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greatly enjoyed reading this to completion. Seemed a little rushed to the end, but curious to see if the author will continue like he said
the least u can do on your own books is make sure u type right, stop switching he and her and pay attention nobody wants to read somethen like that
where to start... 1. to many plot holes in the first 10 chapters to even count. 2. pls do NOT use logic in any form while reading this book. Even basic abilities to function as a human are being thrown out of the window. 3. Bad writing quality, lots of words missing and no grammar program etc. was used to help the lacking vocabulary. 4. the MC is dumb as a brick, not sure how he functioned as a human being before but he appears to be incredible in bed 5. do not spend money on that book!!!
I Made it to chapter 36 i liked it but the harem was forced i feel like. All my man hade to do was have *** with them then they just were loyal and did whatever he said Like come on
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To be honest I read these novel to chapter 50 it's a good novel no doubt about it good background and easy to understand but the MC of the novel is perverted and the heram tag prove it in the novel you don't go for romantic them it's brutal world the stronger you are the more woman you get in starting the MC is mature but after few chapter he became to childish so that's it
I mean wow. Character is an idiot and incompetend. Attributes make no sense. Writting quality is eh, not the worst but also miled from good. Writing style is jumpy and nonsensical. The rough idea of it is decent, but the execution is very lacking.
Too excessive in exclamation lose the class and impact in words unlike some with the right flow of the story. Started with a bang then ended in a stretcher. Too narrative the story should tell itself
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nice one....one of the best.. plz any one tell me RAW name of this novel.. or lmntl.com site novel name....plz😔 plz . I want read all ....plz.......................
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
So i downloaded the webnovel app recently and this was the first book recommended for me to read and i read 40 chapters of it before making this review. - The translation/writing is okay, it's got a lot more grammatical and typos than average but it's not the absolute worst i've seen. - The story is a system + harem with *** scenes occurring at an average of every 2 chapters, plus the MC is noted in the beginning as having a really high libido which only gets worse as he becomes stronger. - What's actually nets this review a lower score, is the way everyone interacts with the MC. All the girls make him out to be a "protector of women's rights" when he constantly takes advantage of women as well. Everything else is okay i guess, but the story is still pretty much in the prologue 40 chapters in and the harem is already at 5 wives (who were all virgins even though one was the owner of a brothel apparently) and that's not including one night stands, "concubines" and a 15/16 year old child...
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
The author start with a massive plot hole by saying no newbie lv 9 or lower can be killed by other no even indirectly but after that he simple ignore this and time an time again show low level people are killed
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i need to write 140 words i need to write 140 words i need to write 140 words i need to write 140 words i need to write 140 wordsi need to write 140 wordsi need to write 140 words
You set the bar high in the prologue, and it's intriguing and I have the feeling it would be unfolded supeeerrr slowly! Just don't do it much because readers will lost interest unless you have something spicy up in your sleeve LOL, good luck author! Thank you for sharing this story!
Its quite good the start and all but the harem is too force they all wanna sleep with him even after just hearing about him if ure expecting some kind of romance there is none they just f*ck and they’re already together
Good book love comeing from my friends I love it best book ever it's so good and I realized some people have amazingly great talent and books are cool.
Good. Love the mystery of it. That's all. I've read the other books of this author and I hope this novel won't disappoint like the rest of them
It is good keep going space out updates so people can catch up but also not to long or to quickly and done now to 140 letters.hrgrhrhhrhrhrr
I haven't read it but why is it called top secret adventures in the dark continent rather than with out the TOP SECRET. I don't understand so can someone clarify for me? As long is reasonable and not some like click bait or edge.
A solid 5 till now. Just give it a go everyone. I want some mystery to reveal in very end of novel to make it more interesting. I just hope it will not turn into typical ones . Will change the review after every 20 chapters.
I have the other book and so far it's great I hope it is the same as the last one I hope it has r18 on this one because the other it only has a little bit of action on the bed then it skip it other then that I hope is still the same
Well I been following Chomps work for a while now and this story seems to be a new idea. Magic realism seems the theme but not sure yet as is just beginning but for sure should be some game elements with the Tutorial still to be shown ehehe
A good story that shows the dark side of the world charismatic main character you root for him and I was very moved by the ending I eagerly await the continuation of the new story
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greatly enjoyed reading this to completion. Seemed a little rushed to the end, but curious to see if the author will continue like he said
the least u can do on your own books is make sure u type right, stop switching he and her and pay attention nobody wants to read somethen like that
where to start... 1. to many plot holes in the first 10 chapters to even count. 2. pls do NOT use logic in any form while reading this book. Even basic abilities to function as a human are being thrown out of the window. 3. Bad writing quality, lots of words missing and no grammar program etc. was used to help the lacking vocabulary. 4. the MC is dumb as a brick, not sure how he functioned as a human being before but he appears to be incredible in bed 5. do not spend money on that book!!!
I Made it to chapter 36 i liked it but the harem was forced i feel like. All my man hade to do was have *** with them then they just were loyal and did whatever he said Like come on
a fucking gem [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
To be honest I read these novel to chapter 50 it's a good novel no doubt about it good background and easy to understand but the MC of the novel is perverted and the heram tag prove it in the novel you don't go for romantic them it's brutal world the stronger you are the more woman you get in starting the MC is mature but after few chapter he became to childish so that's it
I mean wow. Character is an idiot and incompetend. Attributes make no sense. Writting quality is eh, not the worst but also miled from good. Writing style is jumpy and nonsensical. The rough idea of it is decent, but the execution is very lacking.
Too excessive in exclamation lose the class and impact in words unlike some with the right flow of the story. Started with a bang then ended in a stretcher. Too narrative the story should tell itself
Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp
Reveal Spoiler nice one....one of the best.. plz any one tell me RAW name of this novel.. or lmntl.com site novel name....plz😔 plz . I want read all ....plz.......................
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
So i downloaded the webnovel app recently and this was the first book recommended for me to read and i read 40 chapters of it before making this review. - The translation/writing is okay, it's got a lot more grammatical and typos than average but it's not the absolute worst i've seen. - The story is a system + harem with *** scenes occurring at an average of every 2 chapters, plus the MC is noted in the beginning as having a really high libido which only gets worse as he becomes stronger. - What's actually nets this review a lower score, is the way everyone interacts with the MC. All the girls make him out to be a "protector of women's rights" when he constantly takes advantage of women as well. Everything else is okay i guess, but the story is still pretty much in the prologue 40 chapters in and the harem is already at 5 wives (who were all virgins even though one was the owner of a brothel apparently) and that's not including one night stands, "concubines" and a 15/16 year old child...
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
The author start with a massive plot hole by saying no newbie lv 9 or lower can be killed by other no even indirectly but after that he simple ignore this and time an time again show low level people are killed
Reveal Spoiler i need to write 140 words i need to write 140 words i need to write 140 words i need to write 140 words i need to write 140 wordsi need to write 140 wordsi need to write 140 words
You set the bar high in the prologue, and it's intriguing and I have the feeling it would be unfolded supeeerrr slowly! Just don't do it much because readers will lost interest unless you have something spicy up in your sleeve LOL, good luck author! Thank you for sharing this story!
Its quite good the start and all but the harem is too force they all wanna sleep with him even after just hearing about him if ure expecting some kind of romance there is none they just f*ck and they’re already together
Good book love comeing from my friends I love it best book ever it's so good and I realized some people have amazingly great talent and books are cool.
Good. Love the mystery of it. That's all. I've read the other books of this author and I hope this novel won't disappoint like the rest of them
It is good keep going space out updates so people can catch up but also not to long or to quickly and done now to 140 letters.hrgrhrhhrhrhrr
I haven't read it but why is it called top secret adventures in the dark continent rather than with out the TOP SECRET. I don't understand so can someone clarify for me? As long is reasonable and not some like click bait or edge.
A solid 5 till now. Just give it a go everyone. I want some mystery to reveal in very end of novel to make it more interesting. I just hope it will not turn into typical ones . Will change the review after every 20 chapters.
I have the other book and so far it's great I hope it is the same as the last one I hope it has r18 on this one because the other it only has a little bit of action on the bed then it skip it other then that I hope is still the same
Well I been following Chomps work for a while now and this story seems to be a new idea. Magic realism seems the theme but not sure yet as is just beginning but for sure should be some game elements with the Tutorial still to be shown ehehe
A good story that shows the dark side of the world charismatic main character you root for him and I was very moved by the ending I eagerly await the continuation of the new story