My Touch Corpse System

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Hit30

Story looks good specially the way MC act's hope you will not drop it .......................................................................

LV 2

InJustThis

A good author always rate his novel 5 stars! Author, InJustThis, is here! Come and drop by. If you liked the novel, don't forget to comment in the comment section. I appreciate your praises. ^^

LV 4

Jajaiabakabaianaa

The grammar is very good and fluent. The updates are, I think, only 3 chapters a week and this is a bit of a shame but I can understand the situation of the author so the only thing I ask you is not to drop the story because in my opinion it is done well, even if it is a little early to say since we're just starting out. I do not have much to say for the background of the story because it takes those of the anime, I just need a brief description but that explains it to me well. finally I love how mc behaves, a good evil. nice good luck

LV 2

josuemandrak

I don't see anything special, let's see what you want to offer us MC Evil and what else? What else do you have to offer? That's the question. And I need more characters ..................... [It sounds too abstract I don't know]

LV 4

TheOnlyKing

This is without a doubt among the top 10 fics that I've read in recent months. The MC is a breath of fresh air. He's not dumb, he doesn't have a savior-complex, he's not some beta and above all else: HE'S NOT A SIMP. Are you tired of the mc bowing down to women and letting them walk all over him? or perhaps making dumb decisions because of forced plot? or maybe even getting nerfed by his own system?! If you are then have no worries because you won't find any of that in this fic! The mc is also dark with a great sense of humor, you WILL find yourself at the very least cracking a smile. As a bonus if you hate Takashi then you will certainly enjoy this 😉.

LV 2

Baylord_Yama

We need more fanfics like this with evil mc punishing beta male jp protags. I gave 5 star before reading for idea. I will review after reading and gave one more 5 star if its readable. Anti heros always a welcome if written correctly.

LV 2

Carla_Santos

very good story love mc and i hope you cintinue onwards because evil mc storys are mi favorites.[img=update][img=update][img=fp][img=fp][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 5

Precheur

I don't like it. I don't mind villain, arrogant, even pervert OC, but there is one thing which i can't tolerate : Where do you find to act mighty when the only reason you're out of your shit hole is because of a system ? And this is the big issue, characters are shallow, they're like ghost made for the OC, and it's driving me crazy. Not for me.

LV 4

Lord_Eternity

First of all authors grammer is ok(good based on webnovel's average) So they story is ok yes just ok. The was good as it started. Evil mc, no moral education, strength gain etc. But now at 30 chaps to story there are many flaws. Biggest one is that author wants to write lyrics in story. Ya as a joke its good sometimes but if every second chapter is filled with lyrics then thats plain boring. Another issue is mc's inner monologue fills one-third of story where he just keep sporuting wierd sh*t. In start it was funny but author just overdid it. Now that feels like filler rather than joke. All good? NO! His relationship progression with girls is even worse than original. Mc's stat growth is useless. He will stay the same guy.

LV 5

Evil_For_the_WIN

Besides MC's name: Ye Sato that I find utterly cringe and weird (why not use a full Chinese name Ye Shen or a full Japanese name Yu Sato and instead mix the two. I find it weirder since I studied the culture of the two countries 😞), this is a masterpiece: + Good humor + Good grammar + Likeable MC + Honest MC Go read it.

LV 2

LickSuckEatMyBut

i hope the High school of the dead arc will be long cuz there are barley any fan fic on it fffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff

LV 5

jeanpierregerardo

Good and interesing history. ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

LV 1

Osborn123

This could have been a really nice story. If there is something good about it is the way the sistem works and all the possibilities that it brings to the mc. It has a little bit of novelty about it. A little. Unfortunately the author completely ruins the story with his way too dumb and narcisistic mc. It is true that in the sinopsis it is written that the mc is evil, but being evil and being stupid are two completely different things that the author doesn't seem to realise. About the mc's personality it can be said that his focus is not on getting stronger, nor getting a harem, or getting rich, or any other normal thing. Nope. His complete focus lies on bashing the original mc of "Highschool of the dead", and a few other characters too, to the point one could say that this story is entirely dedicated to that. His obsession with it is so big that many chapters are dedicated only to this very aspect. The plot of the story is completely sacrificed in order to have more and more bashing, to the point that up to chapter 39 the story has barely progressed at all. Worse still is the fact that the mc likes to inner monologe far too much, and his logic is complitely twisted and absurd. It is very difficult to take all the nonsense he thinks seriously. This mc is also extremely narcisistic and the readers are constantly bombarded with entire paragraphs describing how great the mc thinks of himself. I would say that in this story the inner monologing ocupies like 80% of the entire story. That is the reason the pace of the story is so slow. As for this story being a harem, I would say that it is not true. Maybe the author added that tag because he had plans for that in the future, but up to chapter 39 it can be said that the mc barely has a relationship with one girl. Barely. So no harem so far.

LV 2

killiam115

good

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FOX_ZRS

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Saint_Hubris

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EyvarnBloodless

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