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Kat is my nickname and I just laughed when I saw that. I love supernatural stuff with slice of life. Lilly's habits are similar to mine and I just love that. I have a wierd way of seeing everything as cute as can be and I love Kat's sister because she is purely adorable.
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the story is good but very very slow paced to the extent that some parts feel strexhd out. this has no tension building for the fight scenes.and kat is sometimes too stupid for her own good.
Well written and very amusing. The sweet parts are fluffy and enjoyable, the adventure is creative, the demon society is pretty rad. Things can ramble on a bit and the pacing is pretty slow, but it's not a major detraction from the story.
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I actually like this story. The worlds and settings are pretty fantastic as well as the lore development. There are quite a few things I like, However there are also a few things that rub me the wrong way. I feel the MC is a bit bland. She never really reacts to anything in a noteworthy manner even though her entire world is thrown for a loop. I mean, suddenly grow a tail? Yup, just roll with it. Find yourself in a sea of flame and then appear in front of someone without knowing why? Yup, just roll with it. It's too much of a "come way may" attitude where it begins to detract from her depth as a person. It also seems that the author may have a dislike of men in general. The only good male character is mainly only mentioned as reference as the person who ran the orphanage or one craftsman that's kind of cool. That's it. The rest are crass, fools, buffoons, etc.. Not that I care much because we all have our biases, but if this kind of thing sets you off then take note. Almost ALL the characters are female. For the good parts I think the overall character development and progress of the other characters is fairly nice. The story does go a bit slow on some parts but I think the author manages to balance the speed of combat with the slowness of everyday life fairly well. Sure, there would be a lot of things I would do differently in various situations but it's interesting to see the MC make the mistakes and have to work harder for them even though it doesn't really add to her depth of character. The supporting characters are pretty fantastic, although as a father of a 10y/o, Sylvie is WAY OP for her age. OVERALL its a good story if you can deal with some seemingly almost anti-male undertones. Since the story is good, it's not bad enough for me to really care.
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Really nice story, especially the premise and general idea. I like the multiple and regular mini arcs with the summonings and with her life on earth in the center. I'm also very curious about what the MC will further learn about her race and abilities. Slight problems are: (I'm still at around chapter 100 so it's definitely possible that these only apply early on, MINOR SPOILERS AHEAD) 1. Some minor grammar issues (especially there/their/they're switch up very frequently.) 2. Lacking seriousness and over the top comedy efforts. What I mean by that is the lack of serious attitudes. The most mild of those is the MC just taking her transformation with nothing much more than calm acceptance. More importantly though is the lack of response towards serious danger, pain and stakes. In several of her summons she faces serious risk of getting hurt or even dying. At one point she even takes injuries that would be crippling to any normal human. All this and MC just shrugs it off and treats it like any other day. No reaction whatsoever. The same applies to stuff that could potentially put several other people at risk and still there is no real genuine reaction even if it could cause people harm either physically or 'just' to their livelihood. To top that off, since this is a comedy, the seriousness of all these situations doesn't just get ignored they are even made fun of. Comdedy to me (at least in this type of novel) should never exceed certain boundaries and there is always a time to joke and a time not to. And in this one it's very often exceeding that boundary. 3. Often times unbelievable characters. This is mostly seen in the characters on earth. Besides the MC there is Gramps, Sylvie, Lily, Vivian and Callisto (also Chekov). Every single one of them is an extremely rare type of character, which seem impossible to exist in so close proximity. And without exception no one has any problem with MC being/transforming into a demon. Not a single shred of conflict because of it. And on top of that, it seems all of them have at least something special. I get that characters should be distinguishable but it just seems implausible/convenient that everyone MC meets is like that. Do note that despite the majority of that being critique it's still a very enjoyable read.
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The novel started pretty well. I really enjoyed the first 70 chapters, despite it being quite shallow - lacking in small things, that make the novel that much more enjoyable to read. But after ch70, the novel kinda turns upside down. The author starts a tournament arc. Author tries to be funny, but he fails miserably, which turns the arc into a collection of terrible jokes. At first i was just skimming though it (trying not to miss important story details. Wasnt much of it tho, maybe a chapter worth at most out of 40), but once i hit ch110, it all changes. From ch110 onwards the nolvel costs money to read. I thought, if the arc is done shortly after, i could deal with it. So I checked the chapter names, and it turns out it doesnt. It goes on and on and on. At least til ch170. No way im spending money on 90% bad jokes, nor do i want to skip the chapters (would miss some important details, maybe). So yeah, this novel overall is just a collection of terrible jokes, sprinkled with some story in between. Shame, coz it had great potential.
Every chapter has me enraptured, and always looking forward to the next. This book is packed with the perfect amount of detail to capture the reader. I highly recommend giving it a read.
Now, I love this one. it is probably my favourite book on the site, it has good characters, interesting worlds, it is a good fantasy adventure mixed with slice of life that i definetely recommend. however, there is one issue i have with it, it started out minor but as it continues it gets worse and worse. while it is a common potfall in these kinda of stories the most recent ~50+ chapters have been especially bad, starting at the dreamwalking arc the chapters have been getting shorter and shorter until where we are now where single coNversations span several chapters. Now Vongrak is a good writer, they have show this clearly but it feels like they are pushing themselves too much to accomplish this each day release. I think you should take a breather and gather your thoughts, maybe if you are allowed to spread out the releasea so you have more time on your hands. I dont want you to overwork yourself. It is a very good story that i would recommend to anyone, but Vongrak you are stretching yourself thin atm and i hope you can take a rest.
This story has a lot of potential but the dialogue is so poorly written that it's almost painful to read. A skilled editor cutting out about 30% of the words and tightening the phrases would bring it from a good idea to an enjoyable read.
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I absolutely love this book. The characters are great, the story can drag on in certain arcs but overall this is the best story Ive ever read here. Theres humor, action, slice of life fluff, just everything I could want in a story. I cant wait for the next chapters!!
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This novel is the one that really surprised me the most. It is a good balance of slice of life,world building and action and i have to say the action get surprisingly brutal at times(caught me off guard)character are very good world building is phenomenal and the story is really enjoyable. The on thing that i kind of Hate/Love is that there are too many DETAILS. Love because you really get a very good picture of all character,environment,situation etc...... Hate because it slow down thing a lot like MC get in a room and you get half chapter describing the room that kind of thing. In comclusion a very good story worth every second of reading.
Kat is my nickname and I just laughed when I saw that. I love supernatural stuff with slice of life. Lilly's habits are similar to mine and I just love that. I have a wierd way of seeing everything as cute as can be and I love Kat's sister because she is purely adorable.
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the story is good but very very slow paced to the extent that some parts feel strexhd out. this has no tension building for the fight scenes.and kat is sometimes too stupid for her own good.
Well written and very amusing. The sweet parts are fluffy and enjoyable, the adventure is creative, the demon society is pretty rad. Things can ramble on a bit and the pacing is pretty slow, but it's not a major detraction from the story.
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I actually like this story. The worlds and settings are pretty fantastic as well as the lore development. There are quite a few things I like, However there are also a few things that rub me the wrong way. I feel the MC is a bit bland. She never really reacts to anything in a noteworthy manner even though her entire world is thrown for a loop. I mean, suddenly grow a tail? Yup, just roll with it. Find yourself in a sea of flame and then appear in front of someone without knowing why? Yup, just roll with it. It's too much of a "come way may" attitude where it begins to detract from her depth as a person. It also seems that the author may have a dislike of men in general. The only good male character is mainly only mentioned as reference as the person who ran the orphanage or one craftsman that's kind of cool. That's it. The rest are crass, fools, buffoons, etc.. Not that I care much because we all have our biases, but if this kind of thing sets you off then take note. Almost ALL the characters are female. For the good parts I think the overall character development and progress of the other characters is fairly nice. The story does go a bit slow on some parts but I think the author manages to balance the speed of combat with the slowness of everyday life fairly well. Sure, there would be a lot of things I would do differently in various situations but it's interesting to see the MC make the mistakes and have to work harder for them even though it doesn't really add to her depth of character. The supporting characters are pretty fantastic, although as a father of a 10y/o, Sylvie is WAY OP for her age. OVERALL its a good story if you can deal with some seemingly almost anti-male undertones. Since the story is good, it's not bad enough for me to really care.
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Really nice story, especially the premise and general idea. I like the multiple and regular mini arcs with the summonings and with her life on earth in the center. I'm also very curious about what the MC will further learn about her race and abilities. Slight problems are: (I'm still at around chapter 100 so it's definitely possible that these only apply early on, MINOR SPOILERS AHEAD) 1. Some minor grammar issues (especially there/their/they're switch up very frequently.) 2. Lacking seriousness and over the top comedy efforts. What I mean by that is the lack of serious attitudes. The most mild of those is the MC just taking her transformation with nothing much more than calm acceptance. More importantly though is the lack of response towards serious danger, pain and stakes. In several of her summons she faces serious risk of getting hurt or even dying. At one point she even takes injuries that would be crippling to any normal human. All this and MC just shrugs it off and treats it like any other day. No reaction whatsoever. The same applies to stuff that could potentially put several other people at risk and still there is no real genuine reaction even if it could cause people harm either physically or 'just' to their livelihood. To top that off, since this is a comedy, the seriousness of all these situations doesn't just get ignored they are even made fun of. Comdedy to me (at least in this type of novel) should never exceed certain boundaries and there is always a time to joke and a time not to. And in this one it's very often exceeding that boundary. 3. Often times unbelievable characters. This is mostly seen in the characters on earth. Besides the MC there is Gramps, Sylvie, Lily, Vivian and Callisto (also Chekov). Every single one of them is an extremely rare type of character, which seem impossible to exist in so close proximity. And without exception no one has any problem with MC being/transforming into a demon. Not a single shred of conflict because of it. And on top of that, it seems all of them have at least something special. I get that characters should be distinguishable but it just seems implausible/convenient that everyone MC meets is like that. Do note that despite the majority of that being critique it's still a very enjoyable read.
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The novel started pretty well. I really enjoyed the first 70 chapters, despite it being quite shallow - lacking in small things, that make the novel that much more enjoyable to read. But after ch70, the novel kinda turns upside down. The author starts a tournament arc. Author tries to be funny, but he fails miserably, which turns the arc into a collection of terrible jokes. At first i was just skimming though it (trying not to miss important story details. Wasnt much of it tho, maybe a chapter worth at most out of 40), but once i hit ch110, it all changes. From ch110 onwards the nolvel costs money to read. I thought, if the arc is done shortly after, i could deal with it. So I checked the chapter names, and it turns out it doesnt. It goes on and on and on. At least til ch170. No way im spending money on 90% bad jokes, nor do i want to skip the chapters (would miss some important details, maybe). So yeah, this novel overall is just a collection of terrible jokes, sprinkled with some story in between. Shame, coz it had great potential.
Every chapter has me enraptured, and always looking forward to the next. This book is packed with the perfect amount of detail to capture the reader. I highly recommend giving it a read.
Now, I love this one. it is probably my favourite book on the site, it has good characters, interesting worlds, it is a good fantasy adventure mixed with slice of life that i definetely recommend. however, there is one issue i have with it, it started out minor but as it continues it gets worse and worse. while it is a common potfall in these kinda of stories the most recent ~50+ chapters have been especially bad, starting at the dreamwalking arc the chapters have been getting shorter and shorter until where we are now where single coNversations span several chapters. Now Vongrak is a good writer, they have show this clearly but it feels like they are pushing themselves too much to accomplish this each day release. I think you should take a breather and gather your thoughts, maybe if you are allowed to spread out the releasea so you have more time on your hands. I dont want you to overwork yourself. It is a very good story that i would recommend to anyone, but Vongrak you are stretching yourself thin atm and i hope you can take a rest.
This story has a lot of potential but the dialogue is so poorly written that it's almost painful to read. A skilled editor cutting out about 30% of the words and tightening the phrases would bring it from a good idea to an enjoyable read.
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I absolutely love this book. The characters are great, the story can drag on in certain arcs but overall this is the best story Ive ever read here. Theres humor, action, slice of life fluff, just everything I could want in a story. I cant wait for the next chapters!!
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This novel is the one that really surprised me the most. It is a good balance of slice of life,world building and action and i have to say the action get surprisingly brutal at times(caught me off guard)character are very good world building is phenomenal and the story is really enjoyable. The on thing that i kind of Hate/Love is that there are too many DETAILS. Love because you really get a very good picture of all character,environment,situation etc...... Hate because it slow down thing a lot like MC get in a room and you get half chapter describing the room that kind of thing. In comclusion a very good story worth every second of reading.