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It's a good fanfic. There is a system but nothing like the overpowered systems where you can buy skills, talents or even bloodlines. It's more of a development system. Quite powerful yet enjoyable. The story progression is also pretty smooth and nice to read. All in all, this is one of the good HP fanfictions especially since our mc doesn't know the HP plot and he seemed to be quite intelligent too. It's quite a pity that many good fanfics are dropped or discontinued but nevertheless, you should still give this one a try.
best HP fanfic in the whole webnovel the oc is by far the most believable character in any fanfic I ever seen and how he is more of support type but can still manage on his own is interesting
Oh lord please come back and finish. I hate incomplete works. You get invested and then boom a cliffhanger. No reasons or excuses given. At least tell me if you died or it dropped.
Pls don't drop this novel, one of the best Harry Potter fan fictions I read in this app. I truly hope that u continue this work. Regarding the novel, it has a good mixture of game elements in it without being overly 'important', and those elements come from his own gift in Divination, the author made a 5 star job in that. The only critic I can make is regarding is thoughts in creating an 'army' /group etc, I don't mind if it is like 10 people or so max, but more than that and I'm gonna start getting annoyed by it, because to me personal strength and growth are the most important thing, but that's just my opinion and I won't stop reading this novel even if the author decides to create an 'army' for our MC
the system is perfect for the Harry Potter world. it's one of the best fanfiction that I have read. I like how the mc is more geared toward a supporting role instead of going down the typical overpowered attack route.
Really great fanfic this is by far the one of the best i have read in all my time reading web novels/fanfic hope that darksage continues the story or can someone tell me why he stopped updating so i can give my mind some peace
Why was it dropped?, it was one of the best fanfic out there. Why was it dropped?, it was one of the best fanfic out there. Why was it dropped?, it was one of the best fanfic out there. Why was it dropped?, it was one of the best fanfic out there.
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I hope the author returns to continue this novel, it’s one of the best fan fictions on this site and a brilliant standalone book in its own right. Wonderful characters, great development, huge potential for seeing more of the wizard if world and we’re now getting into the seriously interesting parts of the mc’s development. Please continue the story, author
This is a very good HP fanfic. I rarely like any HP fanfics because they dont focus too much on the world or the characters and just focus on the canon story. Moreover, they just describe the story in a summary format and not explain it.
This is a great novel, even with minimal knowledge of the potter-verse it’s still an outstanding experience ce to read it. I thoroughly enjoyed the development of the mc, in particular the early chapters where he is introduced and his situation begins to play out. I initially thought the system, when it was introduced, would take away from the novel however it proved to be a very,ow level of impact to how the story progresses and the mc isn’t given a cheat through a system like a lot of other novels which keeps this story engaging and fun. Really hope the author continues to write this story as we’re into the early stages of the philosophers sfo e and I really want to see how the story progresses
This story has captivated from the start. The pace is awesome, there's no character bashing (luckily, as bashing characters isn't something that is easy to do) - overall, the fic is great! I'm quite eager to see how things will end up. Such a pity the author hasn't updated any chapter in month 😔
One of the best Harry Potter Stories. I hope the Author returns because his work is very good. i had a lot of fun reading it. His own Unique story fits into Canon.
I'm still in chapter 10 but this story is one of the best in Harry Potter. The MC is smart but I want to know Who is the love interest in this story? ----------------
the quality of this writing is spectacular. each character is alive on the page without the thpical script like feeling other fanfiction writers produce. the system and how it is being isrd is also well thought out and not broken beyond all redemption.
An amazing Harry Potter fan fiction. Magnus is a native who is calm, smart, collected and more importantly low key in most of his dealings. This makes him one of the most logical main characters I have ever had the pleasure to read about. The main canon points are also very subtle and not over emphasized with the focus staying on Magnus like it should be. All in all a fantastic read with great writing style, grammar and world-building.
Could be worse, could be better Bcs this is on webnovel.com its ok to be close to original. If i found this on fan fiction . net i would drop it right away, i mean its not that bad but u can find hundreds better stories about HP there that are way better than original. Mostly lacks gigantic plot holes and such u r writing fanfiction about wizards, u have several continents and u go this way gl in your work and bye
Very good novel, i recommend it to anyone whos fan of HP world u will love it. Everythings great but i hope author will not add GODS i would RUIN EVERYTHING TO ME So lets pray![img=recommend]
The best hp Fanfic I have read till now... No op system or Mc.. Well thought character development and world background.... Hope u don't abandon this story...like others
I only want to give 5star for this amazing book. the development is so smooth and cool, and the system is simple, no voices, no quests, it only depends on the mc use. and i really hope that Magnus will be with Missy in the future. my english isn't so good but i really wanted ro say how i love this job, dont drop it please
This fanfiction is great! The MC is powerful but not too over powerful. Also, he got all of his powers by himself. I would like to ask for you to update sooner!
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At chapter 21. This novel is toooooo slow pace for me - even if there were mentioning of the start being slow pace. There is nothing that’s really captivating, wowing or comical to keep the readers attention of wanting more. It’s really vanilla.
This story is great! The MC is not overpowered and gets all of his skills from hard work. This is one of the best harry potter novels I have read on webnovel.
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The best Harry Potter fanfic I have read. Stable updates. The protagonist isn't super overpowered but makes steady progression in power and knowledge. He also is originally from the HP world and doesn't know the plot but interacts with it in an organic way.
This fanfiction is great! The book is not cliche and has lots of unique things. Also, the MC is powerful but doesn't do any ridiculous or stupid actions.
This is a really great story. I hope that the author will post another chapter soon. Magnus should take the basilik as a pet. So many authors kill the basilik off. Please don't do that.
author you ded ??????????????? if not have you shifted this somewhere else?????????
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It's a good fanfic. There is a system but nothing like the overpowered systems where you can buy skills, talents or even bloodlines. It's more of a development system. Quite powerful yet enjoyable. The story progression is also pretty smooth and nice to read. All in all, this is one of the good HP fanfictions especially since our mc doesn't know the HP plot and he seemed to be quite intelligent too. It's quite a pity that many good fanfics are dropped or discontinued but nevertheless, you should still give this one a try.
best HP fanfic in the whole webnovel the oc is by far the most believable character in any fanfic I ever seen and how he is more of support type but can still manage on his own is interesting
Oh lord please come back and finish. I hate incomplete works. You get invested and then boom a cliffhanger. No reasons or excuses given. At least tell me if you died or it dropped.
Pls don't drop this novel, one of the best Harry Potter fan fictions I read in this app. I truly hope that u continue this work. Regarding the novel, it has a good mixture of game elements in it without being overly 'important', and those elements come from his own gift in Divination, the author made a 5 star job in that. The only critic I can make is regarding is thoughts in creating an 'army' /group etc, I don't mind if it is like 10 people or so max, but more than that and I'm gonna start getting annoyed by it, because to me personal strength and growth are the most important thing, but that's just my opinion and I won't stop reading this novel even if the author decides to create an 'army' for our MC
the system is perfect for the Harry Potter world. it's one of the best fanfiction that I have read. I like how the mc is more geared toward a supporting role instead of going down the typical overpowered attack route.
Really great fanfic this is by far the one of the best i have read in all my time reading web novels/fanfic hope that darksage continues the story or can someone tell me why he stopped updating so i can give my mind some peace
Why was it dropped?, it was one of the best fanfic out there. Why was it dropped?, it was one of the best fanfic out there. Why was it dropped?, it was one of the best fanfic out there. Why was it dropped?, it was one of the best fanfic out there.
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I hope the author returns to continue this novel, it’s one of the best fan fictions on this site and a brilliant standalone book in its own right. Wonderful characters, great development, huge potential for seeing more of the wizard if world and we’re now getting into the seriously interesting parts of the mc’s development. Please continue the story, author
This is a very good HP fanfic. I rarely like any HP fanfics because they dont focus too much on the world or the characters and just focus on the canon story. Moreover, they just describe the story in a summary format and not explain it.
This is a great novel, even with minimal knowledge of the potter-verse it’s still an outstanding experience ce to read it. I thoroughly enjoyed the development of the mc, in particular the early chapters where he is introduced and his situation begins to play out. I initially thought the system, when it was introduced, would take away from the novel however it proved to be a very,ow level of impact to how the story progresses and the mc isn’t given a cheat through a system like a lot of other novels which keeps this story engaging and fun. Really hope the author continues to write this story as we’re into the early stages of the philosophers sfo e and I really want to see how the story progresses
This story has captivated from the start. The pace is awesome, there's no character bashing (luckily, as bashing characters isn't something that is easy to do) - overall, the fic is great! I'm quite eager to see how things will end up. Such a pity the author hasn't updated any chapter in month 😔
One of the best Harry Potter Stories. I hope the Author returns because his work is very good. i had a lot of fun reading it. His own Unique story fits into Canon.
I'm still in chapter 10 but this story is one of the best in Harry Potter. The MC is smart but I want to know Who is the love interest in this story? ----------------
the quality of this writing is spectacular. each character is alive on the page without the thpical script like feeling other fanfiction writers produce. the system and how it is being isrd is also well thought out and not broken beyond all redemption.
An amazing Harry Potter fan fiction. Magnus is a native who is calm, smart, collected and more importantly low key in most of his dealings. This makes him one of the most logical main characters I have ever had the pleasure to read about. The main canon points are also very subtle and not over emphasized with the focus staying on Magnus like it should be. All in all a fantastic read with great writing style, grammar and world-building.
Could be worse, could be better Bcs this is on webnovel.com its ok to be close to original. If i found this on fan fiction . net i would drop it right away, i mean its not that bad but u can find hundreds better stories about HP there that are way better than original. Mostly lacks gigantic plot holes and such u r writing fanfiction about wizards, u have several continents and u go this way gl in your work and bye
Very good novel, i recommend it to anyone whos fan of HP world u will love it. Everythings great but i hope author will not add GODS i would RUIN EVERYTHING TO ME So lets pray![img=recommend]
The best hp Fanfic I have read till now... No op system or Mc.. Well thought character development and world background.... Hope u don't abandon this story...like others
I only want to give 5star for this amazing book. the development is so smooth and cool, and the system is simple, no voices, no quests, it only depends on the mc use. and i really hope that Magnus will be with Missy in the future. my english isn't so good but i really wanted ro say how i love this job, dont drop it please
This fanfiction is great! The MC is powerful but not too over powerful. Also, he got all of his powers by himself. I would like to ask for you to update sooner!
Reveal Spoiler At chapter 21. This novel is toooooo slow pace for me - even if there were mentioning of the start being slow pace. There is nothing that’s really captivating, wowing or comical to keep the readers attention of wanting more. It’s really vanilla.
This story is great! The MC is not overpowered and gets all of his skills from hard work. This is one of the best harry potter novels I have read on webnovel.
Reveal Spoiler The best Harry Potter fanfic I have read. Stable updates. The protagonist isn't super overpowered but makes steady progression in power and knowledge. He also is originally from the HP world and doesn't know the plot but interacts with it in an organic way.
This fanfiction is great! The book is not cliche and has lots of unique things. Also, the MC is powerful but doesn't do any ridiculous or stupid actions.
This is a really great story. I hope that the author will post another chapter soon. Magnus should take the basilik as a pet. So many authors kill the basilik off. Please don't do that.
author you ded ??????????????? if not have you shifted this somewhere else?????????