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I always enjoy vampire fanfics and can't wait for you to pump out some more chapters xD SIFNVDKHVBUBHTGUTBGOITEWHGERTIGBEUBUTBUHBVUBVERTUVBUFVHWRTUVHREWIUVHRTIVFEHVIFHVOEIRUTHBFHOUVYHTERIVI
The writing quality is okay, plenty of mistakes but is understandable. The last update so far was one week ago. The story would have been okay if it didn't conflict with the rules of the original universe and wishes, the mc is also stupid but has plot armour. The MC wished to become an Original who can use magic, there was no mention of losing the requirement of invitations or the weakness of sunlight. Granted, it may have been a side-effect of the capability to use magic. That does not, however, explain the ability to compel witches, or why his progeny is capable of it as well. The MC does not make use of people's potential and sired a vampire-witch literally one day after reincarnating.
I always enjoy vampire fanfics and can't wait for you to pump out some more chapters xD SIFNVDKHVBUBHTGUTBGOITEWHGERTIGBEUBUTBUHBVUBVERTUVBUFVHWRTUVHREWIUVHRTIVFEHVIFHVOEIRUTHBFHOUVYHTERIVI
The writing quality is okay, plenty of mistakes but is understandable. The last update so far was one week ago. The story would have been okay if it didn't conflict with the rules of the original universe and wishes, the mc is also stupid but has plot armour. The MC wished to become an Original who can use magic, there was no mention of losing the requirement of invitations or the weakness of sunlight. Granted, it may have been a side-effect of the capability to use magic. That does not, however, explain the ability to compel witches, or why his progeny is capable of it as well. The MC does not make use of people's potential and sired a vampire-witch literally one day after reincarnating.