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sadly webnovel doesn't allow less than this for writing quality character and story. to the author :broo tbh this looks like a manga outline rather than a novel
(there is a semi spoiler) for all reader just so y'all know the story really begins when he become level 1 the ones before it is just to set up his story and reveal the mc's character.
numbers don't make sense. mc behavior is not believable. first 10 chapters are only plot armor. nothing but a few copied ideas. since it is a game world it needs a coherent leveling system.
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Pretty cool, I’ve been the #1 in voting for this book and I plan to keep it that way.
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uh dude, this has too much copied stuff that makes some sense but now, the moron just showed his face, WTH who even uses their real life identity unless they have some backing some power through which they have resistance to real life corporations and governments, that is stupid and the easiest way to get'cha self killed, not to mention you pretty much just copied overlord, I quit
Such a trash novel, man I thought that he would keep being op and shit but suddenly the author made him back to level 1, which is bullshit he also added fucking over geared and fairytail together, the story development is shit, the mc doesn't have ambitions, he just straight up gets bullied by others, man like when a girl asked him to join the guild he agrees, like wtf, and worst of all it felt like this was some kind of simp novel, with cliche storyline like wtf, it said the dragon slayer was the weakest class, but no he just made it so fucking op even stronger than other legend classes, fucking trash novel
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Everyone who gives this story a good review is a bloody bot. The story dropped down hill after the mc gain the legendary class. The story is so fastpaced that it's impossible to keep track, the wording makes the sentences seem all jumbled up, the author clearly copies elements from other works, overall while the concept of the story might seem nice when you think about it this whole story is basically garbage.
I loved it, gimme more. The author work hard and pump chapter frequently I am hoping for him to kill everyone, and also get a real girl, it's too sad.
Damn.... The story is great. Just loved it. The MC is neither OP, nor too weak. With the inclusion of dragons, I fucking loved it. Keep the good work up Author
Lol the author has the same name as mine. The story is great. NGL the starting are pretty bad but it becomes a lot interesting as the story is progressing.
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I love your concept and to be honest I don't read many video game books but this is really interesting. and I really hope I could write like you lol and I love it that you add Indian references and names! Happy writing! Keep it up [img=recommend]
I like the plot and the I was intrigued by some of the mysteries. Great writing and all I have to say is the book was really captivating! don't give up
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Hey guys, Excel here. First of all, thank you for reading my story. And I hope you enjoy it. If you guys have any suggestions please feel free to comment. I have got many problems with the pacing of the story. I just want to say please read till chapter 20 and if you don't like my story you can move on. Thank you
Its good Try now!!!! ............................. ...... ............ . . . . . . . . . .. .. .. . . ..
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
sadly webnovel doesn't allow less than this for writing quality character and story. to the author :broo tbh this looks like a manga outline rather than a novel
(there is a semi spoiler) for all reader just so y'all know the story really begins when he become level 1 the ones before it is just to set up his story and reveal the mc's character.
numbers don't make sense. mc behavior is not believable. first 10 chapters are only plot armor. nothing but a few copied ideas. since it is a game world it needs a coherent leveling system.
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]the Story is good👍👍👍[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Reveal Spoiler Pretty cool, I’ve been the #1 in voting for this book and I plan to keep it that way.
Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to email rebecca.review@outlook.com. We are mainly looking for adventure novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game). A brief introduction, along with a few samples or links, will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
uh dude, this has too much copied stuff that makes some sense but now, the moron just showed his face, WTH who even uses their real life identity unless they have some backing some power through which they have resistance to real life corporations and governments, that is stupid and the easiest way to get'cha self killed, not to mention you pretty much just copied overlord, I quit
Such a trash novel, man I thought that he would keep being op and shit but suddenly the author made him back to level 1, which is bullshit he also added fucking over geared and fairytail together, the story development is shit, the mc doesn't have ambitions, he just straight up gets bullied by others, man like when a girl asked him to join the guild he agrees, like wtf, and worst of all it felt like this was some kind of simp novel, with cliche storyline like wtf, it said the dragon slayer was the weakest class, but no he just made it so fucking op even stronger than other legend classes, fucking trash novel
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Reveal Spoiler Everyone who gives this story a good review is a bloody bot. The story dropped down hill after the mc gain the legendary class. The story is so fastpaced that it's impossible to keep track, the wording makes the sentences seem all jumbled up, the author clearly copies elements from other works, overall while the concept of the story might seem nice when you think about it this whole story is basically garbage.
I loved it, gimme more. The author work hard and pump chapter frequently I am hoping for him to kill everyone, and also get a real girl, it's too sad.
Damn.... The story is great. Just loved it. The MC is neither OP, nor too weak. With the inclusion of dragons, I fucking loved it. Keep the good work up Author
Lol the author has the same name as mine. The story is great. NGL the starting are pretty bad but it becomes a lot interesting as the story is progressing.
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I love your concept and to be honest I don't read many video game books but this is really interesting. and I really hope I could write like you lol and I love it that you add Indian references and names! Happy writing! Keep it up [img=recommend]
I like the plot and the I was intrigued by some of the mysteries. Great writing and all I have to say is the book was really captivating! don't give up
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Hey guys, Excel here. First of all, thank you for reading my story. And I hope you enjoy it. If you guys have any suggestions please feel free to comment. I have got many problems with the pacing of the story. I just want to say please read till chapter 20 and if you don't like my story you can move on. Thank you
Its good Try now!!!! ............................. ...... ............ . . . . . . . . . .. .. .. . . ..
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.