Well guys I will just change from 3rd person to 1st person and see if it gets better. (Author)
"Okay the first thing I have read about apocalypses is that I need to grab lots of water and canned food, I think I can manage that now, "I said while trying to figure out my next plan.
Making up my mind I decided to do the easiest thing."Time to rob my neighbors."
Opening room after room, I managed to harvest cookies some bottles of water, instant ramen, and lots of sweets.
Walking near the stairs I hear a couple of *Huuuuuuh* sound well the sound of zombies, they just make too much noise to go unnoticed.
Looking at the stairs I found 3 zombies walking up. Inspecting them I found a strange thing.
[Stage 1- Edgy Zombie
40/40 HP
Level:5
Skills: None
Note: A normal zombie he just as anger issues. ]
"I can't fight them like this." Thinking a little bit more about it,I decided to do it.
It's time to ... Run. Well, you might think I'm a coward but there is one thing I learned in a grocery shop is that you can't fight if you don't have a 90% chance of winning, right now is one of those times.
Hall too spacious could fit both of them and some more to fight, they outnumber me and I don't have anything to hit them hard with, besides I'm doubting the veracity of this stick.
And so I ran to my room and looked out of the window.
"Escape route secured." Looking at the tree that is near the next door window I immediately knew what to do.
Looking at the tree, I start questioning my sanity. I'm way too calm in this situation, well people already pointed a gun right into my face so what can be worse than that right?
If I catch that little bastard I swear I'll skin him alive.
Since that day I decided one thing gets paid less but in a safe zone. Grocery stores near bars and clubs never it only was 5 hours since I had accepted the job thinking it would be easy, how wrong could I be got robbed 2times in that time frame... what did the 2nd gang groupthink when they saw the cashier empty? That it was me... why would he even think it was me to begin whit I was an employee, forget it no need to remember such complex creatures.
Moving on this tree was planted by generations before us, horny men need a way to run from the dorm stealthily I called their operation •Horny men in heat• why? Cause they were horny and in heat because when they succeeded some unknown fire of passion would burn inside them and they would yell like a crazy person.
"Well, I guess I'll just jump." I said while looking downward.
And so I jumped and grabbed a branch
Luckily I'm skinny so the branch could support me, slowly I got down safely.
Genuinely impressed by my fitness, maybe it's because of the Attribute Points I used.
Looking around I found out that there were zombies coming toward my direction, so I ran to the parking lot.
Survival Rule Number 2 acquire safe transportation.so I ran to a school bus.
To my unhappiness, I see the bus wouldn't open. Truth be told I already knew this would happen.
"It's not like I will find the keys on the floor." I said dejectedly while walking back.
Avoiding the crowds of zombies I managed to enter the main building of the school it's time to find the office they should have some bus keys.
I was naive... why was I naive? Because this freaking place had teams of two zombies walking around.
Unable to fight them or scared of doing any noise I tiptoed to a classroom and closed the door.
Looking around the room I found a zombie crawling toward me. "Lucky" I was to the zombie and inspect it.
[Stage 1 Zombie - Mademoiselle (Crippled)
25/25 HP
Level: 3
Skill: None
Note: Young beauty turned into a zombie such a shame she!! ]
Reading everything I instantly become speechless." what are these names?" shaking my head I start hitting the zombie.
[-5 HP]
...
[-5 HP]
And so the zombie died whit-out putting many fights.
[+10 experience points]
[Level bonus experience points: +20 experience points]
"That's pleasing to hear". I said whit a grin in my head.
Looking at the spot where the zombie should have been I could see 6 copper coins picking them up.
Its really satisfying to just watch the coins disappear and the count of money increases.
''Status'' I said in my mind.
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Status window:
Name: Zen
Race: Human
Level:2(40/50)
Health:20/20
Mana:5/5
Strenght:4(1)
Agility:5(2)
Stamina:4
Intelligence:6
AP:0
Skills:
[Low Detection] Level (0/4)(Cost:2 Mana): Allows the user to detect the level and Skills of enemies, this skill can be level can be increased whit skill point.
SP:1
Coins: 15 copper
Equipment: Granny's Stick
Note: Nothing to be proud about.
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Please Give your opinion if its a better idea to use the 3rd person or 1st.