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nice story with gojo character, it nice how the story devolope and how gojo not to op.
Me encanta... Muchas gracias al autor por un fanfic tan hermoso. Me encantó mucho también que escuchar los soundtrack de Naruto Shippuden mientras leía la historia fue épico.Realmente espero cuando se pueda seguir con la novela y leer su final... ¡Gracias de nuevo por esta obra de arte!❤️👌🏻😊
Can't say anything other then, read it. Trust me it is real good. If the Author is reading this, will this be continued or is it completely dropped?
jai tres bien aimer par contre pourquoi l'auteur ne poste t'il plus alors qu'il a des chapitre sur sont patreon , a t'il totalement abandoner ?
jai tres bien aimer par contre pourquoi l'auteur ne poste t'il plus alors qu'il a des chapitre sur sont patreon .............................
The writing quality’s good, but I don’t like the fact that you just killed off Ichigo by making his mom gay, this story just an’t for me.
Me encantaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ........... \(♡•♡)/ Amo a Satoru ♡♡♡♡♡♡.............!!!! Excelente desarrollo de la historia \(>.<)/.....♡♡♡ Adoro como trata a las personas que ama.......!!!!!!!!
the way the author makes the evolution of the character both mentally and aesthetically is simply "perfect". the way the main character interacts with the world the characters both the main and supporting characters is also very good. also in the way he learns about the world itself the skills the hierarchy other people's stories and also very good.
Literally the best bleach fanfiction out of 20 I have read so far Please update quickly as we are waiting in anticipation for the next chapter for Zaraki vs ulquiorra.,.................................................................................................................................................... . ..................
Extremamente óbvio, infantil e clichê. Extremamente óbvio, infantil e clichê. Extremamente óbvio, infantil e clichê.Extremamente óbvio, infantilExtremamente óbvio, infantil e clichê. e clichê.
Author i absolutely love your fanfic. But I gotta disagree on the part where you keep emphasizing that gojo is not a good man and he wouldn't care if innocent people died. I feel that you're wrong. Gojo is a good man and he would help them if he could. He hesitates to let innocent people die. Like in the Shibuya arc he hesitated to use domain expansion because if he did many people would die. But he ended up using it because he would if he didn't. He's a teacher and he's got the soul of a teacher. He wanted to take care of the future by educating the kids. This shows that he's a good man and that he hates the higher ups. If he wasn't, he wouldn't hate them. He's not loyal to an organisation. He's loyal to his morals and ideals. This is the only thing that is a turn off for me in your novel. Gojo wouldn't have innocent people die if he could help it. He would never question himself whether he should involve himself in whatever conspiracy is going on which causes the death of many innocent people and kids.
Good on balancing the power level of Gojo with Bleach. Interesting interactions with characters. Overall a good novel if not for the delated updates or no updates at all after Ch 191 with no notification on whether it will continue or not. So not recommended for those who like complete/ongoing no hiatus stories.
Tirando o fato de não ter capítulo da 1° noite com a Unohana, é a frequência de capítulos ser horrível, eu consigo essa história uma das melhores, recomendo que leiam
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This fanfic is one of the best Bleach fanfics I've ever seen. Gojo's personality was very well represented and I really love that the author is making him more "human", truly caring about people besides himself. I just want to do one suggestion that he recreate Sukuna's and other characters' cursed techniques (I know he recreated some cursed techniques like <Black Flash>, but he could recreate many more techniques than that). He could recreate techniques like Inumaki's <Jugon> and Mahito's <Mui Tenpen>. I know there are a lot of differences between the two worlds, but since he recreated some, he might figure out how to make the others cursed techniques.
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It's writers like you that make me want to get back into these animes, and rewatch the entire series, as well as read the Manga 😭🤌🏼 ...like I know Gojo is OP in a lot of areas, but showing that he still has room to grow and he actively acknowledges that he is not the strongest yet is my favorite part of this whole thing. And showing that he cannot just one shot his opponents, and is actually struggling while also showing an adept advantage, is one of my favorite parts as well. Now let's just wait till the next chappie because look I am ready and I am here for it!!!
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(wrote this at chapter 163) I always hate reading good unfinished fanfiction, it leaves me with an helpless feeling inside me. Especially bleach fanfiction since there aren't many good ones... This bleach fanfiction is very good so far. I very much enjoy this adventure and story since the plot is good and interesting, plus the MC doesn't act outside of his character or do stupid things. The author also don't do cliché plots to mess with the MC... The grammar is without problems, which is something I consider a must when reading... There were some parts during the story I thought to myself 'why did the author do this or that, it's going to ruin everything!' But as I read more, I found out how everything connected perfectly and the story only became more wholesome. All in all, this bleach fanfiction is highly recommended to anyone who likes this gender.
I really liked the story, but I'll have to abandon it, I don't speak and understand English. But if you upload this to another platform I will read it, if I can translate it obviously
So basically, Gojo is straight up taking the Soul Society for a ride through chaotic times, which is perfectly in his character, as well as getting a cool shikai and bankai, I feel like this story is quite good. Unfortunately, I'm bad at reviews so I'll end this here.
Best novel ever. The characters are so alive and with their own personalities and trait. Every chapter is gold and not a ripoff of the anime. Thank you very much!!
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The story is not bad but the chapters are pretty short and the style is sometimes hard to read . Biggest issues are the flow of the story due to edit or style choices. sometimes it just doesn't run smoothly and Gojo feels kinda extra in the world up until now,he interacts with the world but he doesn't read or feel like a part of it. His character is sometimes borderline OC but stays at least in the bounds of what i would believe of Gojo. all in all a solid fanfic but not my Style
GREAT FF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...but MOAR LEMON, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ...................................................................................................................................................
The best fanfic I’ve read, author have vast knowledge about bleach and JJK by portraying each character exactly as in manga/anime. I really love mc like Gojo showing how arrogant and caring at the same time, each move he made bring benefit to him and everyone around him. I really hope author keep continuing your work because I feel like ichigo won’t be in this FF. I want to see him so bad in this FF and continue to TYBW arc. Anyway thanks gor this great novel.
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ok this is genuinely a decent ff, but authore is constantly ranting every other chapter at beginning or end of chapter which became annoying after a while, plus lately he isn't posting chapters just link for donations and his personal website which isn't too user-friendly for mobile readers. my advice is that if you aren't a fan of reading on browsers don't waste ur time with this story.
I have a question, when will this wonderful story be continued? I'm really waiting for the author to update this since this story is the best bleach story I've read in the last 6 months
nice story with gojo character, it nice how the story devolope and how gojo not to op.
Me encanta... Muchas gracias al autor por un fanfic tan hermoso. Me encantó mucho también que escuchar los soundtrack de Naruto Shippuden mientras leía la historia fue épico.Realmente espero cuando se pueda seguir con la novela y leer su final... ¡Gracias de nuevo por esta obra de arte!❤️👌🏻😊
Can't say anything other then, read it. Trust me it is real good. If the Author is reading this, will this be continued or is it completely dropped?
jai tres bien aimer par contre pourquoi l'auteur ne poste t'il plus alors qu'il a des chapitre sur sont patreon , a t'il totalement abandoner ?
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The writing quality’s good, but I don’t like the fact that you just killed off Ichigo by making his mom gay, this story just an’t for me.
Me encantaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ........... \(♡•♡)/ Amo a Satoru ♡♡♡♡♡♡.............!!!! Excelente desarrollo de la historia \(>.<)/.....♡♡♡ Adoro como trata a las personas que ama.......!!!!!!!!
the way the author makes the evolution of the character both mentally and aesthetically is simply "perfect". the way the main character interacts with the world the characters both the main and supporting characters is also very good. also in the way he learns about the world itself the skills the hierarchy other people's stories and also very good.
Literally the best bleach fanfiction out of 20 I have read so far Please update quickly as we are waiting in anticipation for the next chapter for Zaraki vs ulquiorra.,.................................................................................................................................................... . ..................
Extremamente óbvio, infantil e clichê. Extremamente óbvio, infantil e clichê. Extremamente óbvio, infantil e clichê.Extremamente óbvio, infantilExtremamente óbvio, infantil e clichê. e clichê.
Author i absolutely love your fanfic. But I gotta disagree on the part where you keep emphasizing that gojo is not a good man and he wouldn't care if innocent people died. I feel that you're wrong. Gojo is a good man and he would help them if he could. He hesitates to let innocent people die. Like in the Shibuya arc he hesitated to use domain expansion because if he did many people would die. But he ended up using it because he would if he didn't. He's a teacher and he's got the soul of a teacher. He wanted to take care of the future by educating the kids. This shows that he's a good man and that he hates the higher ups. If he wasn't, he wouldn't hate them. He's not loyal to an organisation. He's loyal to his morals and ideals. This is the only thing that is a turn off for me in your novel. Gojo wouldn't have innocent people die if he could help it. He would never question himself whether he should involve himself in whatever conspiracy is going on which causes the death of many innocent people and kids.
Good on balancing the power level of Gojo with Bleach. Interesting interactions with characters. Overall a good novel if not for the delated updates or no updates at all after Ch 191 with no notification on whether it will continue or not. So not recommended for those who like complete/ongoing no hiatus stories.
Tirando o fato de não ter capítulo da 1° noite com a Unohana, é a frequência de capítulos ser horrível, eu consigo essa história uma das melhores, recomendo que leiam
Reveal Spoiler This fanfic is one of the best Bleach fanfics I've ever seen. Gojo's personality was very well represented and I really love that the author is making him more "human", truly caring about people besides himself. I just want to do one suggestion that he recreate Sukuna's and other characters' cursed techniques (I know he recreated some cursed techniques like <Black Flash>, but he could recreate many more techniques than that). He could recreate techniques like Inumaki's <Jugon> and Mahito's <Mui Tenpen>. I know there are a lot of differences between the two worlds, but since he recreated some, he might figure out how to make the others cursed techniques.
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It's writers like you that make me want to get back into these animes, and rewatch the entire series, as well as read the Manga 😭🤌🏼 ...like I know Gojo is OP in a lot of areas, but showing that he still has room to grow and he actively acknowledges that he is not the strongest yet is my favorite part of this whole thing. And showing that he cannot just one shot his opponents, and is actually struggling while also showing an adept advantage, is one of my favorite parts as well. Now let's just wait till the next chappie because look I am ready and I am here for it!!!
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(wrote this at chapter 163) I always hate reading good unfinished fanfiction, it leaves me with an helpless feeling inside me. Especially bleach fanfiction since there aren't many good ones... This bleach fanfiction is very good so far. I very much enjoy this adventure and story since the plot is good and interesting, plus the MC doesn't act outside of his character or do stupid things. The author also don't do cliché plots to mess with the MC... The grammar is without problems, which is something I consider a must when reading... There were some parts during the story I thought to myself 'why did the author do this or that, it's going to ruin everything!' But as I read more, I found out how everything connected perfectly and the story only became more wholesome. All in all, this bleach fanfiction is highly recommended to anyone who likes this gender.
I really liked the story, but I'll have to abandon it, I don't speak and understand English. But if you upload this to another platform I will read it, if I can translate it obviously
So basically, Gojo is straight up taking the Soul Society for a ride through chaotic times, which is perfectly in his character, as well as getting a cool shikai and bankai, I feel like this story is quite good. Unfortunately, I'm bad at reviews so I'll end this here.
Best novel ever. The characters are so alive and with their own personalities and trait. Every chapter is gold and not a ripoff of the anime. Thank you very much!!
Membosankan 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
The story is not bad but the chapters are pretty short and the style is sometimes hard to read . Biggest issues are the flow of the story due to edit or style choices. sometimes it just doesn't run smoothly and Gojo feels kinda extra in the world up until now,he interacts with the world but he doesn't read or feel like a part of it. His character is sometimes borderline OC but stays at least in the bounds of what i would believe of Gojo. all in all a solid fanfic but not my Style
GREAT FF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...but MOAR LEMON, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ...................................................................................................................................................
The best fanfic I’ve read, author have vast knowledge about bleach and JJK by portraying each character exactly as in manga/anime. I really love mc like Gojo showing how arrogant and caring at the same time, each move he made bring benefit to him and everyone around him. I really hope author keep continuing your work because I feel like ichigo won’t be in this FF. I want to see him so bad in this FF and continue to TYBW arc. Anyway thanks gor this great novel.
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ok this is genuinely a decent ff, but authore is constantly ranting every other chapter at beginning or end of chapter which became annoying after a while, plus lately he isn't posting chapters just link for donations and his personal website which isn't too user-friendly for mobile readers. my advice is that if you aren't a fan of reading on browsers don't waste ur time with this story.
I have a question, when will this wonderful story be continued? I'm really waiting for the author to update this since this story is the best bleach story I've read in the last 6 months