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Write a reviewIt is a tough time to be a reader who cares about grammar. And I must say that reading light novels and webnovels have softened me somewhat. But if an author were lazy about basic grammar, what else in the book might they have gotten wrong?
The story, motivations and personalities of the characters are worked out perfectly. their actions are not out of character. The plot develops logically and interestingly. When I first started reading, I didn't notice that 50 chapters had passed.
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this book is fantastic from my point of view from the characters to the world building, while i normally go with lighter books the story pulls me in even with the dark bit here and there making a setting you can see happening while avoiding cliches. Only problems is that with the excellent story writing the few error throws u off a bit but it can't compare to it's the greatness. really to read more of this and for others to read and enjoy it
It's overall a really good book. The writers good at keeping the story interesting and not forgetting the things he put in earlier in the story. It does have issues with the wording and grammar as it's seems the author is non-native English speaking, however it's not so bad that you can't immerse yourself in his world.
Some minor grammar problems and wrong words at times but otherwise a good read. The progress is ok not fast or slow but a decent pace hope more is released regularly in the future
This is just another one of those great stories that unfortunately falls between the cracks as more and more people are blinded by spam bad grammar and plot stories that are somehow at the top of the list. But if you take the time out of your day and read this I'm pretty sure if you enjoy the genre you will enjoy the story. I just finished binge reading 39 chapters and I enjoyed every bit of it. Looking forward to seeing how the author will advance the story from here.
Worth the read, with great world-building, and characters whose actions make sense. No wish-fulfillment or any other bullshit. Overall great book but the grammar could be better the same with the number updates.
It is a tough time to be a reader who cares about grammar. And I must say that reading light novels and webnovels have softened me somewhat. But if an author were lazy about basic grammar, what else in the book might they have gotten wrong?
The story, motivations and personalities of the characters are worked out perfectly. their actions are not out of character. The plot develops logically and interestingly. When I first started reading, I didn't notice that 50 chapters had passed.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Awaken everything time you hear the drums of war Awaken Awaken. 🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶 🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶
this book is fantastic from my point of view from the characters to the world building, while i normally go with lighter books the story pulls me in even with the dark bit here and there making a setting you can see happening while avoiding cliches. Only problems is that with the excellent story writing the few error throws u off a bit but it can't compare to it's the greatness. really to read more of this and for others to read and enjoy it
It's overall a really good book. The writers good at keeping the story interesting and not forgetting the things he put in earlier in the story. It does have issues with the wording and grammar as it's seems the author is non-native English speaking, however it's not so bad that you can't immerse yourself in his world.
Some minor grammar problems and wrong words at times but otherwise a good read. The progress is ok not fast or slow but a decent pace hope more is released regularly in the future
This is just another one of those great stories that unfortunately falls between the cracks as more and more people are blinded by spam bad grammar and plot stories that are somehow at the top of the list. But if you take the time out of your day and read this I'm pretty sure if you enjoy the genre you will enjoy the story. I just finished binge reading 39 chapters and I enjoyed every bit of it. Looking forward to seeing how the author will advance the story from here.
Worth the read, with great world-building, and characters whose actions make sense. No wish-fulfillment or any other bullshit. Overall great book but the grammar could be better the same with the number updates.