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This is really interesting. But you should update more. But i would love to see the FL more stronger then it will really interesting to see the chemistry between them cuz both of them are really strong character 😍.I'm really looking forward to your next update ❤
This. Book. IF YOU HAVEN’T READ THIS; READ IT NOW! I truthfully can not find the appropriate words to adequately express how phenomenal this entire book! I came here from Wattpad and IMMEDIATELY purchased every chapter available- I HAVE ALWAYS, ALWAYS REFUSED TO SPEND ACTUAL MONEY ON ONLINE BOOKS (i.e. Wattpad, Dreame, Inkitt and etc.) HOWEVER, I. COULD. NOT. STOP. MYSELF. The writer is EXTREMELY gifted in writing! I can’t even explain it! The way this author tells the story, the way she developes the characters and their relationships, the tone, the darkness, the realness, the she hooks you from the VERY BEGINNING; IT’S PURE GENIUS! BRILLIANT! ❤️🤩
This is sooooo good. My favorite character just happens to be Lorenzo. i have officially changed my name to Lorenzo now
I check all the time for updates for this book. I have been reading it since the beginning. I was so hurt for Maya when she had to leave because I think that at the point she truly loved Lorenzo. I think that now that she has been brought back that things could rekindle between them, if he could see that she left for the best interests of their son.
this book is sooo good. amaizing i hope lorenzo and maya manage to solve their problems and be again [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Can't wait for new chapters and to find out what happens next.... \\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\
i think i had read it somewhere in another apps but i forget which one. but i like the story [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I wonder why I didn't read such an amazing novel earlier. this is the best novel I've ever read, such an intense character the author build , the overall story is really great and I really want to know what the author ends this novel with.
This novel is amazing even thou it's not Completed I loved reading every single bit of it I was fun and educative and I recommend the story to each and everybody out there to read the story because it's very interesting I loved it like I loved every bit of it and congratulations to the author for writing this kind of novel thank you thank you thank you bye I will like to tell you that please update your stories for us cuz she see the longer the story takes for you to update the longer we forget the story so if you have data we two weeks time we have to now go back and re-read through before we get get it and come in with the updates please I beg of you please update us a at least 3 days or 3 days but I can see that you take for 3 weeks and a month before you update a chapter which is very bad please please help us okay so that we will also enjoy the story 2 x 4 lesson give me to vote for you is he so please do the flowers that I will also be able to do this for you but love to your story and every bit of it and I will carry you to continue with your studies and encourage you and I pray that you when everything that you want to everything that as a front of you your aim of writing this novel I pray comes true thank you
Wooww can't take my eyes off with this book though I have only read just some few chapters hehe. Very exciting! I can't wait to read the chapters❤
10/10! I cant wait for more! I never want to stop reading this book! The author does an amazing job making you fall in love with the characters ❤
I really enjoyed the twist and turns in each and every chapter . I loved everything in the story and I would love that we would be updated very soon .
Story is just perfect! Love it!!! Just a lil concerned about the darkness around them. Such a great Writer! I admire the way you can't predict the story. So so so perfect!
It's a hot novel.🤭 Definitely will look for updates from author 👍🏻 Written with a good flow. Story line is not too long and draggy. Thank you author! ♥️
This is my first time reading a story that is ongoing and i’m hooked! I check everyday for updates 😂 to the author: you are fantastic!!! I love this story and the characters. You’re doing an amazing job! 😍😍😍
I love this book I just wish it got updated more often.[img=update] Other than that it's very good I would recommend people that like a lot of action and dominance to read it!!
Amazing!!! Once agin this author never faile to amaze me with her writing and storys. I fell in love with this book in seconds, I cant wait to read more. pls update soon!!!❤️
Love this authorsl so much. your books are amazing. no words. Love this stroy development. You want to hate the ML but you caNt help but love him. FL iS amazing and Love how indenpendEnt you made her. 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽
I cant get enough of this book its so exciting. Its intresting and will have you wanting more and more at every chapter the way Raf is so dominant but also so tender when it comes to her.
Love this book❤️❤️❤️. Totally love the badass female vibes. Love their chemistry, two hot headed people loving in love yessss!!! I am here for it all
I love you book!!! Especially Xavier’s girl. Thought I should try this out and it is amazing. You such a good writer. Keep up the good work❤️👏🏽
So far so good...the story is interesting and funny. She is a power house with her skills and the male"s character is sounding interesting too...
This is good so far. I liked your another book Xavier’s girl as well. This is different but I like it❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️. Please write more😊😊😊😊😊
Hi guys, 👋🏾 this is a new Mafia book I just started writing. Please read and let me know what too think. Don’t forget to leave a review and a comment.🥺❤️🥺❤️
This book is SOOOO GOOD, like I genuinely read a single chapter and couldn't stop, then I was all caught you and thought to myself nooo what happens next. Seriously a great book please don't drop it.
This is really interesting. But you should update more. But i would love to see the FL more stronger then it will really interesting to see the chemistry between them cuz both of them are really strong character 😍.I'm really looking forward to your next update ❤
This. Book. IF YOU HAVEN’T READ THIS; READ IT NOW! I truthfully can not find the appropriate words to adequately express how phenomenal this entire book! I came here from Wattpad and IMMEDIATELY purchased every chapter available- I HAVE ALWAYS, ALWAYS REFUSED TO SPEND ACTUAL MONEY ON ONLINE BOOKS (i.e. Wattpad, Dreame, Inkitt and etc.) HOWEVER, I. COULD. NOT. STOP. MYSELF. The writer is EXTREMELY gifted in writing! I can’t even explain it! The way this author tells the story, the way she developes the characters and their relationships, the tone, the darkness, the realness, the she hooks you from the VERY BEGINNING; IT’S PURE GENIUS! BRILLIANT! ❤️🤩
This is sooooo good. My favorite character just happens to be Lorenzo. i have officially changed my name to Lorenzo now
I check all the time for updates for this book. I have been reading it since the beginning. I was so hurt for Maya when she had to leave because I think that at the point she truly loved Lorenzo. I think that now that she has been brought back that things could rekindle between them, if he could see that she left for the best interests of their son.
this book is sooo good. amaizing i hope lorenzo and maya manage to solve their problems and be again [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Can't wait for new chapters and to find out what happens next.... \\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\
i think i had read it somewhere in another apps but i forget which one. but i like the story [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I wonder why I didn't read such an amazing novel earlier. this is the best novel I've ever read, such an intense character the author build , the overall story is really great and I really want to know what the author ends this novel with.
This novel is amazing even thou it's not Completed I loved reading every single bit of it I was fun and educative and I recommend the story to each and everybody out there to read the story because it's very interesting I loved it like I loved every bit of it and congratulations to the author for writing this kind of novel thank you thank you thank you bye I will like to tell you that please update your stories for us cuz she see the longer the story takes for you to update the longer we forget the story so if you have data we two weeks time we have to now go back and re-read through before we get get it and come in with the updates please I beg of you please update us a at least 3 days or 3 days but I can see that you take for 3 weeks and a month before you update a chapter which is very bad please please help us okay so that we will also enjoy the story 2 x 4 lesson give me to vote for you is he so please do the flowers that I will also be able to do this for you but love to your story and every bit of it and I will carry you to continue with your studies and encourage you and I pray that you when everything that you want to everything that as a front of you your aim of writing this novel I pray comes true thank you
Wooww can't take my eyes off with this book though I have only read just some few chapters hehe. Very exciting! I can't wait to read the chapters❤
10/10! I cant wait for more! I never want to stop reading this book! The author does an amazing job making you fall in love with the characters ❤
I really enjoyed the twist and turns in each and every chapter . I loved everything in the story and I would love that we would be updated very soon .
Story is just perfect! Love it!!! Just a lil concerned about the darkness around them. Such a great Writer! I admire the way you can't predict the story. So so so perfect!
It's a hot novel.🤭 Definitely will look for updates from author 👍🏻 Written with a good flow. Story line is not too long and draggy. Thank you author! ♥️
This is my first time reading a story that is ongoing and i’m hooked! I check everyday for updates 😂 to the author: you are fantastic!!! I love this story and the characters. You’re doing an amazing job! 😍😍😍
I love this book I just wish it got updated more often.[img=update] Other than that it's very good I would recommend people that like a lot of action and dominance to read it!!
Amazing!!! Once agin this author never faile to amaze me with her writing and storys. I fell in love with this book in seconds, I cant wait to read more. pls update soon!!!❤️
Love this authorsl so much. your books are amazing. no words. Love this stroy development. You want to hate the ML but you caNt help but love him. FL iS amazing and Love how indenpendEnt you made her. 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽
I cant get enough of this book its so exciting. Its intresting and will have you wanting more and more at every chapter the way Raf is so dominant but also so tender when it comes to her.
Love this book❤️❤️❤️. Totally love the badass female vibes. Love their chemistry, two hot headed people loving in love yessss!!! I am here for it all
I love you book!!! Especially Xavier’s girl. Thought I should try this out and it is amazing. You such a good writer. Keep up the good work❤️👏🏽
So far so good...the story is interesting and funny. She is a power house with her skills and the male"s character is sounding interesting too...
This is good so far. I liked your another book Xavier’s girl as well. This is different but I like it❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️. Please write more😊😊😊😊😊
Hi guys, 👋🏾 this is a new Mafia book I just started writing. Please read and let me know what too think. Don’t forget to leave a review and a comment.🥺❤️🥺❤️
This book is SOOOO GOOD, like I genuinely read a single chapter and couldn't stop, then I was all caught you and thought to myself nooo what happens next. Seriously a great book please don't drop it.