Doulou Dalu Rise of the Uchiha

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GreedAF

story isn't bad but there are things that i don't like, like it's completely separate from the original story, if someone wanted to read an story unrelated to original why would they even bother with fanfiction??? it seems like like author knowledge about orginal world is spotty at best, there some things that are wrong about cultivation and etc...

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DearCompanion

So it's harem but all original characters would be plundered by tang san and friends... i see... ..... just f off, what's the point of him being in this planet then, just create your own novel u pu nk lol, kids these days.... sigh, but if i'm wrong please correct me. Peace

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Amduscias

Alright heads up people this isnt a protagonist who knows about dd and reincarnates in dd its about madara reincarnating in dd with the memories of a killer otaku from earth into dd.For some ppl there is no differences but for me specifically,i expected the mc to have dialogues of the dd world because you know ? Reincarnating in a world you've read about is fun and amazing.Instead all we get is the typical situation of madara reincarnating.What would happen ? The typical brooding like "oh hashirama was right should have a family" "Oh i was wrong hashirama " All this regrets about madara.Now i dont know whether author will blatantly switch the perspective back to the otaku killer being somehow in charge later on but it doesnt matter the moment he mention hashirama as a old friend it cemented the fact the story is about madara trying following the old grieving route.So ignore the sypnosis its isnt about a guy from earth reincarnating.

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Fever_D_Novel

I will give you full support if the story is harem and little lemons ............ I gave 5 star because I saw harem tag One of the harem must be original character like; When rongrong came to sherk she meet mc and fell in love or when zhuqing meet mc at the age of 6-10 etc......

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god_of_the_empty

Why did you place the uchija lineage? If it is only a person with the body of madara and a dojutso related to the sharingan, it is just nothing else, it has nothing to do with the sharingan, I understand not being able to copy jutsus, if you came thinking it was a madara true go and never come back

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Pimple_Face_13

Saw it was a Douluo dalu fanfic came gave review. Even though I haven’t read it I gave it a 5 star cause why not and I like to randomly give 5 star reviews.

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MfrnA

Good.............................................................👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 Long chapters 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀 Keep updating

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Pefecto_Gaming

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W_D_3766

The novel is great like definitely top 10 if u get the chance read it.now to pick at all the issues which is almost none grammar is better then most other novels characters are good with alot of good potential the only thing I would like is MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE 'begging face'

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BleakSky

PLEASE TELL ME! IS ZHU ZHUQING IN HAREM!?!? PLEASE TELL ME! IS ZHU ZHUQING IN HAREM!?!? PLEASE TELL ME! IS ZHU ZHUQING IN HAREM!?!?

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Yami_01

Thank You for writing Douluo Dalu fanfic and rest assured readers will be there to support your work as long as your story continues. Thank you again as I was looking forward to see Uchiha in action and in Douluo Dalu, I guess there will be enough fight to see. So I am looking forward to se atleast 150 Chapters.

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Nyamsu_87

Goooooddddddd, keep going.....💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆💯😆😆😆💯😆😆💯😆😆😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆😆💯😆💯💯😆💯😆💢😆💢😆💢😆💢😆💢😅💢😅😅💯😅💯😅💯😅💯😅💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆💯😆

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TheDaoSon

Hello everyone DaoSon here this is my review for new readers so here goes nothing. So first off i'm not dumb my story isn't 5 star YET my writing is not great I plan on getting better so look forward to it. Update wise it has slowed down due to work as much as i love writing it don't bring in the doe but i will try to put out as much as possible Story wise I think its 5 star I don't rush nor am i slow. Character design is good there's some new character's i plan on adding some more and giving them proper story's World background its doulou dalu thats all i can say for now Hope this help TheDaoSon

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Jents47

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literallyred

You should learn how to use punctuations properly because reading this is mixing up the sentences and it is very confusing to read. .

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Heavenly_Devil

I would rate it higher, but there are no commas. Senentces are all over the place in grammar. Apart from that, great concept. Keep up the good work.

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DearCompanion

Hi everyone, do you know any good R-18, Smart MC, harem novel in babel novel? Not idiot mc who tells all his secret or Beta Mc who's afraid to plundering the flowers or MC who makes others stronger without proper measure against betrayal. Any novel anywhere would be of help, thanks

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Ego_Great

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AlucardRP_16

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