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the house with a crack in it's wall

Many say that buying a house is a milestone for many adults. But I don't feel comfortable in my new house. It needs a lot of renovating and it smells like mold. But as they say, the home is where the house is. My girlfriend just got back from her business trip. Hey wassup, I said as she walked to the house. I'm doing good she said with a smile. I like what you did to the place She said. (btw her name is Bri) later that day... This is not a drill a hurricane coming straight to Lakeville. We gasped as we lived there and I don't want this place to get destroyed. Let's go I said with a scared expression. We packed our stuff and we were going to the airport but all the planes were grounded and we couldn't leave but we were on the way back and a wave of water hit our car, it shut down so we were stuck in the house and we had to wait out the storm. As we walked back to the house I tried to spark up a conversation. How are you I said trying to fake a smile? Not so good as you see we are soaked Bri said: "but we gotta keep livin am I right"? We both started laughing. When we got inside I looked inside for any damage. All I found was a crack in the wall. I guessed it already had it but I had had to break it down it had an eerie feeling to it. Honey where's the crowbar I shouted. "Why do you need it bri shouted back". Uhhh Remodeling.When I broke down the wall all that was there were some random parts on the floor I left it there. We ate dinner and went to sleep it was pretty good. I woke up to get some water it was 2:45 in the morning. As I walked to the kitchen I heard loud footsteps. I saw some mangled things walking around. When I started to run away it saw me red glare in its eyes. It grabbed me and was biting me to shreds. I let out a blood-curdling scream. Then it all went dark. Then I woke up n the hospital.to find the name of the thing that almost killed me it said: "I am your end ".

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this is a fan story from a friend of mine

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