Defend the Queen

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This novel picked my interest and I catched up pretty fast with the last chapter, I left a mini review in one of the comments and decided to expand upon it. As I said, I liked it, it's an interesting story with decent action and some heartwarming moments, but it has issues. (spoilers ahead!) I know that you explained that you wanted the feeling of rushing through levels and then resetting back to square one, but you rushed too much, the foundation is quite lacking and the world building is missing as well, maybe that dungeon was just the "nest" and the Mc wouldn't return to it in the future but the descriptions are very shallow, it's just a big forest. I had some problems with the size of the characters in the first few chapters, after they evolve I couldn't get how they view their home from the get go, so it was a bit confusing, maybe an error from my part. Then the fight with the "first boss" was anticlimactic, like, she just waltz through the hive without any hiccups and dominates without much effort an enemy that you builded up to be a though challenge, it was honestly a bit dissapointing. Then...chapter 20 and 21 arrived, bold dessicion I have to say, it is a turning point that can ruin the experience or continue to enrich it, I was quite mad at first honestly because you were casting away the early concept of bits and possibly an army of smol ones vs the big world to angels and devils, the intrigue is keeping me hooked. My recommendation...slow down xD, nobody pushes you to do grand things and epic moments, those moments are great because there's a build up to it, a sequence of actions, trials and grow that the Mc has to overcome to earn it, giving the Mc powers bc its cool its not a good idea. And remember, for every setup there has to be a pay off, I expect you don't waste the concept you stablished with the bee queen about the matriarchs moving the strings behind the scenes. And as I said, I'll continue supporting you, Im excited to see where this is going, have a good day :)