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Write a reviewso....good story with plot, but rushed ending. Even though there was some slight harem it didn't affect the story. There were some interactions that were miniscule even though they should've been bigger, the author seems to have done a rushed job in semi-ending the story where the conclusion is more of a The End? rather than a The End.
I’ve read all the way to the end. Overall it was a pretty decent read. If you like a very op mc that sticks with his goal (improving his provedence) this is a good one. Good points. Mc is op. Remembers his friends through out. Has a clear goal. Chapters are dense about 2-3 chapters in other stories equal 1 chapter here. Bad points. Mc is gullible or extremely dense. Every female character pledges off being with any other man the moment they see mc. Early in the story author goes crazy about repeating names of stuff. Sometimes you will hear the name of the place like 50 times in the same chap. The last 30 or so chapters you can tell author was focused on wrapping up. Just an over arcing sense of things moving fast.
The story outline and plot were quite good, definitely kept me reading and more importantly spent money. But there were several times I just skipped paragraphs to get back to the story. The verbiage was too repetitive and awfully predictable. Also the ending was more of a cliffhanger and basically suggesting that a dad doesn’t need to be a father to his daughter if he gives her a few gifts.
Reveal Spoilerthe translators should also translate author's another book which is in the future timeline and both protoganists will meet in last chapters the book name is Immortal Emperor's Self Cultivation
This is just brain rot......This is just brain rot......This is just brain rot......This is just brain rot......This is just brain rot......This is just brain rot......This is just brain rot......
the worst ending ive ever seen..........................................................................................................................
Generic cultivation novel but written in a repetitive, dry, and boring way. Some random dude from Earth is transfered into a 16 year old boy who lives in a cultivation world. This dude suffered from extremely bad luck until the random dude from earth was transferred into him. Now, he gained an overpower cheat, able to see "good luck" encounters scenes playing above people's head. Thus he can either "steal" or "aid" the person with what he saw. Thus, from being known as a jinx, he becomes a good luck charm, gains a group of believes who worship him like a celestial god, they thus call their cult the "Celivers". And so it repeats over and over for 500 chapters, see a scene above a person's head, tells him to follow, and pretends that he's a saint by sharing some of the treasures found with the person that was supposed to have the good luck encounter. This repeats over and over till the end. Not a single funny scene till the end of the story.
The most generic of books. I read 207 chapters but every 2 or 3 I had to fight myself to read more.
Great piece of work! The ending is making me more thinking about there being some continuation. Like this one and hope other similar translations can be posted
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the translators should also translate author's another book which is in the future timeline and both protoganists will meet in last chapters the book name is Immortal Emperor's Self Cultivation
Good job! Continue in the same spirit. zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
good book. but ending is not good. so many Clif hangers. not complete arc. doesn't follow up the story after 300 chapters . but overall good novel. can be read to pass time.
Good read until the last 100 chapters. The story goes down steeply and the Ending isn't even a proper ending. I hope this gets a proper sequal.
Finally a cultivation novel where the characters aren’t stupid and unreasonable. The antagonists actually concede and become friends with the mc instead of calling their whole clan to kill the mc...
Very good! Highly recommend! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
It's a pretty good light read. OP MC, decent comedy, decently original plot, ok writing... The problem is that towards the end, the author seems to have given up on the story, so the last 100 or so chapters are rushed. Moreover, the story is incomplete, and since the author obviously got bored with the story, I'm not having much hopes for a sequel. Still, it was fun while it lasted, so I'll give it a generous 4 stars.
What's the name of the second book???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Are there another novel in the same world??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
It’s a relatively fun novel. Being a comedy novel, I enjoy a lot of character interactions. As a negative, they tend to be very one note unfortunately. I generally like the world that was built. Some of the ideas are novel to me, some of them are pretty common to the genre. My biggest complaint really is that the story sort of lingers. What I mean is that a lot of the story is a recycled series of flexing and people being impressed, and then maybe you get some plot. TL;DR I would like this story a lot more if they just trimmed out a lot of the filler. It’s not the best novel I ever read but it’s solid. It’s worth a read.
One of the greatest novels I have ever read, it all comes together in the end forming a masterpiece.
Everything is good expect those bootlicking group..................................,...................... . ............................
i truly loved the story and the characters. it's a wonderful journey. (。・ω・。) i just hope that mc will come back again to the mortal world with his family and friends. anyway, i'm excited as they establish their names in the celestial world.
Wait. . The novel ended at 510 chapters?? I read till 457 and the story had just begun by thn. How did it end at 510??? I was hoping for a 3k chapter novel. Y every good novel end so soon?
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it very good read and and interesting story nice development it is all fine and dandy till IN NOT EVEN A GOOD CLIFF HANGER THEY GIVE YOU "YOU HAVE TO BUY THE REST IF THE ENTIRE BOOK TO READ" NO ONE WILL BUY THAT MUCH COINS TO READ YOUR BOOK AND YOU MADE THE PREMIUM VERY CLOSE TO THE BEGINNING i spit on you *spit*
The story gets better as you keep reading, after he truly steps into the sect the story gets better and better, cool side characters , fun story, the last chapters or the last arc of the story is really good too .
so....good story with plot, but rushed ending. Even though there was some slight harem it didn't affect the story. There were some interactions that were miniscule even though they should've been bigger, the author seems to have done a rushed job in semi-ending the story where the conclusion is more of a The End? rather than a The End.
I’ve read all the way to the end. Overall it was a pretty decent read. If you like a very op mc that sticks with his goal (improving his provedence) this is a good one. Good points. Mc is op. Remembers his friends through out. Has a clear goal. Chapters are dense about 2-3 chapters in other stories equal 1 chapter here. Bad points. Mc is gullible or extremely dense. Every female character pledges off being with any other man the moment they see mc. Early in the story author goes crazy about repeating names of stuff. Sometimes you will hear the name of the place like 50 times in the same chap. The last 30 or so chapters you can tell author was focused on wrapping up. Just an over arcing sense of things moving fast.
The story outline and plot were quite good, definitely kept me reading and more importantly spent money. But there were several times I just skipped paragraphs to get back to the story. The verbiage was too repetitive and awfully predictable. Also the ending was more of a cliffhanger and basically suggesting that a dad doesn’t need to be a father to his daughter if he gives her a few gifts.
Reveal Spoilerthe translators should also translate author's another book which is in the future timeline and both protoganists will meet in last chapters the book name is Immortal Emperor's Self Cultivation
This is just brain rot......This is just brain rot......This is just brain rot......This is just brain rot......This is just brain rot......This is just brain rot......This is just brain rot......
the worst ending ive ever seen..........................................................................................................................
Generic cultivation novel but written in a repetitive, dry, and boring way. Some random dude from Earth is transfered into a 16 year old boy who lives in a cultivation world. This dude suffered from extremely bad luck until the random dude from earth was transferred into him. Now, he gained an overpower cheat, able to see "good luck" encounters scenes playing above people's head. Thus he can either "steal" or "aid" the person with what he saw. Thus, from being known as a jinx, he becomes a good luck charm, gains a group of believes who worship him like a celestial god, they thus call their cult the "Celivers". And so it repeats over and over for 500 chapters, see a scene above a person's head, tells him to follow, and pretends that he's a saint by sharing some of the treasures found with the person that was supposed to have the good luck encounter. This repeats over and over till the end. Not a single funny scene till the end of the story.
The most generic of books. I read 207 chapters but every 2 or 3 I had to fight myself to read more.
Great piece of work! The ending is making me more thinking about there being some continuation. Like this one and hope other similar translations can be posted
[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
the translators should also translate author's another book which is in the future timeline and both protoganists will meet in last chapters the book name is Immortal Emperor's Self Cultivation
Good job! Continue in the same spirit. zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
good book. but ending is not good. so many Clif hangers. not complete arc. doesn't follow up the story after 300 chapters . but overall good novel. can be read to pass time.
Good read until the last 100 chapters. The story goes down steeply and the Ending isn't even a proper ending. I hope this gets a proper sequal.
Finally a cultivation novel where the characters aren’t stupid and unreasonable. The antagonists actually concede and become friends with the mc instead of calling their whole clan to kill the mc...
Very good! Highly recommend! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
It's a pretty good light read. OP MC, decent comedy, decently original plot, ok writing... The problem is that towards the end, the author seems to have given up on the story, so the last 100 or so chapters are rushed. Moreover, the story is incomplete, and since the author obviously got bored with the story, I'm not having much hopes for a sequel. Still, it was fun while it lasted, so I'll give it a generous 4 stars.
What's the name of the second book???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Are there another novel in the same world??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
It’s a relatively fun novel. Being a comedy novel, I enjoy a lot of character interactions. As a negative, they tend to be very one note unfortunately. I generally like the world that was built. Some of the ideas are novel to me, some of them are pretty common to the genre. My biggest complaint really is that the story sort of lingers. What I mean is that a lot of the story is a recycled series of flexing and people being impressed, and then maybe you get some plot. TL;DR I would like this story a lot more if they just trimmed out a lot of the filler. It’s not the best novel I ever read but it’s solid. It’s worth a read.
One of the greatest novels I have ever read, it all comes together in the end forming a masterpiece.
Everything is good expect those bootlicking group..................................,...................... . ............................
i truly loved the story and the characters. it's a wonderful journey. (。・ω・。) i just hope that mc will come back again to the mortal world with his family and friends. anyway, i'm excited as they establish their names in the celestial world.
Wait. . The novel ended at 510 chapters?? I read till 457 and the story had just begun by thn. How did it end at 510??? I was hoping for a 3k chapter novel. Y every good novel end so soon?
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it very good read and and interesting story nice development it is all fine and dandy till IN NOT EVEN A GOOD CLIFF HANGER THEY GIVE YOU "YOU HAVE TO BUY THE REST IF THE ENTIRE BOOK TO READ" NO ONE WILL BUY THAT MUCH COINS TO READ YOUR BOOK AND YOU MADE THE PREMIUM VERY CLOSE TO THE BEGINNING i spit on you *spit*
The story gets better as you keep reading, after he truly steps into the sect the story gets better and better, cool side characters , fun story, the last chapters or the last arc of the story is really good too .