... read v2 at your own risk lol
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overall I thought that the beginning of the story was great. it had it's ups and down but that rings true for every story. I enjoy watching the MC get Stronger. The whole story though took a drastic fall after he got teleported away while fighting the black dragon. after that point, the story just sucked tbh .So much happen without much explanation for my liking. Plus there wasn't any mentioning of aiz or aria after they teleport for a few chapters. I dropped this story at ch 36 because I didn't like the way the author wrote it. Its like he got lazy and just said screw it and started writing random events. which disappointed me because he had an excellent story building going and then it turned into a smorgasbord. Overall the first half of this story I enjoyed. Though unfortunately I had to drop it because I no longer was interested after the teleportation. It's like the author wrote the first half and then someone took over for the other half. Anyways, the story WAS enjoyable. I like the character development. The plot was good. So yeah 3 stars.
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