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Great story so far. The author currently spits out chapters at an insane pace. Really like the cheat the MC has and what he could end up doing with it. Good world building and character development. Would recommend this book.😁
This release rate of this Tadpole is insane! Great story. Interesting plot and background settings. To top it off, the grammar and the readability of the story is amazing! I mean, the views stat says it all.
The author writes at an incredible rate, this makes up for the slow pace of the plot. Unfortunately the world building thus far was very poorly done, it feels extremely rushed compared to other story aspects. Character development is nonexistent, the main character feels flat, as do other supporting characters. It’s really an odd situation, half of the developments are at a snails pace while the other half are moving at Mach 5. The writing is also very poor like many story’s on this site, very little proofreading can be seen and the grammar is flawed in many places.
The idea is interesting, the execution is amazing and the quality is high, not to mention the insane chapter release speed. In conclusion: great story, great speed, great author.
Honestly I never knew I would find a great novel from the forum! Your update speed blows my mind by the way. Even though the pacing is slow, the quality is superb. Good luck on the WPC.
A great cultivation story! The story progresses at a steady pace, which is great for character and world-building. The story established the MC very well. The plot is very interesting because there is always a new element that gets introduced without making it feel rushed. Overall, a great read! And one of the best update rate. Well done, I am impressed!
was asked for an honest review so here it is: 1) pacing is on the slow side but it seems to make sense the way that it is written 2) the characters are interesting but even at chapter 26 I feel like this novel is still in the infant stage 3) the release rate is incredible and also beats out some of the translations, since its not even been an entire week and we have been blessed with so many chapters so far 4) only negative is that it looks like this will be a VERYYYY long novel because of the pacing so those who do not like long lasting novels should probably skip this one
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i like the pacing of this novel quite a bit and hope author continues this!!!!!!!! finally the first actual combat type scene and it was not bad either!
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I really like this novel so far mostly because the quality isn’t bad at all on top of the insane release rate. O_O 140140140140140140140140140140140
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The novel so far has an interesting concept, but the writing isn't quite at the level of some of the other participating WPC novels. I hope the writing will improve some with time, but we'll have to see.
The story is taking good shape. The story has a cheat but not a cheat by building a strong merchant profession. Good luck and all the best for your contest.
The best thing about this author is his/her release rates. The book looks promising so far and hope that the author continues. The pacing for only the first two chapters is good as well!
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Author's shameless review. I will be treating this novel VERY seriously and will update as much as I can. Current goal is minimum 5 chapters per day. This may be an entry to the current WPC competition, but I will be continuing this even if I don't necessarily win the contest. However, please donate stones to support because, winning would be nice. :3 -The Sleeping Tadpole
Great story so far. The author currently spits out chapters at an insane pace. Really like the cheat the MC has and what he could end up doing with it. Good world building and character development. Would recommend this book.😁
This release rate of this Tadpole is insane! Great story. Interesting plot and background settings. To top it off, the grammar and the readability of the story is amazing! I mean, the views stat says it all.
The author writes at an incredible rate, this makes up for the slow pace of the plot. Unfortunately the world building thus far was very poorly done, it feels extremely rushed compared to other story aspects. Character development is nonexistent, the main character feels flat, as do other supporting characters. It’s really an odd situation, half of the developments are at a snails pace while the other half are moving at Mach 5. The writing is also very poor like many story’s on this site, very little proofreading can be seen and the grammar is flawed in many places.
The idea is interesting, the execution is amazing and the quality is high, not to mention the insane chapter release speed. In conclusion: great story, great speed, great author.
Honestly I never knew I would find a great novel from the forum! Your update speed blows my mind by the way. Even though the pacing is slow, the quality is superb. Good luck on the WPC.
A great cultivation story! The story progresses at a steady pace, which is great for character and world-building. The story established the MC very well. The plot is very interesting because there is always a new element that gets introduced without making it feel rushed. Overall, a great read! And one of the best update rate. Well done, I am impressed!
was asked for an honest review so here it is: 1) pacing is on the slow side but it seems to make sense the way that it is written 2) the characters are interesting but even at chapter 26 I feel like this novel is still in the infant stage 3) the release rate is incredible and also beats out some of the translations, since its not even been an entire week and we have been blessed with so many chapters so far 4) only negative is that it looks like this will be a VERYYYY long novel because of the pacing so those who do not like long lasting novels should probably skip this one
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i like the pacing of this novel quite a bit and hope author continues this!!!!!!!! finally the first actual combat type scene and it was not bad either!
Reveal Spoiler I really like this novel so far mostly because the quality isn’t bad at all on top of the insane release rate. O_O 140140140140140140140140140140140
Reveal Spoiler The novel so far has an interesting concept, but the writing isn't quite at the level of some of the other participating WPC novels. I hope the writing will improve some with time, but we'll have to see.
The story is taking good shape. The story has a cheat but not a cheat by building a strong merchant profession. Good luck and all the best for your contest.
The best thing about this author is his/her release rates. The book looks promising so far and hope that the author continues. The pacing for only the first two chapters is good as well!
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Author's shameless review. I will be treating this novel VERY seriously and will update as much as I can. Current goal is minimum 5 chapters per day. This may be an entry to the current WPC competition, but I will be continuing this even if I don't necessarily win the contest. However, please donate stones to support because, winning would be nice. :3 -The Sleeping Tadpole