I am Iron Man

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Tyyx

The story idea (MC with a system) is pretty good, although it develops slow and fast. Let me explain, the chapters are somewhat short and there seem to be abrupt time jumps without arguments. In general it is a fanfic with potential but there is a critical flaw, the quality of the writing. The style and form can be improved to be much more comprehensible and fluid, otherwise good work, I hope it is not abandoned.

LV 14

Gaada

This is by far, The worst thing ive tried to read. Dont get me wrong. The idea was great, but trying to read this. Hurt my head. I was having to guess at alot of parts. Because they didn't make since

You rocked it man great job,looking forward for more update I thought you stopped writing of this,but ok is a good come back any way I loved it and hehe is that venom plot

LV 1

SRK_Times

A concise plot summary of the book. An evaluation of the work. A recommendation for the audience. my I am getting more excited while reading it

LV 2

Unknown_Level

The story is good, but most people who read this watched the movies, so you don't have to explain the past, plus the writing style is sloppy and could be better.

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Daoist721221

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Corrupted_Puppet

I am sorry but this story just sucks dddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

LV 15

Brian70707

synopsis seems interesting but after reading 2 and a half chapters I realised it's a pointless read reasons, 1 first 2 chapters are reca** 2 it was Tony that said not to change the past to prevent his daughter from ceasing to exist even if he dies he would consider it worth it knowing she lives 3 it be a better story without a system just Tony's wealth and intellect 4 since he would be from the future he can recruit future avengers/ defenders/ those who would be loyal to him 5 since he is in past he could also learn mystic arts, he would already have great level of knowledge in various fields this way he has a few years worth of prospective learning time 6 can make further enhancment upon his suits

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Loved it,although there are few grammatical errors bout other than that the plot and story is a good start keep it and I hope to see more and how tony smash thanos looking forward to it