Reviews of One Piece: Another Chance (Completed) by Monkey_Godking - Webnovel

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Roktah

yea i don't like this at all. so the mc wipes his memories of his past life, thats cool, to start without the horrible memories and guilt is ok. but the fact that he reincanates into his 17 year old self in a world as dangerous as the one piece world with nothing but "your name is viper and eat this fruit is absolutely stupid." join luffys crew and then what? help? fight? he doesn't know how. he has not trained a day in his life in combat and his physicality is nothing special a normal athletic one piece adults physic. luffy and zorro have both trained for at least a decade to prepare for their journey, while luffy had almost as long to get used to his devil fruit abilities and develop iit a little. at least give him time to learn to use his devil druit properly. the plot is about to start and what can he do? turn into a f****** snake? granted its a mythical zoan but thats only useful later in the story at this point when he actually gets strong enough to use it to its full potential. what a way to waste 3 wishes. most of these things will be resolved in time im sure, he has apparently genius lvl intelletct(well lets see how this goes). at first i was confused sometimes on who says what. because you marked it in a confusing way, is it luffy talking or viper? i had to go back and read again to understand who it is. you will get used to it im sure but why.

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vicky111mudi

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LV 11

Knightmare15

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LV 6

tankbusternbiscuit

I don't have enough words to describe this, but this was one of the best One-piece fanfics I've read. I read it all the way to the end and thoroughly enjoyed each and every chapter.

LV 7

reading1dao1god

otima historia eu recomendo fortemente, o autor esta de parabéns espero que escreva outras historias. eu amei. otima historia eu recomendo fortemente, o autor esta de parabéns espero que escreva outras historias. eu amei. otima historia eu recomendo fortemente, o autor esta de parabéns espero que escreva outras historias. eu amei. otima historia eu recomendo fortemente, o autor esta de parabéns espero que escreva outras historias. eu amei.

LV 4

Jonatan_david

Muy buena me encantó espero que sigas escribiendo fan-fic te ganaste un fan fue la mejor de principio a fin sos un crack 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 4

Yasashiki

My first reviews will be on this fanfic, because it is now finished I feel legitimate to review it. First of all, I have to say is that it was a really nice ride. I like how all the characters are depicted, the story itself is the mc being part of the straw hat so obviously all the events will be similar, some changes were made and for the better. I think I enjoyed the slice of life parts a lot more than the rest, the interaction within the crew is top notch. I would still say that the fight are not really the best you could find, it could be better. I can’t judge grammar and such because I’m not speaking english as my first language, but everything is understandable, maybe even getting better as the chapters goes. I hope to see your others work maybe on other anime/game/book !

LV 5

miza

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LV 11

Jesz04

Okay, I'm rating this 5 stars. Definitely. This is one of the best One Piece fanfic. (Based on my opinion and I don't usually review what I read, not unless they're SOOO GOOD). First, I know people are "Disturb" by the idea to have our MC wipe his knowledge about One Piece. BUT I think this gives much more new story to tell than other fanfic that takes advantage of their knowledge that they turned the OG One Piece into WHOLE different story. I mean its also great to change some stuffs BUT other authors just turn so Ambituous that they will add different stuff like crossover anime characters, harem?! ( Not a fan of Harem that's why Im happy with this.) ITS JUST TOO AMBITIOUS. Anyway, I want to inform you guys that even though Thomas (God) wipe his knowledge about the timeline of the One Piece, BUT also remember that he is a GENIUS scientist before he transfer in this world. And that doesn't change at ALL. He is still genius that you will feel insecure to the knowledge that he knows. (Don't feel insecure at all. Lol) It only means that he can still start from scratch and still feel inferior to normal human because of his brain. Just saying, you can't compare geniuses to normal human. So what I'm saying right now is read at least 10 chaps and tell us your opinion about it. Don't judge the story because of the 1st/2nd chap is not on your liking and think to drop this story. Give it a chance first and if you are really a fan of One Piece I think you like this. (If you like the normal stupid/impulsive Luffy)

LV 4

AtmaNoN

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LV 13

swordking01

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LV 4

EANID

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LV 4

MahoV

It's really good I like the fact that you actually erased is memories the the storie feel natural not force like when their already know everything Godd job!

LV 13

swordking01

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LV 4

Bigsmartdumbdumb

Actually good. It is funny there is good character development and it has a balanced protagonist. Good choise of Waifu their meeting was hilarious

LV 6

tankbusternbiscuit

I did not expect this to be so good, it's a really good fanfic with just the right amount of changes. Conclusion: READ IT

LV 13

swordking01

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LV 14

Carefree_Sensei

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LV 2

silver_672

Loved the novel very much . It is really different from those op characters novel.Continue writting this , it is very good.i really like length of the chapters. I will vote for this.👍

LV 4

samiul

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LV 6

4bidienkingdom

Great character and thank you for novel.

LV 6

MohamedRost

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LV 4

madman1010

Good