Heroic System in DxD

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Inferno_Vor

Even with the downsides early on I didn't find the book bad, but at this point it's just awful. His main girl(loli goddess) decided to rape the girl he kissed first because she was jelaous, at that point I just find it revolting to continue reading. She is first apologetic and sad for making things the way they are and then decides u know what I'll force you to do 50 shades of gray with me even though she said she wanted her first to be with him, that's just ****ed and don't bs like saying that she didn't force or take her first it's just ****ed up. Like **** you at this point how is that remotely ok, I"d be more ok if she just killed her then raped her.

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Dragonia_101

I recommend not reading it. mc first love and wife basically rapes any woman mc gets behind his back. if u like ntr than read it otherwise its a disappointment a good story messed up by author.

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Jelly_Red_Kuma

For loli goddes 🤣😂😅😇😇😇😇

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Kokushibou

This is average at best, don't feel like listing the things that are wrong. But chapter 5 was triggering me, i mean about the System logs. What was this interaction? It was stupid af i mean he gets angry like a child and asks why the AI did not told him about that he "goes" unconscious, the AI tells him he should go to System logs, he ask how. The AI tells him like he is a Idiot for not knowing how to enter it, he should ask the System, "System enter System logs" then he did that. And finds that the System told him in the SYSTEM LOGS that he is going unconscious, then he apologizes for "his" mistake and the AI forgives him. 1. How should he know that this function exist? 2. He was supposed to make his body in 2 minutes, so how was he supposed to ask about the System functions while making his body? 3. How should he know how to enter System logs, i mean he just asked. They are many different Systems, and 98% don't even have that function, so... how? The System or AI should have simply told him while he was making his body. Anyway read it yourself, seems besides the loli part pretty average. But such simple things like that, makes me want to drop it instally. Btw your "Thumbnail" looks bad, many people would not even click at this because of that bad quallity picture you have. Just put a picture of a good looking girl or something like that.(which has good quallity) anyway Good Luck with your fanfic👍👋and stop making him blush👉👌

LV 5

Legendary_Person

For exp I can do anything..... For exp I can go to any lengths..... For exp I can create many useless reviews..... Because exp is my life.... It is my love.... And it is my dream.....

LV 5

Harem_fan

I am this far in and this MC is still a little child, and it does not feel like DxD at all, so I am bailing. Good luck author it is an interesting story but not what it was made to seem like.

LV 12

roman601

I see loli I read I am but a simple reader who is not afraid to say what he likes 😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤

LV 4

fantacia_000

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LV 4

incognitoyy

authur continue writting this story and don't listen to the haters.After all haters just gotta hate.Good luck writting the story.HHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEE AAAAAAAA GGGGGGOOOOOOOODDDDDDD TTTTTTTTTIIIIIIIIIIIMMMMMMMMMMMEEEEEERRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LV 5

Daoist721221

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Hafis_Pratama

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LV 14

Roon_Toon1

author just add the harem tag because I doubt there is a dxd fanfic that does not have a harem and op mc that saves Akeno mother, rescue Koneko and her sister, and do eat plus yours is a heroic system so just add the harem tag.