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This book is really amazing. I like the plot and the development of the story. Once you started reading this you will surely be under a spell that you don't want to stop reading. Good Work :)
Very interesting read! The plot is good and the characters are relatable. You may sometimes think that the character had existed in real life. Kudos to the author!
Hey author, I like your story. I love your description. The story is so good. I love the pacing. It is very interesting.
I think you have to work on you plot summary. There is potential in your story work on it and give more updates to us.. Even though Eric is slow and confused I like the interaction between him Ariel.. Dear readers if you stumble upon this story.keep up the good work author
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I’m not usually into plain romance so it took me a while to read this. There are a few hiccups in grammar like sentence case, grammatical tense... the usual stuff. Don’t be afraid to work with punctuation. Which I knew most writers struggle with, as I have too. The thing I couldn’t move past was that it was confusing for me, there were a lot of stuff happening in the first chapter that I had to re-read it countless of times just to get a gist of it. I think you should put which POV you are using in the chapter to work seamlessly. Also, try to slowly introduce the characters like dedicate a paragraph or two about them, give them dialogues so readers would know them more (to also make them like or hate the characters) before deciding to introduce another one. Your summary was short, I know there’s potential so work with the plot summary, make it enticing that it makes the readers beg for more. That will make them add it to their library. For me, short summaries don’t grab my attention. Make your story stand out to others. What makes it different to others? Is this heroine strong or not? Who’s the love interest? What’s the story’s Rising Action?
Great plot and story. It was really interesting to read. It has a cool setting and lovable characters. Very well done! I hope the author won't give up on the book and continue to write good quality novels such as this!
I like this piece a lot. You can see that the author has focused on expressing the emotional factors the most. I don't think I've hated a character more, nor that I've felt so sorry for the FL ever. She deserves all the best. The writing quality is average, but I have to commend the author for writing such long chapters and having a good vocabulary. Story is consistent and makes sense. Fight on, and continue like this!
I like the characters most of all. And your way of developing this story is just...Wow! Consider me as a fan cuz I'm hooked! Waiting for the next chapters!
I've read only a couple of chapters and boy was I hooked. The author did a very good job of describing Ariel and her misfortunes in the first chapters. It made me sympathize with her more and your writing style is so good. Keep up the good work :)
I see that this has been published last month, all I can say is that this deserves more views and reads. Not like the others who have lots of dialogues, but everything was narrated with detailed description. There may be some typos, but overall it's all good. Continue updating! ❤️
Interesting. So far I have only read a few chapters but what should I say? I am hooked. Characters are good. The setting is also cool. Great work, highly recommended
As an author I am rating myself.. I feel it give you a fresh feeling while reading about the main characters.. Even though it feels same as like getting cheated in the start but if you follow regularly you will see difference
Beautiful story. Though less dialogues but great contents. I just read first few chapters and I am already hooked up with it. The author is doing an amazing job. Highly recommended.
This book is really amazing. I like the plot and the development of the story. Once you started reading this you will surely be under a spell that you don't want to stop reading. Good Work :)
Very interesting read! The plot is good and the characters are relatable. You may sometimes think that the character had existed in real life. Kudos to the author!
Hey author, I like your story. I love your description. The story is so good. I love the pacing. It is very interesting.
I think you have to work on you plot summary. There is potential in your story work on it and give more updates to us.. Even though Eric is slow and confused I like the interaction between him Ariel.. Dear readers if you stumble upon this story.keep up the good work author
Reveal Spoiler I’m not usually into plain romance so it took me a while to read this. There are a few hiccups in grammar like sentence case, grammatical tense... the usual stuff. Don’t be afraid to work with punctuation. Which I knew most writers struggle with, as I have too. The thing I couldn’t move past was that it was confusing for me, there were a lot of stuff happening in the first chapter that I had to re-read it countless of times just to get a gist of it. I think you should put which POV you are using in the chapter to work seamlessly. Also, try to slowly introduce the characters like dedicate a paragraph or two about them, give them dialogues so readers would know them more (to also make them like or hate the characters) before deciding to introduce another one. Your summary was short, I know there’s potential so work with the plot summary, make it enticing that it makes the readers beg for more. That will make them add it to their library. For me, short summaries don’t grab my attention. Make your story stand out to others. What makes it different to others? Is this heroine strong or not? Who’s the love interest? What’s the story’s Rising Action?
Great plot and story. It was really interesting to read. It has a cool setting and lovable characters. Very well done! I hope the author won't give up on the book and continue to write good quality novels such as this!
I like this piece a lot. You can see that the author has focused on expressing the emotional factors the most. I don't think I've hated a character more, nor that I've felt so sorry for the FL ever. She deserves all the best. The writing quality is average, but I have to commend the author for writing such long chapters and having a good vocabulary. Story is consistent and makes sense. Fight on, and continue like this!
I like the characters most of all. And your way of developing this story is just...Wow! Consider me as a fan cuz I'm hooked! Waiting for the next chapters!
I've read only a couple of chapters and boy was I hooked. The author did a very good job of describing Ariel and her misfortunes in the first chapters. It made me sympathize with her more and your writing style is so good. Keep up the good work :)
I see that this has been published last month, all I can say is that this deserves more views and reads. Not like the others who have lots of dialogues, but everything was narrated with detailed description. There may be some typos, but overall it's all good. Continue updating! ❤️
Interesting. So far I have only read a few chapters but what should I say? I am hooked. Characters are good. The setting is also cool. Great work, highly recommended
As an author I am rating myself.. I feel it give you a fresh feeling while reading about the main characters.. Even though it feels same as like getting cheated in the start but if you follow regularly you will see difference
Beautiful story. Though less dialogues but great contents. I just read first few chapters and I am already hooked up with it. The author is doing an amazing job. Highly recommended.