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este fanfic no me pertenece solo quiero re subirlo para que lo lean que es muy bueno ☺☺
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SINOPSIS: Nuestro protagonista es alguien que llega al mundo de Naruto, en el Clan Hyuga -- pero tiene un sistema quien se atreverá a llamarlo desperdicio después de mostrar su fuerza..
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Not eligible !!! Out of order words, big grammatical errors. Furthermore, the main character is boring, pessimistic and complains about everything. The idea of a decent fanfic of naturo is still just a dream ..... :(
es muy bueno pero esta un poco enredado es como si fuera un universo paralelo... . . . . . . .. . .. ............................. .. .... .M♥♥♥♥
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.,. . . . . . . . . . ....Poco legible Personaje: se queja de todo aún teniendo poderes súper op desde el principio . . . . . . . . . -De en serio se queja de todo -las conversaciones pierde su objetivo al tener poca coerencia -desarrollo de personaje poco (prácticamente cliché)
He is a Chinese trying to write something Japanese, but he continues with the same Chinese ****. Click on ****, this is not even readable......................................................... ..... ....
bueno hasta donde ley ................. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- zaz