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Synopsis
loren has miserable life he got so much bully and he was hated by most people
one day he was driving his bike to his house when car hit him and died but something interesting happens to him after he died
[this fanfiction doesn't necessarily following the same plot like in manga ]
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I am going to be brutally honest and hope the author learns from this, the concept is cool but the execution is bad. this is meant to be constructive criticism, not a hate comment. writing quality: hard to read, but that could be fixed with an editor or just running it through some grammar software, like grammarly. story development: doesn't really make sense? the names don't really match up with the region. character design: doesn't go into enough depth in things like why people act in certain ways, to fix this the author could give a slight peek into their backgrounds to explain their behavior. updating stability: it has been dropped :( world backgroud: as I said before, just going a little bit into the backstory and just vaguely explain things to give us insight into the story and just adding in some useless details about a character to help get the reader more attached to the character just so they can be ripped out of the story. I hope the author or any authors who read this review take something positive from this review and improve themselves.
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