i reincarnated as Allen walker,the protagonist of d.gray man

LV 4

NEETsemsalvasao

I only continued to read because of my desires and because I am a fan of glutton berserker but there is no positive point in the whole damn story since reincarnation until now, it is just a plagiarism of the original with the only difference being the inferior quality of writing, and with allen walker being even more naive, and in just 7 chapters i saw so many holes in the plot, how akuma's soul goes to heaven if gluttons devour souls to gain the skills. **: if you thought bad grammar was better try this story.

LV 4

StayathomeDad

I love the concept and the powers are great choices you also update a good amount of time but they way you structure your sentences is horrible and your grammar is so off and top it off there's extra words in some sentences that don't need to be there and some sentences are missing words

LV 14

W_D_3766

I've been waiting for a grey man fabric even if the writing is bad id still donate 10 to 20 dollars yet its a good one and the writing is good and totally worth reading

LV 4

maelvoid_2025

I've never seen a story were the mc gets mori jin / goh kind martial arts cause it's super powerful in my opinion. For the harem why not add road since in the original she had a relationship with Allen/Mana.

LV 15

glen

The premise is great! But the background of the story is just d.gray man with extra steps. the grammar makes me want to hang my head in the letter g of the english. Overall ill keep reading and see if this improves overtime🙂 hard to find D.gray man fIcs that doesnt makes me want to scream Geeehy.

LV 6

FAP_Master_

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LV 3

AllFiction

Written in Google Translate. Being completely sincere, the work is monotonous, boring, the author makes horrible decisions in most cases, his writing is irritating (absurdly large phrases, which make reading difficult in certain cases), the Protagonist does not demonstrate to be something 'Alive ', he just seems to speak and have emotions at certain times, his personality before reincarnating and after having Allen's Personality merged with his is practically the same and many other mistakes. (And yet ... the choice of mate he made, I really expected someone better, and not ... 'that' being, is super disappointing.) (part of the review with spoiler) (Including the excuse of 'not having exciting battles' for the Protagonist not wanting Immortality, this is stupid.)

LV 4

ArchanAzrael

no empece a leerlo pero ya le pongo 5 estrellas allen walker con harem donde firmo gracias por traerlo gracias gracias gracias gracias.............