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Okay i get it you REALLY like the story from wattpad named the solo gamer but this is like making a Very cheap copy First grimm have no soul ergo Arise does not work cause it only works with non currupted souls Secoud you can atleast do something original i mean come on man give him something else as a semblence
Words cannot describe how messed up your grammer is, there is no backstory to the book nor with the MC themselves and did you copy this book from Wattpad?!
Writing is a meh for me atleast, the updates needs to be stable,a bit too similar to another fan-fiction story on wattpad, they have too much plot armor, but overall not bad for a fan-fic.
A bit chaotic at the start but I like it, this is a light read so there are no profound conversation between characters or characters development, thing sometime get gloss over without going into detail but in return it doesn't get drag out too long, MC have act like someone with a tragic past but he's not, he just act like that cause he think it's cool and it kind of stuck, he even admit himself that he become an edgelord in one chapter. Instead of gamer power his power is more like that of Sung Jin Woo from solo levelling with extra so he's quite OP so don't expect souen like fight.
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Most bland gamer story ever.....there is no need for reading every chapter you just can easily skip one or two and read next...and about the comedy tag...maybe all of MCs actions are really comedic...he got transmigrated to RWBY(not sure really.. become... sometimes Gates pop-up)....he got Shadow Monarch's abilities and skills....also has two weapons...also instant mastery(which Author forgot easily)...he trains for a month and starts kiling for 2 years level up to 39(author said level up is very slow)....and next few days he level up more than he did in 2 years🙄🙄WTF!! also it very doubtful that author even know about RWBY.
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is this from wattpad since this seem similar to it? . .hbdkdjakayfydfyhguzyodofsosutoutsotgpixcigduoilgihigldyipiyppdiyipydpitsyoydyipdiptsoyohxihchcblblbcig
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Okay i get it you REALLY like the story from wattpad named the solo gamer but this is like making a Very cheap copy First grimm have no soul ergo Arise does not work cause it only works with non currupted souls Secoud you can atleast do something original i mean come on man give him something else as a semblence
Words cannot describe how messed up your grammer is, there is no backstory to the book nor with the MC themselves and did you copy this book from Wattpad?!
Writing is a meh for me atleast, the updates needs to be stable,a bit too similar to another fan-fiction story on wattpad, they have too much plot armor, but overall not bad for a fan-fic.
A bit chaotic at the start but I like it, this is a light read so there are no profound conversation between characters or characters development, thing sometime get gloss over without going into detail but in return it doesn't get drag out too long, MC have act like someone with a tragic past but he's not, he just act like that cause he think it's cool and it kind of stuck, he even admit himself that he become an edgelord in one chapter. Instead of gamer power his power is more like that of Sung Jin Woo from solo levelling with extra so he's quite OP so don't expect souen like fight.
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Most bland gamer story ever.....there is no need for reading every chapter you just can easily skip one or two and read next...and about the comedy tag...maybe all of MCs actions are really comedic...he got transmigrated to RWBY(not sure really.. become... sometimes Gates pop-up)....he got Shadow Monarch's abilities and skills....also has two weapons...also instant mastery(which Author forgot easily)...he trains for a month and starts kiling for 2 years level up to 39(author said level up is very slow)....and next few days he level up more than he did in 2 years🙄🙄WTF!! also it very doubtful that author even know about RWBY.
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is this from wattpad since this seem similar to it? . .hbdkdjakayfydfyhguzyodofsosutoutsotgpixcigduoilgihigldyipiyppdiyipydpitsyoydyipdiptsoyohxihchcblblbcig
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