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It is good, the mc isn’t as OP as you would expect because he has doomsday’s powers work more slowly unless he dies. Very good read and he is consistent with the MC’s abilities.
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I saw in chapter you said someone rated 2 stars bc the pacing is slow so here I am. My personal opinion is everything fits even with the mc anger, Saiyans are known for being naturally aggressive and brutal and combine that with doomsday mentality I think it fits the mc and it has it own charm to it because the mc is trying to keep his human side while undergoing emotional changed due to the other 2 races. Next the pacing isn’t bad either I don’t know why people want to see just fighting and no character or other types of development it all fits the way it is. it’s overall great to me I’m not an author so I don’t know about what could help and what’s wrong with the book but I like it🤷♂️🤷♂️
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I think that the story is very good and i like it a lot, even though i am more of a marvel man myself than dc. There are some spelling mistakes but don’t worry about it, just read it a couple of times before uploading it and try to fix the problems and it should be alright. Thanks for the story!!
Overall I love the story, most people say that the pacing is slow but rushing it will ruin the story. Great work and Can't wait to see more.
Can't wait to see another chapter, I really like this fanfic ...........,..............................................................ngdkydoydkydkyfykdhkdykdoydoydkydkydkyfkyfkyxkyxkyxky
will wait..m authot has dropped over 10 novels, 1 reached higher than 60 and the others 20-30 chapters before being dropped.
Not gonna lie the grammar here and there could use some reviewing but overall I love this story a lot best take I’ve seen on dc and another story merge aside from one other story. Keep up the great work man
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I belive it good story so far and not the normal Psychopath in this app who is find with the mc haveing emotion and not try to kill everthing But I do dislike how the mc seem to aggront and it make so most charaters are just scare of him before he do any thing
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Bruh your updating status is harsh on my mind. I don’t know if I should even start enjoying this since it will prob get dropped.
Great book with a lot of potential. Fairly new so not a lot of chapters, but it iz worth the wait
The story does what a story should do, it feels good to read. Now if your expecting a perfect novel go to your local library, but if your looking for a entertaining read thats what your going to get here. Do wish it updated a little faster but I can accept and respect the current speed.
I really like the story, I just want you to post chapters more often ....................................................................................................................................
I like this story it has potential, and just so we are clear, he is both doomsday and a saiyan?
Never thought I would write fan fiction. But here we are. As the author, it is an obligation that I rate it 5 stars. But I have been having fun writing this, so it is a 5/5 for me. Thanks for giving this humble creation a try, if you did. That's more than what I can ask for. :)
Awesome story thanks for making it also love how you made him a doomsday clone
I'm on chapter 35 the story started off shakey but kept getting better and better each chapter
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It is good, the mc isn’t as OP as you would expect because he has doomsday’s powers work more slowly unless he dies. Very good read and he is consistent with the MC’s abilities.
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I saw in chapter you said someone rated 2 stars bc the pacing is slow so here I am. My personal opinion is everything fits even with the mc anger, Saiyans are known for being naturally aggressive and brutal and combine that with doomsday mentality I think it fits the mc and it has it own charm to it because the mc is trying to keep his human side while undergoing emotional changed due to the other 2 races. Next the pacing isn’t bad either I don’t know why people want to see just fighting and no character or other types of development it all fits the way it is. it’s overall great to me I’m not an author so I don’t know about what could help and what’s wrong with the book but I like it🤷♂️🤷♂️
Reveal Spoiler I think that the story is very good and i like it a lot, even though i am more of a marvel man myself than dc. There are some spelling mistakes but don’t worry about it, just read it a couple of times before uploading it and try to fix the problems and it should be alright. Thanks for the story!!
Overall I love the story, most people say that the pacing is slow but rushing it will ruin the story. Great work and Can't wait to see more.
Can't wait to see another chapter, I really like this fanfic ...........,..............................................................ngdkydoydkydkyfykdhkdykdoydoydkydkydkyfkyfkyxkyxkyxky
will wait..m authot has dropped over 10 novels, 1 reached higher than 60 and the others 20-30 chapters before being dropped.
Not gonna lie the grammar here and there could use some reviewing but overall I love this story a lot best take I’ve seen on dc and another story merge aside from one other story. Keep up the great work man
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I belive it good story so far and not the normal Psychopath in this app who is find with the mc haveing emotion and not try to kill everthing But I do dislike how the mc seem to aggront and it make so most charaters are just scare of him before he do any thing
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Bruh your updating status is harsh on my mind. I don’t know if I should even start enjoying this since it will prob get dropped.
Great book with a lot of potential. Fairly new so not a lot of chapters, but it iz worth the wait
The story does what a story should do, it feels good to read. Now if your expecting a perfect novel go to your local library, but if your looking for a entertaining read thats what your going to get here. Do wish it updated a little faster but I can accept and respect the current speed.
I really like the story, I just want you to post chapters more often ....................................................................................................................................
I like this story it has potential, and just so we are clear, he is both doomsday and a saiyan?
Never thought I would write fan fiction. But here we are. As the author, it is an obligation that I rate it 5 stars. But I have been having fun writing this, so it is a 5/5 for me. Thanks for giving this humble creation a try, if you did. That's more than what I can ask for. :)
Awesome story thanks for making it also love how you made him a doomsday clone
I'm on chapter 35 the story started off shakey but kept getting better and better each chapter