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I will give my second review of this novel, why? Because I want to. First of all I want to tell new readers that this novel has too much realism to the point where they show scientific facts in the novel and other things that to learn them would require a high level of learning or IQ. He asked me how the author got so much knowledge in physics. Leaving that aside, the novel also has a lot of philosophy, which as the novel progresses, it will be seen on several occasions. Also, the novel has a genre system, but the system that the author created is different from the other novels that I have read, in this system, to level up you have to develop your skills to the maximum, taking into account the basis of this same and its functions, for example how to connect the five senses, etc. That was a little spoilers. If you are one of those readers who is just beginning to read the novel, you already want the system to appear, I can assure you that this might not be your novel. Since in the first chapters the author relates scientific facts that led to the insertion of the system in people and the MC. Also, in the next chapters the novel will have the genre of "Transmigration" or "reincargancion" added, so if you like that kind of genre, you may like this novel. And that well, read the fucking novel. goodbye Novel 10/10
Hi there! This story is so detailed and the chapters are so long. I loved reading it up to the point I did. However it is because of this that I won’t be able to continue reading because I’ll never catch up. So here’s five stars and... Farewell!
The story is great, but I felt like something was unsettling about the descriptions. Make it look more formal because the readers will look more uncomfortable reading it. For the story, it's really good. Actually added it to my recommendations list. HIGHLY RECOMMENDED TO EVERYONE WHO likes MAGICAL REALISM💕 Kudos, author. Maybe a little proofreading will be alright.
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I would recommend that anyone try this novel, it is somewhat different, and at the same time it is not. Development is going well, the protagonist has potential and is not OP from the beginning.
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Simply put: a novel with potential, which depends on the author to be explored. So far so good, I hope it stays that way. Do not abandon the novel like other authors, ILT.
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As the novel doesn't have many chapters yet, I can't do a comprehensive review, but from what I've read I can say that the novel has a future ... While some things have confused me, I believe they will be explained later. The google translation is just readable, and grammatical errors are recurrent.
I hope the author does not abandon this novel, it has so much potential that I was amazed. The novel seems to be formed, but I think it is not so simple. I don't believe the author will do a harem, but I'm not sure. The story is progressing well, and I am looking forward to the next chapters.
Very good!!! Don't stop with the story, author. I don't know if the author plans to make a harem or not but, from what I read, no. Swswswswswswswswswswswswsws
I liked it, although the google translator makes writing a bit bad, I believe the author will gradually work around this problem ... The plot is cool, one of the few originals that we find today, although there is a system, everyone has access to it.
I am really excited about this novel, I hope the author will be able to take advantage of this immense potential that history currently has. Events are progressing a little slowly, but I believe that this is temporary and because the plot is at the beginning
Gostei da história, parece realmente original e tem uma pitada de pioneirismo. Eu gostei do desenvolvimento inicial e espero que o autor consiga tirar proveito do potencial do mundo que ele criou. O protagonista não é OP desde o início, mas parece que o author quer fazer do MC um grande estrategista no combate?
As the story is still in its infancy, I can't give a big review. But from what I read, I can say that history has great potential. The novel is, according to my interpretation, a great mix of what you normally see. The novel's romance is just OK, but it has great potential and a hint of enigma.
Reveal Spoiler Hi, I'm not a professional at giving summaries of stories created from the author's imagination, but ... I'll try my best. I have already read all the chapters to date. (27-10-2020) First of all, I want to give my sincere compliments on the story in its early days. Since I started reading it, it caught my attention, it caught my attention from the second I finished the first chapter, I insisted on reading until without realizing it ... I finished reading everything. I like the way you (the author) combine the science of the world with imagination. All the chapters have logic and each word makes sense, this is a plus since in other novels that I have read this factor is not found. The second is about the way you mention the government in history, each person in the government has their own identity, there are chapters in which you mention Chilean, Venezuelan, Colombian officials, etc. And that's something I love to be honest with you. Comparing it with other novels that I have read is incredible, since in these it simply mentions the name and rank of such a soldier. Third, grammar. Although you write in Portuguese and then translate into English, everything is perfectly understood, although some words when translating do not make sense, if you reread the paragraph, everything will be understood. And that I can tell you so far, I repeat, I am not a professional in this and I am only giving my most honest opinion. I hope they continue with the novel, although this one does not have as much support as the others, I will always read it, every chapter. <3
I will give my second review of this novel, why? Because I want to. First of all I want to tell new readers that this novel has too much realism to the point where they show scientific facts in the novel and other things that to learn them would require a high level of learning or IQ. He asked me how the author got so much knowledge in physics. Leaving that aside, the novel also has a lot of philosophy, which as the novel progresses, it will be seen on several occasions. Also, the novel has a genre system, but the system that the author created is different from the other novels that I have read, in this system, to level up you have to develop your skills to the maximum, taking into account the basis of this same and its functions, for example how to connect the five senses, etc. That was a little spoilers. If you are one of those readers who is just beginning to read the novel, you already want the system to appear, I can assure you that this might not be your novel. Since in the first chapters the author relates scientific facts that led to the insertion of the system in people and the MC. Also, in the next chapters the novel will have the genre of "Transmigration" or "reincargancion" added, so if you like that kind of genre, you may like this novel. And that well, read the fucking novel. goodbye Novel 10/10
Hi there! This story is so detailed and the chapters are so long. I loved reading it up to the point I did. However it is because of this that I won’t be able to continue reading because I’ll never catch up. So here’s five stars and... Farewell!
The story is great, but I felt like something was unsettling about the descriptions. Make it look more formal because the readers will look more uncomfortable reading it. For the story, it's really good. Actually added it to my recommendations list. HIGHLY RECOMMENDED TO EVERYONE WHO likes MAGICAL REALISM💕 Kudos, author. Maybe a little proofreading will be alright.
Reveal Spoiler I would recommend that anyone try this novel, it is somewhat different, and at the same time it is not. Development is going well, the protagonist has potential and is not OP from the beginning.
Reveal Spoiler Simply put: a novel with potential, which depends on the author to be explored. So far so good, I hope it stays that way. Do not abandon the novel like other authors, ILT.
Reveal Spoiler As the novel doesn't have many chapters yet, I can't do a comprehensive review, but from what I've read I can say that the novel has a future ... While some things have confused me, I believe they will be explained later. The google translation is just readable, and grammatical errors are recurrent.
I hope the author does not abandon this novel, it has so much potential that I was amazed. The novel seems to be formed, but I think it is not so simple. I don't believe the author will do a harem, but I'm not sure. The story is progressing well, and I am looking forward to the next chapters.
Very good!!! Don't stop with the story, author. I don't know if the author plans to make a harem or not but, from what I read, no. Swswswswswswswswswswswswsws
I liked it, although the google translator makes writing a bit bad, I believe the author will gradually work around this problem ... The plot is cool, one of the few originals that we find today, although there is a system, everyone has access to it.
I am really excited about this novel, I hope the author will be able to take advantage of this immense potential that history currently has. Events are progressing a little slowly, but I believe that this is temporary and because the plot is at the beginning
Gostei da história, parece realmente original e tem uma pitada de pioneirismo. Eu gostei do desenvolvimento inicial e espero que o autor consiga tirar proveito do potencial do mundo que ele criou. O protagonista não é OP desde o início, mas parece que o author quer fazer do MC um grande estrategista no combate?
As the story is still in its infancy, I can't give a big review. But from what I read, I can say that history has great potential. The novel is, according to my interpretation, a great mix of what you normally see. The novel's romance is just OK, but it has great potential and a hint of enigma.
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Hi, I'm not a professional at giving summaries of stories created from the author's imagination, but ... I'll try my best. I have already read all the chapters to date. (27-10-2020) First of all, I want to give my sincere compliments on the story in its early days. Since I started reading it, it caught my attention, it caught my attention from the second I finished the first chapter, I insisted on reading until without realizing it ... I finished reading everything. I like the way you (the author) combine the science of the world with imagination. All the chapters have logic and each word makes sense, this is a plus since in other novels that I have read this factor is not found. The second is about the way you mention the government in history, each person in the government has their own identity, there are chapters in which you mention Chilean, Venezuelan, Colombian officials, etc. And that's something I love to be honest with you. Comparing it with other novels that I have read is incredible, since in these it simply mentions the name and rank of such a soldier. Third, grammar. Although you write in Portuguese and then translate into English, everything is perfectly understood, although some words when translating do not make sense, if you reread the paragraph, everything will be understood. And that I can tell you so far, I repeat, I am not a professional in this and I am only giving my most honest opinion. I hope they continue with the novel, although this one does not have as much support as the others, I will always read it, every chapter. <3