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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
So far the plot has been good, kinda suits my taste. And in an early chapter, while it may sound like the vibe of Library of Heaven's Path (Mc assuming a non existent master, but turns out to be a real person), it won't last for long and kinda won't cause a real problem in the story
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At first, when I wasn't reading the book, I had this thought: yeah, he gets into another world without magic and will slap all the young masters in the face, and then he will plagiarize paintings from his past world. At that point, I thought, dude, are you serious, what are you going to draw there? The Square Of Malevich ? And then after reading chapter 1, I realized that there is a world of cultivation and it will be somehow connected, like in the library of the heavenly path. I will continue reading further)
Same as many other novels i had the unfortunate experience to read today just waste of times and low effort not getting anyone to edit or spell checker sites you perfect your synopsis and first ch then after that you stop caring and its dumb just dont write ag that point sorry if this is harsh but i have many other novels like this in my library that i read one after the other from intrest to be let down
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I had high hopes for this story, but the further I read the more dissapointed I became with the System, the god behind it, and the main character. Not only does the system provide no help, it charges him money at every corner just to nickel and dime him, he’s provided no basic amenities or knowledge to survive in a world extremely unlike our own and is then berated nonstop for understanding nothing.
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I dropped at chapter 1 dialogue is terrible and inconsistent the cat says MC is a great artist then says he is d class and c class being able to draw a perfect picture ( totally idiotic due to paintings and drawings being based upon a person's perspective and it's history)
Honestly the only part that I hate with a passion is the fucking system. I also hate the beta cuck MC who tries to bargain with or please it, like man up already and teach the cunt a lesson. Apart from that though the writing quality, world background, and updating stabilty are top quality. This doesnt mean that I dont want to skin the author, though.
I'm not a fan so forgive me if I'm unnecessarily harsh also I'm not great at reviews and if you do decide to read i hope you enjoy. ------------------------------- The Story starts with our protagonist dying because god was skipping rocks and killed him and the system is like "oh no, Anyway". He is then given a choice between traveling the world or opening a shop and he has to make it in 90 seconds. Regardless of what he chooses he has to go to Origin city or something to do his artist exam to start off as a D grade artist. The oh so quirky and lovable system lily the white cat doesn't give him supplies or the money to take the exam but she decides in the moment to give him a half god item or something.(shape-shifting brush) He says some fake things that turn out true and takes the exam and is mistaken for being from somewhere by fake thing turned true. Stuff happens and he's elevated to C grade but a girl 1 year younger then him is at least a B grade so he wants to work harder. this is a lot of rambling ------------------------------- The characters don't connect to me and come off as annoying and unbearable. I read like 3-4 chapters in and it hasn't pulled me in at all and i know next to nothing. The main character also isn't interesting with him being the best artist or something at 16 years old in his old world and he also gets pushed around by the system and barely complains. Also please don't give me or others negatives comments just ask them to put something similar to what i did at the beginning Thanks for reading this cluster feck
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Overall it is a great story, however, it has it bad areas. The romance starts off fine, but it goes from a normal slowish paced romance to real quick development. It felt way too rushed. The event that led up to the fast development, which was supposed to be this big thing, felt kinda shoehorned and rushed over. It also helped further the romance too. If you ignore the two things above then it is a pretty good story. The first few chapters are definitely the best though.
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Great story so far. Looking forward to more, rated the world building at 4 because we still don't know much about it, but so far it's an amazing read with a unique view on the transmigration genre. The system, a.k.a. Lily, is great as well. Keep up the good work!
I think is book is pretty great and interesting. Would like to see more chapters from the book :D. There are some mistakes in the work but nothing too huge.
I am only reviewing because author asked for it. I think this is a super underrated book, deserves a ton of praise and more recognition. I love the dialogues and just about everything in this story.
I have to say, this is quite a epic book. Love all the references to other things, and respect for all the anime references! All classics and amazing 😃
This is a great book. I think everything in this story is very different. I don't think I've read a story where the system has a actual physical form, as well as one about an artist. The writing flows really well and the author is great at responding.
This is a great story, very interesting unique idea. Hope author keeps on writing this story. Story is quite emotional and just insanely good overall.
Super good book with an interesting storyline. Idk,, lots of people say how they find the system annoying and unreliable but... Iunno man, it amused me. Super underrated book.
Another gem hidden in web novel. I think this story is unique. the settings are good and you will also think of what will happen next. I hope the author update more in the future. good luck!
I think this is quite an interesting story. It's a unique idea, and that makes in interesting to read. Plus, this story, while it's also about a system makes the system have a physical body, which I think is pretty cool. I just wished it updated more often...
Hi. Pls read ty. <3 Yes, I'm reviewing my own work, but as the great Muramasa-sensei once said, an author should always give their book a 100 so that's what I'm going to do. Well anyways, I'm still surprised someone had already reviewed it?
Hi! PhilSwift here with FLEX TAPE... Ahem. I mean a review of the book Artist's Journey In Another World. So, a couple of things. 1. This book is an interesting concept. The concept of having an artist system never occured to me as a good idea as I had thought it would be quite boring. However, this story proved me wrong. In NO way was this boring. It is super funny and entertaining. 2. The writing is extremely detailed. The author clearly put a lot of effort into his writing and his use of descriptions is so amazing. He is able to write out emotional scenes perfectly, tugging on my heartstrings. He is able to paint an image of the surroundings(haha paint so funny) and is able to make each character serve a purpose. Yes, even the annoying af cat. 3. Speaking of the cat, the characters in this story are extremely detailed, allowing you to get a deeper understanding of them. The world is rich and interactions between the characters leave me smiling. 4. There are many different references to our world, which makes it really interesting. For example, Two Hole? Pretty sure that's just One Piece... The amount of books also checks out. 5. One of the only issues I have with the story is it's updating frequency. Unlike some other stories, this one only updates once a day, and has a slightly irregular update schedule. I mean, from what I can see so far, the author usually releases 8 chapters a week, but some days its 0 chapters, other days one, and others 2. Of course, I get that everyone has their own life and the author probably has other things to do. Overall, great book, I highly recommend you check it out. Hope the book gets more of the love that it deserves.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
So far the plot has been good, kinda suits my taste. And in an early chapter, while it may sound like the vibe of Library of Heaven's Path (Mc assuming a non existent master, but turns out to be a real person), it won't last for long and kinda won't cause a real problem in the story
Reveal Spoiler At first, when I wasn't reading the book, I had this thought: yeah, he gets into another world without magic and will slap all the young masters in the face, and then he will plagiarize paintings from his past world. At that point, I thought, dude, are you serious, what are you going to draw there? The Square Of Malevich ? And then after reading chapter 1, I realized that there is a world of cultivation and it will be somehow connected, like in the library of the heavenly path. I will continue reading further)
Same as many other novels i had the unfortunate experience to read today just waste of times and low effort not getting anyone to edit or spell checker sites you perfect your synopsis and first ch then after that you stop caring and its dumb just dont write ag that point sorry if this is harsh but i have many other novels like this in my library that i read one after the other from intrest to be let down
What I think about this piece of art 👍😳👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😳😳😁😁😁😁😃😁😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😁😁😃😃😁😁😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😁😃😁😁😃😃👍😃
I had high hopes for this story, but the further I read the more dissapointed I became with the System, the god behind it, and the main character. Not only does the system provide no help, it charges him money at every corner just to nickel and dime him, he’s provided no basic amenities or knowledge to survive in a world extremely unlike our own and is then berated nonstop for understanding nothing.
Reveal Spoiler one of thé crappiest story in thé whole universe e jakkbzmzmajkaknwnndskakhsjakakakakaka*nndndjksksbxnskamanshsjajjakajshwkqkajsjzjzjznsjsjsj
hjka NB aakanambsamabv Lvakavhkaa .mah CB ana BVN Adams BBC a cm ma a nm kavajavanavamavakaba VJ amacahjabacaanabcakabajnagakaancak. kakanahab
I dropped at chapter 1 dialogue is terrible and inconsistent the cat says MC is a great artist then says he is d class and c class being able to draw a perfect picture ( totally idiotic due to paintings and drawings being based upon a person's perspective and it's history)
Honestly the only part that I hate with a passion is the fucking system. I also hate the beta cuck MC who tries to bargain with or please it, like man up already and teach the cunt a lesson. Apart from that though the writing quality, world background, and updating stabilty are top quality. This doesnt mean that I dont want to skin the author, though.
I'm not a fan so forgive me if I'm unnecessarily harsh also I'm not great at reviews and if you do decide to read i hope you enjoy. ------------------------------- The Story starts with our protagonist dying because god was skipping rocks and killed him and the system is like "oh no, Anyway". He is then given a choice between traveling the world or opening a shop and he has to make it in 90 seconds. Regardless of what he chooses he has to go to Origin city or something to do his artist exam to start off as a D grade artist. The oh so quirky and lovable system lily the white cat doesn't give him supplies or the money to take the exam but she decides in the moment to give him a half god item or something.(shape-shifting brush) He says some fake things that turn out true and takes the exam and is mistaken for being from somewhere by fake thing turned true. Stuff happens and he's elevated to C grade but a girl 1 year younger then him is at least a B grade so he wants to work harder. this is a lot of rambling ------------------------------- The characters don't connect to me and come off as annoying and unbearable. I read like 3-4 chapters in and it hasn't pulled me in at all and i know next to nothing. The main character also isn't interesting with him being the best artist or something at 16 years old in his old world and he also gets pushed around by the system and barely complains. Also please don't give me or others negatives comments just ask them to put something similar to what i did at the beginning Thanks for reading this cluster feck
Reveal Spoiler Overall it is a great story, however, it has it bad areas. The romance starts off fine, but it goes from a normal slowish paced romance to real quick development. It felt way too rushed. The event that led up to the fast development, which was supposed to be this big thing, felt kinda shoehorned and rushed over. It also helped further the romance too. If you ignore the two things above then it is a pretty good story. The first few chapters are definitely the best though.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Great story so far. Looking forward to more, rated the world building at 4 because we still don't know much about it, but so far it's an amazing read with a unique view on the transmigration genre. The system, a.k.a. Lily, is great as well. Keep up the good work!
I think is book is pretty great and interesting. Would like to see more chapters from the book :D. There are some mistakes in the work but nothing too huge.
I am only reviewing because author asked for it. I think this is a super underrated book, deserves a ton of praise and more recognition. I love the dialogues and just about everything in this story.
I have to say, this is quite a epic book. Love all the references to other things, and respect for all the anime references! All classics and amazing 😃
This is a great book. I think everything in this story is very different. I don't think I've read a story where the system has a actual physical form, as well as one about an artist. The writing flows really well and the author is great at responding.
This is a great story, very interesting unique idea. Hope author keeps on writing this story. Story is quite emotional and just insanely good overall.
Super good book with an interesting storyline. Idk,, lots of people say how they find the system annoying and unreliable but... Iunno man, it amused me. Super underrated book.
Another gem hidden in web novel. I think this story is unique. the settings are good and you will also think of what will happen next. I hope the author update more in the future. good luck!
I think this is quite an interesting story. It's a unique idea, and that makes in interesting to read. Plus, this story, while it's also about a system makes the system have a physical body, which I think is pretty cool. I just wished it updated more often...
Hi. Pls read ty. <3 Yes, I'm reviewing my own work, but as the great Muramasa-sensei once said, an author should always give their book a 100 so that's what I'm going to do. Well anyways, I'm still surprised someone had already reviewed it?
Hi! PhilSwift here with FLEX TAPE... Ahem. I mean a review of the book Artist's Journey In Another World. So, a couple of things. 1. This book is an interesting concept. The concept of having an artist system never occured to me as a good idea as I had thought it would be quite boring. However, this story proved me wrong. In NO way was this boring. It is super funny and entertaining. 2. The writing is extremely detailed. The author clearly put a lot of effort into his writing and his use of descriptions is so amazing. He is able to write out emotional scenes perfectly, tugging on my heartstrings. He is able to paint an image of the surroundings(haha paint so funny) and is able to make each character serve a purpose. Yes, even the annoying af cat. 3. Speaking of the cat, the characters in this story are extremely detailed, allowing you to get a deeper understanding of them. The world is rich and interactions between the characters leave me smiling. 4. There are many different references to our world, which makes it really interesting. For example, Two Hole? Pretty sure that's just One Piece... The amount of books also checks out. 5. One of the only issues I have with the story is it's updating frequency. Unlike some other stories, this one only updates once a day, and has a slightly irregular update schedule. I mean, from what I can see so far, the author usually releases 8 chapters a week, but some days its 0 chapters, other days one, and others 2. Of course, I get that everyone has their own life and the author probably has other things to do. Overall, great book, I highly recommend you check it out. Hope the book gets more of the love that it deserves.