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It's such an intriguing read! There's this beautiful element of mystery surrounding the characters and the way you write is just clean and well-put together. I'm hooked!
So far so good! Carry on writing please! Can't wait to read more! Damn the word count!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
An intriguing read with a remarkable writing style. I am thoroughly impressed with how to author used a variety of vocabulary to make unique descriptions and sentences. Unfortunately, there are a lot of grammatical errors, though I suspect this is mostly because English isn't the author's first language (but I mean, c'mon, English is hard for even us who were born speaking it). Regardless, the author has done an incredible job with what they have and I can only applaud the effort they put to creating this novel. Regardless of my criticism and review score, I can only encourage the author to not give up and continue writing this masterpiece. You, sir or ma'am, have earned my respect.
The story is remarkably well written! Teen fiction is really quite popular a lot nowadays, and the author really know how well to play with her words. Romance progression seems to be slow, but still, the author keeps the story quite interesting to keep on reading. Keep up the good work, Author san
An amazingly detailed story! From the beginning, this book really grips you in and lets you know who the characters are and what kind of person they will be. The names alone are very interesting, along with their surroundings. I like how the author describes the appearance of each of the characters; from their clothes to their personality. I find that at the beginning of the relationship between One One and Dassah started out slow, but increased as the story went on. Besides the grammar mistakes here and there, the story is well written and definitely worth reading!
What an unique writing style you have! Your story is really really amazing. Hope you continue to write and improve as time goes by. I wish you the best?
Hello fellow filipino author. Just have to say that from the first chapter I was impressed, the writing style is quite something. Pace of the story is just right. Your writing style somewhat feels forced? (No offense by the way, only speaking from my perspective.) it’s because some words seemed to be out of place sometimes by not being in a proper tense. I love how deep and poetic it is, although the fancy words kinda sway the enjoyment away from reading it. It could hinder the process because there’s a lot to think about mentally. The paragraph is too long, maybe organizing the voice of the narrator and the characters by using spacing could help. It could scare new readers since the thought of it being too long could come to them as a bore. Oh and since you’re using third person perspective maybe do a bit of context for other nationality readers. For words like “intramurals” and the like since it’s a filipino thing. Anyways with a bit of improvement this would be perfect! I love how inexhaustible your mind is when it comes to wording each scenario. Would recommend to any reader! More power to you author! I’ll be rooting for ya. (P.s. I’m a newbie too so please don’t get offended.)
Interesting and mysterious. Punctuation is great, grammar has little to no mistakes, and the pace of the story is smooth. It has a mixture of mystery, something that drags the reader's attention to read further. The details are vivid, the characters were described precisely so I was able to imagine how they'd look like in a matter of a few paragraphs. Word choice and usage is excellent.
Such an eloquent novel. I'm officially impressed. The usage of words, made me remember all those classic books I've read in the past. Very good. I think you are on your way to be such a good writer. Very nice, keep up the good work!
This novel is the most amazing novel that I have read so far! I was really looking for a novel that could bring me to the sky just by his words and sentences, but now I had found it! I love the novel! And I'm itching for more chapters! I want more chapters!!!
I most particularly love the writing style, it's so complex and poetic but I feel the author should also put in some simpler terms so that we're not running to our dictionaries everytime. ☺️ Nonetheless it's a really good read, I love the ambience, it's not easy to create that but she does it flawlessly and makes it look easy too, would definitely recommend.
Realllllyy loved the book until now! Looking forward for more! Please do update! It's really worth a read and I must say your writing style is awesome! Keep going!
I love how the story setting is from the Philippines (I'm a Filipino btw). Nice and interesting plot and very good writing. Looking forward for more chapters : )
Writing quality was good overall. No mistakes that I saw, so good job author. The premise is intriguing, and I'm looking forward to seeing what will happen. Keep writing!
I have just one complaint. Author-sama, Why are there few chapters? T.T This thirsty reader binge every single chapter. And I am still famishing for more. The story contains all the good points. Strong & unforgettable Characters [Check] Well-thought-out Plot [Double Check] Smooth Development [No need to ask, check] Writing Quality [Already taking notes--Err. I mean, Check] Total= A refreshing hidden gem. [ Pretty much, A FACT CHECK]
The description was interesting so I went in for a read. I wasn't disappointed with what I saw. your story is unique. I look forward to how the book goes.
A very interesting romance novel. The author has created a wonderful plot that flows smoothly, and the novel is very rich in descriptions and language. The characters are unique and I love the originality in this novel. The plot allows for thorough character development, making it an enjoyable read. Well done!
As a romance novel writer my self, I'm in love with this book and the author, I do wish the story progressed faster, But I'm patiently waiting for more chapters. ☕️
yooo, what a nice story. im a total sucker for slow romances so this was quite a lovely read. thanks for the quality content, keep it up! <3
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