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nice. love it. story is good. mc is also nice.........................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.
Grammar is bad, even though I have not unlocked any chapter from the preview I can see that the author is not proficient in English. I also don't know why chapter 5 is not in English.
I absolutely love this I found this a couple days ago and I love it. a couple of chapters are half translated half not but otherwise it's an amazing story love the mc and the character developments its overall one of the best stories I've read in a while 10/10 definitely will recommend it
I'm seriously gobsmacked that this novel made it in the paid chapters category with this level of English, although I love this genre I can't really read more than half the chap without getting dizzy trying to understand what's written....please before making people pay for something like this atleast get a decent editor, there's no need for perfect English but atleast separate the paragraphs and sentences.
At first it was good but then it started to be more hard to comprehend even more when it's hard to know when someone talk or think , it was changed but still it was only with [] to say that someone is talking nothing else changed. don't get me wrong the story is not bad and the grammar is still ok but the fact that there no logic to the stories is the main reasonni stop. since it seems like some god helped him or chosed him them in less than one month he go to another planet . and he change so fast that it isn't natural like if a 18 years teenager will be so quick to adapt even if he has read novel of apocalypse
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The grammar is really bad and made me stop reading almost immediately, and I say this as someone who reads MTL novels often. The author is clearly not a native English speaker nor proficient in it as a second language.
so good grammar that made me cry please improve it before posting it and the conversation between character is literally like mess not a single paragraph make sense who's talking to who
every day more than one chapter I'm loving this light novel, and rare an update so I hope it continues please don't change your style this is making me lose somo to wait for new cap
LOOK MAN VERY GRAZYyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy I LOVE ZOOMBY
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The plot is much better I think that now we will hope for better things, I hope that auto-san knows how to go ahead and improve this for people who are fascinated by a lot of zombies[img=recommend]
Now I will only post new chapters when it reaches 20 stones of power, and for every 10 stones 1 chapter, if it reaches 20 it will be 2 chapters
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I want to see if this story continues like this, because all I read for nothing, at least this one stopped more and continued because of his explanation it was a cause of illness
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I am new to this world of writer so I ask the help of everyone to comment and help the drama as many are doing so I can improve[img = faceslap]
I'm the first review and honestly i just love the apocalypse theme as i can proudly say that i have read almost each and every novel that is here and on wuxia on Doomsday,Apoc and sorts and hope this one will be a project rather than an idea and go a long way 😇 The start is good but only a week worth of chaps to say to judge so just take my 5* as motivation and please no matter what dont quit
nice. love it. story is good. mc is also nice.........................................................................................................................................................................................................
Look at my new book, it was released now with 2000 to 3000 words I will post the link here I hope you like it, I can tell you that this book you never saw here https://***.webnovel.com/book/i-will-be-rich_19086502605199005
Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.
Grammar is bad, even though I have not unlocked any chapter from the preview I can see that the author is not proficient in English. I also don't know why chapter 5 is not in English.
I absolutely love this I found this a couple days ago and I love it. a couple of chapters are half translated half not but otherwise it's an amazing story love the mc and the character developments its overall one of the best stories I've read in a while 10/10 definitely will recommend it
I'm seriously gobsmacked that this novel made it in the paid chapters category with this level of English, although I love this genre I can't really read more than half the chap without getting dizzy trying to understand what's written....please before making people pay for something like this atleast get a decent editor, there's no need for perfect English but atleast separate the paragraphs and sentences.
At first it was good but then it started to be more hard to comprehend even more when it's hard to know when someone talk or think , it was changed but still it was only with [] to say that someone is talking nothing else changed. don't get me wrong the story is not bad and the grammar is still ok but the fact that there no logic to the stories is the main reasonni stop. since it seems like some god helped him or chosed him them in less than one month he go to another planet . and he change so fast that it isn't natural like if a 18 years teenager will be so quick to adapt even if he has read novel of apocalypse
Reveal Spoiler The grammar is really bad and made me stop reading almost immediately, and I say this as someone who reads MTL novels often. The author is clearly not a native English speaker nor proficient in it as a second language.
so good grammar that made me cry please improve it before posting it and the conversation between character is literally like mess not a single paragraph make sense who's talking to who
every day more than one chapter I'm loving this light novel, and rare an update so I hope it continues please don't change your style this is making me lose somo to wait for new cap
LOOK MAN VERY GRAZYyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy I LOVE ZOOMBY
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels! + Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing contest! This contest is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi, but if you haven’t worked on these genres, that’s TOTALLY FINE! You can refer to the given examples and tips to develop a new story. As all new stories can get cash rewards, this might be your chance to begin your writing career and start to make a living by writing! Not to mention that you can take your chance to win the big cash and get your books published in hardcover! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact Email :Rebecca_661@outlook.com
The plot is much better I think that now we will hope for better things, I hope that auto-san knows how to go ahead and improve this for people who are fascinated by a lot of zombies[img=recommend]
Now I will only post new chapters when it reaches 20 stones of power, and for every 10 stones 1 chapter, if it reaches 20 it will be 2 chapters
very gooodddddddddddddd.................................................................................................................................................................
I want to see if this story continues like this, because all I read for nothing, at least this one stopped more and continued because of his explanation it was a cause of illness
Good very very very gooooooddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
I am new to this world of writer so I ask the help of everyone to comment and help the drama as many are doing so I can improve[img = faceslap]
I'm the first review and honestly i just love the apocalypse theme as i can proudly say that i have read almost each and every novel that is here and on wuxia on Doomsday,Apoc and sorts and hope this one will be a project rather than an idea and go a long way 😇 The start is good but only a week worth of chaps to say to judge so just take my 5* as motivation and please no matter what dont quit