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Chapter 2: A New Life

"You will never become warrior !!!" It's the last words that he remembers after it's the void.

But there is one thing he must have and it's hope because if he has hope there will be a slim chance to realise his dream but not impossible.

"Even what's the point of the sight ? I will show them that I can be warrior whitout this sight"

But he doesn't know that the lost of the sight will open his mind on another world.

So it was the morning and he must see Goultar because he has promise to train with him.

Cropta began to stand up and something that never happened to him happened. Indeed he fell on the ground. He was a little surprised but that was to be expected, he had lost his sight. With the noise he create, his friend who waited in front of the hut came to him and asked him if he was okay

" Cropta, you're not hurt ?

-Don't worry, it's just a scratch. that's not gonna hurt me.

-Yes you are right I'm worry for nothing but with your injury I have the right to be afraid.

-Don't think about don't you forget that we have to feast for your promotion to a warrior my friend.

-Indeed you are right let's go to home.''

(author : After an orc become a warrior the head will give him a new home so it's normal that there were not with their parents.)

So for the first time since I'm blind I will face the Sun, it's kinda weird because I can only see dark.

But when I left my home some orcs awaited me and scream at me.

''Monster, Monster,Monster.

-I hope you die.

Goultar couldn't stand it and wanted to hit them, but I stopped him because it would only make them angrier.

-You're not going to let them said that ?

-I don't answer his question and I just said they'll forget what happened with the time.

-I hope you're right, let's go."

While we were walking in the village Goultar helped me to walk because I still hadn't got used to my new view but I was able to discover something extraordinary. All my senses were heightened.

After a 10 minute walk we reached the outskirts of the village. Goultar ran at full speed to his hut and said to me, "This is your dwelling place, my prince, and bowed his head.

-Thank you.

-Don't worry, if one of us needs help, we'll help each other.

-You're the one who's going to help me, I won't be doing much, I say, showing my eyes.

-It doesn't matter, you can be my strategist. You've always been a great thinker.

-If you like, I'd be happy to help you, but show me around.

-With pleasure and he me hand me a stick that was lying on the ground.

With the help of the stick I started to walk towards the house when all of a sudden I felt a huge headache, I felt like my skull was going to split in two and I fainted. Just before I passed out I found it amusing that I had a blackout not even a day after the first one.

Goultar immediately ran to his friend and started running around the village asking for help but everyone avoided him. But why we are all in the same tribe we must help each other. Disappointed by what he saw he went home. After four hours of waiting,

I woke up. Just when I made a move Goultar came to see me ''How are you?

-I've been better, but the pain is gone. Did something happen while I was gone?

-Don't even ask me, I asked for help all over the village but everyone refused because for them you are cursed.

-It was something to be expected after what happened it normal for them to be suspicious.

-Yes, but we're one tribe. We have to help each other, but to them it looks like you're already out of the tribe.

"Goultar I think I'll go live in the forest.

-You're crazy, it's too dangerous and you're going to die. You've lost your sight and you want to go to such a dangerous place, I won't let you.

-No, you won't, because I've noticed that only in a dangerous place can I improve my senses. So I'm going there so that I can at least defend myself while being blind. I don't want to have to hide behind you during every fight. I refuse to remain weak.

-I won't be able to discourage you, but promise me you'll stay alive, brother.

-I promise that I'll do my best to stay alive.

-Bye brother come back when you will be strong enough to protect yourself.

So I left to get ready by going to get what I could use but I couldn't do it alone, so I asked Goultar to help me for the last time. "Okay, what do you need?

-I would like you to take my sword from me and fill me a bag with provisions and finally you could give me my animal skins.

15 minutes later.

-You're all set, you don't need anything else?

-Yeah, but there's one more thing I have to do.

-Who's?

-To say good-bye to the whole tribe."

With Goultar's help I headed to the center of the tribe. and I shouted, "Thank you for all the thing you have for me so far, it's to tell you that I'm going to live in the forest next to the village. As I knew that no one was going to answer I started my walk

when someone said - Stop!

-Yes, what is it?

-You have to give us everything you've got because we gave it to you. -. This time I couldn't take it anymore, I accepted to lose my sight, to be insulted, but it's too much. With the help of the noise he had made I was getting closer to him when the head hit him.

-But head

-You can't see that he's doing all this for you and you want to deprive him of any chance of survival. You disappoint me, he said, looking at everyone. Young man, you can go and I'm sorry for all you've had to face. No one can help you in this adventure. You alone are the master of what you do."

I lowered my head and walked away. But he didn't know that his journey would change his destiny and that of all Middle-earth.


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