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It's great and the story is beautiful, the haracters are good and the world building is unique. However even though it is stated as harém, I can't help but notice than Al is easily distracted by women. It is a fact that in the beginning he just turned ***** but his will for women is a little too soft that every women he sees, he will fell head over heals. It should be a good thing but women must be selected because they have this complex for other more capable women.
Its been sometime since I read something this good the characters are fun and charismatic and make you sympathize with them, the author makes the main characters develop constantly and you can see their evolution clearly one of the best I have ever read.
Great story, felt like author knew before hand what they needed to do to succeed.
hhhhm! no1 villain? I don't think so.... but why should I care I already read it though.... even if the story is not what I expected.. 'patience is virtue' maybe on coming chapter I would find what I'm looking for...
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This is a great book about death and destruction. Believe in the rapture and the world will be smelly. Everyone must run to the golden heavens in the sky and become one with the autobots! Thanks for coming to my TED talk!
this book was very interesting and fun to read I hope that another can continue to create the rest of the series as amazing as this first part
A great read so far the first chapter was weird missing a few words and i believe it Skipped from chapert 2 to chapter 4. I enjoy the concept and like where the story is going
The author doesn't have the #1 completed original novel on webnovel for no reason. This is fantastically well wrote and thought out. Would heavily recommend.
a good, quick read. not too shabby. Not at all what I thought it would be, as the "villain" is a good guy and the "heros" are villainous. kinda like the Batman philosophy. he is the bad guy but at the same time he is the good guy.
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Honest Review: Really good, however, i wouldnt recommend this too someone who wants a pure villian mc. The mc is more anti heroish? Although currently id say he doesnt particularly fit into any role, or atleast thats how id like him to be. Pretty much as long as you keep your expectations in line regarding the whole villian thing, youll get to enjoy a great novel.
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interesting enough book I would reccomend if you like this kinda stuff other wise EXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXP
So far i have absolutely loved reading this. I need 100 some odd characters though so let me tell you about my day? Woke up tired as all get out. No.more getting drunk on monday nights
I wasn’t sure expecting this to be as good as it is get past the first few chapters or so and your in for a good ride a villain who isn’t a jackass and not as Zangeif “A bad guy,... but no a BAD GUY”
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Flaws: Main character is delusional. Some elements of the plot feels forced. Contradicting information. 9/10 would recommend
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No.1 Villain? That's just pure bs! The 'Heroes' are more of villains then the Mc. The Mc is just a totally useless as a villain and we all know it. So unless he actually does some evil **** I'm going to put this on hold.
Thanks for the novel 😊😀😁😂😄😅😆😇😉😯😐😑😊😀😁😂😄😅😆😇😉😯😐😑😊😀😁😂😄😅😆😇😉😯😐😑😊😀😁😂😄😅😆😇😉😯😐😑😊😀😁😂😄😅😆😇😉😯😐😑
Cringe title but it's a good story. (filler) | \ / ............................................................................................
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KHB adds a certain quality of flavor that is uniquely his own to cliche concepts that turn every story he writes into gold. I'm a huge fan and look forward to every chapter of his books. This story in particular hasn't even reached 50 chapters, but he's already got me hooked on the plot. Thank you, KHB, for breaking the mold to create another wonderful world for us, the readers, to experience.
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It's great and the story is beautiful, the haracters are good and the world building is unique. However even though it is stated as harém, I can't help but notice than Al is easily distracted by women. It is a fact that in the beginning he just turned ***** but his will for women is a little too soft that every women he sees, he will fell head over heals. It should be a good thing but women must be selected because they have this complex for other more capable women.
Its been sometime since I read something this good the characters are fun and charismatic and make you sympathize with them, the author makes the main characters develop constantly and you can see their evolution clearly one of the best I have ever read.
Great story, felt like author knew before hand what they needed to do to succeed.
hhhhm! no1 villain? I don't think so.... but why should I care I already read it though.... even if the story is not what I expected.. 'patience is virtue' maybe on coming chapter I would find what I'm looking for...
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This is a great book about death and destruction. Believe in the rapture and the world will be smelly. Everyone must run to the golden heavens in the sky and become one with the autobots! Thanks for coming to my TED talk!
this book was very interesting and fun to read I hope that another can continue to create the rest of the series as amazing as this first part
A great read so far the first chapter was weird missing a few words and i believe it Skipped from chapert 2 to chapter 4. I enjoy the concept and like where the story is going
The author doesn't have the #1 completed original novel on webnovel for no reason. This is fantastically well wrote and thought out. Would heavily recommend.
a good, quick read. not too shabby. Not at all what I thought it would be, as the "villain" is a good guy and the "heros" are villainous. kinda like the Batman philosophy. he is the bad guy but at the same time he is the good guy.
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Reveal Spoiler Honest Review: Really good, however, i wouldnt recommend this too someone who wants a pure villian mc. The mc is more anti heroish? Although currently id say he doesnt particularly fit into any role, or atleast thats how id like him to be. Pretty much as long as you keep your expectations in line regarding the whole villian thing, youll get to enjoy a great novel.
Thanks for the novel 😀🙂😗😗😗🙂🤑🙃🤗😉😊🤭😊🤭😇🤫😇🤫🥰🥰🤔😍🤔😍🤐🤩🤐😂😜😂😜😜😂😍🤣😛😅😋🥰🥰🤫🥰🤫😊😊😚😉😗🙃😚😉🤗😊🤭😇😛🤣🤣😀😃
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So far i have absolutely loved reading this. I need 100 some odd characters though so let me tell you about my day? Woke up tired as all get out. No.more getting drunk on monday nights
I wasn’t sure expecting this to be as good as it is get past the first few chapters or so and your in for a good ride a villain who isn’t a jackass and not as Zangeif “A bad guy,... but no a BAD GUY”
Thanks for the 😁😃😂🙃😍😘😍😘🤩😗☺😘😚😗🥰😊🥰😊😆🤣🤣😆😇😁😆😄😃😁😀😄😍🙃😗🤩☺😘😚😗😙☺😊🥰😊🤣🤣😆😅😁😆😄😃😁😘🤩😗😛☺😜😚😗😇😊😅😉😀
Flaws: Main character is delusional. Some elements of the plot feels forced. Contradicting information. 9/10 would recommend
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Reveal Spoiler No.1 Villain? That's just pure bs! The 'Heroes' are more of villains then the Mc. The Mc is just a totally useless as a villain and we all know it. So unless he actually does some evil **** I'm going to put this on hold.
Thanks for the novel 😊😀😁😂😄😅😆😇😉😯😐😑😊😀😁😂😄😅😆😇😉😯😐😑😊😀😁😂😄😅😆😇😉😯😐😑😊😀😁😂😄😅😆😇😉😯😐😑😊😀😁😂😄😅😆😇😉😯😐😑
Cringe title but it's a good story. (filler) | \ / ............................................................................................
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KHB adds a certain quality of flavor that is uniquely his own to cliche concepts that turn every story he writes into gold. I'm a huge fan and look forward to every chapter of his books. This story in particular hasn't even reached 50 chapters, but he's already got me hooked on the plot. Thank you, KHB, for breaking the mold to create another wonderful world for us, the readers, to experience.
Sounds interestingSounds interesting Sounds interestingSounds interestingSounds interestingSounds interestingSounds interestingSounds interestingSounds interestingSounds interesting Sounds interestingSounds interestingSounds interestingSounds interesting Sounds interestingSounds interestingSounds interestingSounds interesting
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact s9033107ringdom@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.