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AnnabelleXP

Whyyyy in the literal mc frick did it end so quickly?!?!?!!!!! I NEEEEED MOOORE! Author how could you do this to meeee and my fellow readers! Why would you let me hang from the roots of that cliff(hanger) you just pushed me off of like that! When will you come baaaack with more my poor self cant stand this anymoreee! (Its only been like five seconds sonce i finished reading so far but still!) 😫😭♥️this book is too perfect 👌🏻 i cannot live without it so i shall hang off the roots of this cliffhanger till it returns♥️

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Elizabeth_Gomarga

I really like this story and novel, It’S make me learn to improve my english skill also very entertaining !!! LOVE IT SO SO SO MUCHH !!! U GUYS MUCH READ THIS !! 😘😘😘

4yr
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YawningBrain

I am amazed! I got so seriously hooked in your novel, so yeah it is now in my library. The growth of the main character through every chapter is fascinating, but the main lead is my favorite. I really love him. Your world background and the character design really impressed me. The flow of the plot is great, it keeps you wanting for more, but enjoying the cute little moments from the leads. Readers this is totally worthy! Please keep up with the good work author! I for sure follow your story.

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Nekonigiri001

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this because the girl is not stupid despite being weak, she knows when not to trust people, when to ask for help, knows her place (worried she overstayed etc), and her fear of people was understandable. All her actions comes with a reason. i have yet to find out why andrew tends to pop out here and there.

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EmpRabbit

First of all, I don't usually read romance novels but your got me hooked from the first chapters. The way you narrate things is definitely on my liking. Aside from a few edits needed here and there I think this is very good. Well done, author!

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Gery_
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Well I was here before, so I read the new chapters and I can say it's as amazing as always. The plot, vocab, grammer and everything else is much much better, so nice job and keep it up!

4yr
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Kid_Phantom

I'm loving this book, the characters are interesting especially my boi alpha and violet like there relationship I'm loving it yo, the writing is lovely, the pacing is not too fast or slow it's just right. Each time I read I new chapter the more intrigued I am. This novel is amazing I'm recommending this to all my friends like give this book a read yo you willn't regret it!!!!!!!

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Xylesia

this story is so intriguing. I've only read a couple of chapters and I'm honestly hooked by it. The start of the story was quite painful to read but I understand why it needed to be there. the development of the story is good and I like the chemistry between the leads. Honestly, I can't wait for the upcoming chapters. Thank you so much for your hard work!

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Book_lover36

Such a good book!!!!!!!!

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winterdaisy55

Hi there! The author here! I just wanted to thank you all for giving my book a chance, and I hope I can meet all of your expectations of this book! I am also shamelessly rating my book because why not 😂

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Gery_
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Amazing plot, amazing characters and amazing vocab and style! For those who loves wolfs and romance, it's a must read! Keep up the good work!!

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nessiaart

Ok, so can I say I genuinely love this book?! I love how you have very unconventional relationships in your story and I keep asking what's next? It's so interesting seeing something out of the ordinary. Please do keep writing I love your writing style and concepts

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MidGard

This is such a good novel to read, I enjoyed everything that I have read! Please continue releasing!

4yr
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RJMidnight

I’m not a fan of romance, at all, but imI always give a honest review even if the story isn’t my cup if tea. First off, good story and writing. You know how to keep a reader engaged. Although the long paragraphs in the beginning threw me off, cut them a little (long paragraphs can get overwhelming). There were tiny grammar mistakes, but it did not mess up the story at all. Your pacing is good and thank you for not automatically putting them together. When it comes to mate stories, especially wolves, some authors like to write the mates getting together right then and there cause they are mated. No, the couple needs to learn each other and spend time together before getting together. So I applaud you for that. Other than that, even though I couldn’t get into the story cause it is romance, you are doing a fine job. Keep up the good work!

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Shionokami

Ok a romance story with wolves? sign me up!! I love romance stories and if my pen name is anything to go by it's easy to get that i love wolves and when im presented with a story with these two things i can't help but dive right in, the story is great not to slow not to fast, the pace is on the point, the characters interresting, and the writing just wonderful chefs kiss right here! To anyone reading this review, go read this your missing out! Now if you excuse me, i have to finish reding this gem here. Keep it going Author!!

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YennuiXiel

I like-- i mean i really like the story and the plot and especially because it's romance kyahhh and it made me wish i do have a mate tooo kyahhh~`

4yr
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LyingCrowPromises

Oof, you left me with a cliffhanger. This was a good story to read, even though it has such violent things in it, I think I can still describe it as mellow. Maybe because the ML is gentle and their interaction when they're not in the human form. I already have some suspicions about the female lead's ancestry, but I won't delve into it. The writing quality was pretty decent, but you still have some minor mistakes, like punctuation or wrong pronouns. The story development is decent and I liked it quite a lot, the only thing that bugs me is fl's tendency to get into trouble. I do understand it's a part of the story, but still, it seems too much. Tbh, I'd like it that in the end she either leaves to live in the cottage in the forest alone or with just ml if she accepts him. She shouldn't be in a golden cage. Character design is nice, I like andrew and Bob the most, they're the kind of guys you'd want to be your friends and maybe even SO. Well, ML is the lead, so nothing will happen with them, unfortunately...(give them too a nice girl/boy?) FL is a trouble magnet but that's not a character trait, so I will tell you that I'm satisfied with her personality. Despite being only 17 and tortured for years, she has the will to live and wants to be independent. She actually tries to improve, but she's inexperienced when it comes to many things. She also has a mature character, I'd like to see her growth. The world background wasn't the clearest. To be honest, until the carriage chapter, I really thought the story was contemporary. It might be my fault since I didn't look at all of the tags before reading. Anyway, I don't have anything against it, and I can say that I enjoyed reading this. Keep it up!

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SolAce

Truly a great book. I’ve read alpha wolf books with their mate, but this is not only with romance but also a hint of mystery, which makes me want to continue reading more. 5 stars from me ! Keep up the good work author ! (╹◡╹)♡

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Immortal_eve4

The plot is very intriguing and the story is good but it needs some polishing. You did a great job with your character descriptions with Luke abd Violet. Keep up the great job and I can't wait to read more chapters :)

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AnairaG72

First off, I'm not a big fan of werewolves, if anything I'm more into vampires but this novel might actually change my mind :> Kudos to the author for creating a very interesting and intriguing read!

4yr
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Cotton_Candy_4899

Damn you that father. Damn everyone except for Mom and Anna. Now I'm pleased to see werewolfs 🤣 Great writing btw. It managed to get my attention even before reading the past few sentences. It's bery engaging and wholesome. I feel confuse whether to be sad, angry or relief. That must be what the main character felt.

4yr
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Miss_Justice

This novel is the most amazing novel that I have read so far! I was really looking for a novel that could bring me to the sky just by his words and sentences, but now I had found it! I love the novel! And I'm itching for more chapters! I want more chapters!!!

4yr
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Aryna_Stan

I love it, it's like the writer took a glass bowl, added a bit of Cinderella, some little red Riding Hood and an Alpha mate in and mixed it all with a sparkly wand! It's that good. I'm hooked already!

4yr
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shalujk

Wow! Done with the story! I must say I really love it!! I'm not really a fan of werewolf story but I must say I love this one! It's really interesting from the start! I love the mysterious opening XD! Keep going!

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LinYang

The writing quality of this story improved dramatically after the first few chapters. For the later chapters I found no grammatical errors. Props to the author! The premise is interesting, and the author wastes no time getting the plot moving. Looking forward to more development of characters and world :)

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Xxxxxxxxxxx024

Werewolf novels i love. Its been a while since i read one and a refreshingly interesting one at that, a whole new plot with mysteries involved, i like it. I enjoyed reading your novel.

4yr
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EldritchTheDead

I like how the first chapter starts, as it exudes the hardships of the protagonist that can grip the curious minds of it's readers. It appeals to the emotions which people can sympathize to. But most of all I like the foreshadowing of the Lone wolf with read eyes that makes an appearance later at the end, as a man with red eyes. Definitely commendable and worth reading. Best wishes to you author, hope you'll keep on writing.

4yr
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Jhema
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Greetings to the author! Werewolves!!!! This is amazing so far. I'm really loving the flow and how the story develops. I do hope you continue. I'll stick around. Kudos!

4yr
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AnnabelleXP

Whyyyy in the literal mc frick did it end so quickly?!?!?!!!!! I NEEEEED MOOORE! Author how could you do this to meeee and my fellow readers! Why would you let me hang from the roots of that cliff(hanger) you just pushed me off of like that! When will you come baaaack with more my poor self cant stand this anymoreee! (Its only been like five seconds sonce i finished reading so far but still!) 😫😭♥️this book is too perfect 👌🏻 i cannot live without it so i shall hang off the roots of this cliffhanger till it returns♥️

4yr
View 3 Replies
Elizabeth_Gomarga

I really like this story and novel, It’S make me learn to improve my english skill also very entertaining !!! LOVE IT SO SO SO MUCHH !!! U GUYS MUCH READ THIS !! 😘😘😘

4yr
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YawningBrain

I am amazed! I got so seriously hooked in your novel, so yeah it is now in my library. The growth of the main character through every chapter is fascinating, but the main lead is my favorite. I really love him. Your world background and the character design really impressed me. The flow of the plot is great, it keeps you wanting for more, but enjoying the cute little moments from the leads. Readers this is totally worthy! Please keep up with the good work author! I for sure follow your story.

4yr
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Nekonigiri001

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this because the girl is not stupid despite being weak, she knows when not to trust people, when to ask for help, knows her place (worried she overstayed etc), and her fear of people was understandable. All her actions comes with a reason. i have yet to find out why andrew tends to pop out here and there.

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4yr
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EmpRabbit

First of all, I don't usually read romance novels but your got me hooked from the first chapters. The way you narrate things is definitely on my liking. Aside from a few edits needed here and there I think this is very good. Well done, author!

4yr
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Gery_
LV 14 Badge

Well I was here before, so I read the new chapters and I can say it's as amazing as always. The plot, vocab, grammer and everything else is much much better, so nice job and keep it up!

4yr
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Kid_Phantom

I'm loving this book, the characters are interesting especially my boi alpha and violet like there relationship I'm loving it yo, the writing is lovely, the pacing is not too fast or slow it's just right. Each time I read I new chapter the more intrigued I am. This novel is amazing I'm recommending this to all my friends like give this book a read yo you willn't regret it!!!!!!!

4yr
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Xylesia

this story is so intriguing. I've only read a couple of chapters and I'm honestly hooked by it. The start of the story was quite painful to read but I understand why it needed to be there. the development of the story is good and I like the chemistry between the leads. Honestly, I can't wait for the upcoming chapters. Thank you so much for your hard work!

4yr
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Book_lover36

Such a good book!!!!!!!!

4yr
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winterdaisy55

Hi there! The author here! I just wanted to thank you all for giving my book a chance, and I hope I can meet all of your expectations of this book! I am also shamelessly rating my book because why not 😂

4yr
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Gery_
LV 14 Badge

Amazing plot, amazing characters and amazing vocab and style! For those who loves wolfs and romance, it's a must read! Keep up the good work!!

4yr
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nessiaart

Ok, so can I say I genuinely love this book?! I love how you have very unconventional relationships in your story and I keep asking what's next? It's so interesting seeing something out of the ordinary. Please do keep writing I love your writing style and concepts

4yr
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MidGard

This is such a good novel to read, I enjoyed everything that I have read! Please continue releasing!

4yr
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RJMidnight

I’m not a fan of romance, at all, but imI always give a honest review even if the story isn’t my cup if tea. First off, good story and writing. You know how to keep a reader engaged. Although the long paragraphs in the beginning threw me off, cut them a little (long paragraphs can get overwhelming). There were tiny grammar mistakes, but it did not mess up the story at all. Your pacing is good and thank you for not automatically putting them together. When it comes to mate stories, especially wolves, some authors like to write the mates getting together right then and there cause they are mated. No, the couple needs to learn each other and spend time together before getting together. So I applaud you for that. Other than that, even though I couldn’t get into the story cause it is romance, you are doing a fine job. Keep up the good work!

4yr
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Shionokami

Ok a romance story with wolves? sign me up!! I love romance stories and if my pen name is anything to go by it's easy to get that i love wolves and when im presented with a story with these two things i can't help but dive right in, the story is great not to slow not to fast, the pace is on the point, the characters interresting, and the writing just wonderful chefs kiss right here! To anyone reading this review, go read this your missing out! Now if you excuse me, i have to finish reding this gem here. Keep it going Author!!

4yr
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YennuiXiel

I like-- i mean i really like the story and the plot and especially because it's romance kyahhh and it made me wish i do have a mate tooo kyahhh~`

4yr
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LyingCrowPromises

Oof, you left me with a cliffhanger. This was a good story to read, even though it has such violent things in it, I think I can still describe it as mellow. Maybe because the ML is gentle and their interaction when they're not in the human form. I already have some suspicions about the female lead's ancestry, but I won't delve into it. The writing quality was pretty decent, but you still have some minor mistakes, like punctuation or wrong pronouns. The story development is decent and I liked it quite a lot, the only thing that bugs me is fl's tendency to get into trouble. I do understand it's a part of the story, but still, it seems too much. Tbh, I'd like it that in the end she either leaves to live in the cottage in the forest alone or with just ml if she accepts him. She shouldn't be in a golden cage. Character design is nice, I like andrew and Bob the most, they're the kind of guys you'd want to be your friends and maybe even SO. Well, ML is the lead, so nothing will happen with them, unfortunately...(give them too a nice girl/boy?) FL is a trouble magnet but that's not a character trait, so I will tell you that I'm satisfied with her personality. Despite being only 17 and tortured for years, she has the will to live and wants to be independent. She actually tries to improve, but she's inexperienced when it comes to many things. She also has a mature character, I'd like to see her growth. The world background wasn't the clearest. To be honest, until the carriage chapter, I really thought the story was contemporary. It might be my fault since I didn't look at all of the tags before reading. Anyway, I don't have anything against it, and I can say that I enjoyed reading this. Keep it up!

4yr
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SolAce

Truly a great book. I’ve read alpha wolf books with their mate, but this is not only with romance but also a hint of mystery, which makes me want to continue reading more. 5 stars from me ! Keep up the good work author ! (╹◡╹)♡

4yr
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Immortal_eve4

The plot is very intriguing and the story is good but it needs some polishing. You did a great job with your character descriptions with Luke abd Violet. Keep up the great job and I can't wait to read more chapters :)

4yr
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AnairaG72

First off, I'm not a big fan of werewolves, if anything I'm more into vampires but this novel might actually change my mind :> Kudos to the author for creating a very interesting and intriguing read!

4yr
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Cotton_Candy_4899

Damn you that father. Damn everyone except for Mom and Anna. Now I'm pleased to see werewolfs 🤣 Great writing btw. It managed to get my attention even before reading the past few sentences. It's bery engaging and wholesome. I feel confuse whether to be sad, angry or relief. That must be what the main character felt.

4yr
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Miss_Justice

This novel is the most amazing novel that I have read so far! I was really looking for a novel that could bring me to the sky just by his words and sentences, but now I had found it! I love the novel! And I'm itching for more chapters! I want more chapters!!!

4yr
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Aryna_Stan

I love it, it's like the writer took a glass bowl, added a bit of Cinderella, some little red Riding Hood and an Alpha mate in and mixed it all with a sparkly wand! It's that good. I'm hooked already!

4yr
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shalujk

Wow! Done with the story! I must say I really love it!! I'm not really a fan of werewolf story but I must say I love this one! It's really interesting from the start! I love the mysterious opening XD! Keep going!

4yr
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LinYang

The writing quality of this story improved dramatically after the first few chapters. For the later chapters I found no grammatical errors. Props to the author! The premise is interesting, and the author wastes no time getting the plot moving. Looking forward to more development of characters and world :)

4yr
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Xxxxxxxxxxx024

Werewolf novels i love. Its been a while since i read one and a refreshingly interesting one at that, a whole new plot with mysteries involved, i like it. I enjoyed reading your novel.

4yr
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EldritchTheDead

I like how the first chapter starts, as it exudes the hardships of the protagonist that can grip the curious minds of it's readers. It appeals to the emotions which people can sympathize to. But most of all I like the foreshadowing of the Lone wolf with read eyes that makes an appearance later at the end, as a man with red eyes. Definitely commendable and worth reading. Best wishes to you author, hope you'll keep on writing.

4yr
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Jhema
LV 2 Badge

Greetings to the author! Werewolves!!!! This is amazing so far. I'm really loving the flow and how the story develops. I do hope you continue. I'll stick around. Kudos!

4yr
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