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Amazing novel author san I hope that I continue this novel as no matter what people complaint or point some mistake in which I think they have 0 level IQ still novel is fantastic no matter what please continue this work u don't this but your novel is one of the best of harry potter fan fic out their and I hate too such novel to be on hiatus or dropped please continue this novel sir.
this story is complete bs. crafting a wand in the womb? reading the harry potter books in soul form? i believe this genre is called crackfic, and is not my cup of tea. its absolutely ridiculous and gets worse and worse
Damn that's a first time that i give a 5 stars for writing quality but 1 for the rest... i mean excluding the idea and very good writing quality it was a tragedy... not mentioning making a harem of less then 10 years old girls, ugh... Author didn't care about original age of characters where we have him sending letters to gabriele that's 1 year old at that time. There is completly no consequence of any action taken by MC... His harem is growing at a speed where it includes girls he didn't even meet yet. He just tells all secrets and does what he wants without any preparation or fail safes... And considering what i seen there will be solid nerf of MC as he is high above human limit when it comes to strenght, agility etc... The entire story is like MC is in a AU where everyone is happy, no one is plooting, the dark side of the world don't exist and MC gets everything he wants with the power of Plot Armour riding a unicorn on a rainbow with his extremly underage harem...
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I don’t even know how to explain how much I love your book I literally just downloaded it today and Im already finished it I’m already on the last chapter I can’t wait until you update again please do it soon.
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the story is basically, a reincarnated man who wants to catch a bunch of girls while he gains extraordinary powers like cookies, the most "interesting" was Harry Potter becoming Holly Potter, that was priceless. go get her(him) man!
Reveal SpoilerMuy buen capítulo y amigo si puedes subirlo más seguido sería mejor , ummmm interesante las opciones que propones ; la primera es en el mundo de pokemon y la segunda es en el mundo de Marvel DC , ummmm bueno la decisión es muy fácil sería Marvel la "opción 2" además sería más divertido por las batallas y los poderes de Fénix sip mucho mejor.
NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE AND HOPE THAT THE AUTHOR WILL NOT DROP THIS NOVEL AND WILL CONTINUE WRITING IT (7 CHPA/WEEK)A SELFISH SUGGESTION 😋
The novels is okay But at this point It's getting annoying how every chapter Is about him trying to seduce girls .................................................................
Reveal SpoilerThe writing quality is great and showed amazing improvement as the stability of updates is going well. The stories development is going at a good pace and its very enjoyable at the current rate of progress. The character design is perfect and well written while the world background is great thanks for the great work.
This novel is very well developed however i would enjoy if the Mc could get more mature women in his harem such as Bellatrix and some others. The character design is great while the world background is fine the stability of updates is frequent which is good and the writing quality is good can be improved from small mistakes, but this novel shows the hard work the author puts into it so i hope the author can keep up the incredible work and thank you.
Muy buen capítulo muy bueno ya esperaré el siguiente con ansias sobretodo cuando ingresen a la escuela de magos hay se armará un revuelo a lo grande cuando vean que Draco tiene varias mujeres jejejeje pobres hombres celosos yo lo estaría
Reveal SpoilerThe writing quality is good, but the stability of updates could be more frequent unless the writer likes to relax then that's fine. the story development is great, but i'd like to know if the Mc would only go towards the female students like Ginny, Daphne, Astoria, Gabrielle, Fleur, Hannah, Susan, Luna, holly(Harry), Cho, and the Parvati twins. Is it possible for him to get ***** women to or no such as Bellatrix and can he be with Tonks as well because Bellatrix needs happiness to.
This is a gem, this is the first time i have read female harry potter X mc and i have to say author have done a great job. i would recommend every hp fan to at least give it a try and although it is a harem, it does not seem too forced and right now mc kind of have a friendly relation with each girl.
Seboga novel ini tdk di jatuhkan terlalu cepat dan seboga lebih di percepat mengunggah bab dengan bantuan batu daya😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇
This is an awesome fanfic stop reading the reviews and read the novel you'll love it Seriously read it don't waste time here with my opinion go get your own by reading the novel just do it.
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 un fanfic supremo con potencial. 😎😍😎😎😎😎😍😍😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎🤗😎😎😎😎😎😎🙂😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😗😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😅😅😅
The first thing I did was to be a part of the world and the other is a great way to get the best out of the way and I have to say that I am not a fan of the most important things to do in the future and the other is a great way
Good.Nice.Autor-San is a genius. I love this novel❤ More chapters please🙏🙏😪😪🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I want more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more nyaa !!!
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Potential is there, keep up the good work! Have some reservation about Hermione(because of her character in cannon), like it so far though. Especially Greengrass' sisters, very good choice I say! Approved!
Bad... Start was good and all, but after making friends with mudbloods and getting sorted into gryffindor as Dravo Malfoy, it's just trash in my opinion...
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Amazing novel author san I hope that I continue this novel as no matter what people complaint or point some mistake in which I think they have 0 level IQ still novel is fantastic no matter what please continue this work u don't this but your novel is one of the best of harry potter fan fic out their and I hate too such novel to be on hiatus or dropped please continue this novel sir.
this story is complete bs. crafting a wand in the womb? reading the harry potter books in soul form? i believe this genre is called crackfic, and is not my cup of tea. its absolutely ridiculous and gets worse and worse
Damn that's a first time that i give a 5 stars for writing quality but 1 for the rest... i mean excluding the idea and very good writing quality it was a tragedy... not mentioning making a harem of less then 10 years old girls, ugh... Author didn't care about original age of characters where we have him sending letters to gabriele that's 1 year old at that time. There is completly no consequence of any action taken by MC... His harem is growing at a speed where it includes girls he didn't even meet yet. He just tells all secrets and does what he wants without any preparation or fail safes... And considering what i seen there will be solid nerf of MC as he is high above human limit when it comes to strenght, agility etc... The entire story is like MC is in a AU where everyone is happy, no one is plooting, the dark side of the world don't exist and MC gets everything he wants with the power of Plot Armour riding a unicorn on a rainbow with his extremly underage harem...
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I don’t even know how to explain how much I love your book I literally just downloaded it today and Im already finished it I’m already on the last chapter I can’t wait until you update again please do it soon.
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the story is basically, a reincarnated man who wants to catch a bunch of girls while he gains extraordinary powers like cookies, the most "interesting" was Harry Potter becoming Holly Potter, that was priceless. go get her(him) man!
Reveal SpoilerMuy buen capítulo y amigo si puedes subirlo más seguido sería mejor , ummmm interesante las opciones que propones ; la primera es en el mundo de pokemon y la segunda es en el mundo de Marvel DC , ummmm bueno la decisión es muy fácil sería Marvel la "opción 2" además sería más divertido por las batallas y los poderes de Fénix sip mucho mejor.
NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE AND HOPE THAT THE AUTHOR WILL NOT DROP THIS NOVEL AND WILL CONTINUE WRITING IT (7 CHPA/WEEK)A SELFISH SUGGESTION 😋
The novels is okay But at this point It's getting annoying how every chapter Is about him trying to seduce girls .................................................................
Reveal SpoilerThe writing quality is great and showed amazing improvement as the stability of updates is going well. The stories development is going at a good pace and its very enjoyable at the current rate of progress. The character design is perfect and well written while the world background is great thanks for the great work.
This novel is very well developed however i would enjoy if the Mc could get more mature women in his harem such as Bellatrix and some others. The character design is great while the world background is fine the stability of updates is frequent which is good and the writing quality is good can be improved from small mistakes, but this novel shows the hard work the author puts into it so i hope the author can keep up the incredible work and thank you.
Muy buen capítulo muy bueno ya esperaré el siguiente con ansias sobretodo cuando ingresen a la escuela de magos hay se armará un revuelo a lo grande cuando vean que Draco tiene varias mujeres jejejeje pobres hombres celosos yo lo estaría
Reveal SpoilerThe writing quality is good, but the stability of updates could be more frequent unless the writer likes to relax then that's fine. the story development is great, but i'd like to know if the Mc would only go towards the female students like Ginny, Daphne, Astoria, Gabrielle, Fleur, Hannah, Susan, Luna, holly(Harry), Cho, and the Parvati twins. Is it possible for him to get ***** women to or no such as Bellatrix and can he be with Tonks as well because Bellatrix needs happiness to.
This is a gem, this is the first time i have read female harry potter X mc and i have to say author have done a great job. i would recommend every hp fan to at least give it a try and although it is a harem, it does not seem too forced and right now mc kind of have a friendly relation with each girl.
Seboga novel ini tdk di jatuhkan terlalu cepat dan seboga lebih di percepat mengunggah bab dengan bantuan batu daya😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇
This is an awesome fanfic stop reading the reviews and read the novel you'll love it Seriously read it don't waste time here with my opinion go get your own by reading the novel just do it.
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 un fanfic supremo con potencial. 😎😍😎😎😎😎😍😍😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎🤗😎😎😎😎😎😎🙂😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😗😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😅😅😅
The first thing I did was to be a part of the world and the other is a great way to get the best out of the way and I have to say that I am not a fan of the most important things to do in the future and the other is a great way
Good.Nice.Autor-San is a genius. I love this novel❤ More chapters please🙏🙏😪😪🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I want more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more nyaa !!!
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Potential is there, keep up the good work! Have some reservation about Hermione(because of her character in cannon), like it so far though. Especially Greengrass' sisters, very good choice I say! Approved!
Bad... Start was good and all, but after making friends with mudbloods and getting sorted into gryffindor as Dravo Malfoy, it's just trash in my opinion...