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I have just started reading this and been enjoying it but I was checking the comments and they were saying there is to be a reboot? Has that been announced or released yet?
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This story, out of thousands I have read, if one of the best. Very good character interactions and romance and comedy this is too good! I highly recommend it.
BE WARNED AUTHOR is deleting everything below 4 or 3.5 stars. This story is so bad dont waste your time and money. It was supposed to be a vrmmo game story but now unnecessary mystery and romance drama.
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im kinda u know poor but i like reading atleast foure chapters but cant really do that since the max amount of tickets i can get aday is two so its sad that it costs money if i wanna continue reading the way i do so im unfortunetlly just going to look around for free novels
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First of all, WN recommended this, so I just skimmed through within 15 mins. First few chapters already put me off. The guide AI is insulting MC a lot. There's no cuteness in it, it's a pure annoyance. If I started a game with this kind of setting, I will just quit this game and find a better one.
Too much plot armor, made it unreadable. ...............................................................................................
Well, i have been reading this novel for a while.It was ok,i would say.Well theres kinda a lot of thing that bugging me : 1.The Plot -The pacing was way too slow,i personally think that it had the same pacing as a slice of life novel. 2. The Tittle -The first one was a bit misleading because the VR world wasnt even the main idea of the story(MC exploring VR world) 3.The R-18 -I have been waiting too long for the MC and his gf to do it.But there is always something that stopping them to seal the deal.(Like the palace is under attack,GF was sick,GF needs to move to her grandparents house) Anyway,Im looking foward for the reboot.Thanks for the Novel Author
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hey author when will the new book released? ............................................................................................................
ahh im so sad that I came lare to this story. i do love it and wish to read more .but if you no longer have the drive I understand it happens to everyone. though i started your other ones I still hope for this one to continue i need to know who is August and zero /system people to much information lol
I'm not much of a review guy but I'm more or less trying to help people sort whether or not this story is for them. guy plays game. guy suffers pain irl from lvling in game. first chapter has him attacking his gf and her sister as a monster. his body has its own system that affects his mind and crashes the game at times. it's not for me but I consider it to be not perfectly written but still excellent. if you like twisting your head around plot development then you'll enjoy this far more than I did it's a good read as far as I made it. just to conflicting for me.
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I stopped around 60 or something (it was really good) and I'm planning to read it again then I saw the title has changed and even the synopsis? Well, I saw the tags of multiple love Interest, beautiful Female Leads (with an s) and lastly polygamy. So is this harem. I'm a harem fan so it would be great if it is.
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heyo crazy cronie here, review on 31/03/2021 @chap373 (released chap till date: 444) review divided in: Short review Long review IMO Ratings Conclusion Warning (includes spoilers) short review: A must read story for harem fans. A good romance story but not for those who are coming after VRMMORPG tag. long review: pros: 1) Author did a nice job in romance here. A 'true hidden gem' for harem fans. 2) This is a little dark novel. But also has fluffy side. Contradictory huh? Read it and you might understand. 3) One word for world building: FANTASTIC! With put real hard work in creating the plot and the mystery. This world still after so many chaps is a mystery. 4) I love the writing format of the novel. Especially those moments of system (not a spoiler since it's in tags) but yeah! I loved it.. 5) Characters created by the author are awesome! They all feel real, they have their own personalities and ambitions, something many authors of these days lack. 6) This novel surprisingly contains humor. Yeah ik there is a comedy tag, but despite the tag most of the novel do stupid jokes.. like fart jokes and the likes. This one I truly enjoyed the comedy moments. 7) the interactions between the characters are awesome!! This is how conversations in reality takes place, something which cannot be easily portrayed! The interactions between the mc and his girls never failed to put a smile on my face at the end of the chapter 8) I love how the author released few chaps with his girls POV (tho mainly focused on FL, but still a plus) cons: 1) [NOT REALLY A CONS] As mentioned above this novel has a dark side despite the fluffy romance moments. (This depends person to person, for me a pro) 2) [NOT REALLY A CONS] No probs with updates. My basic requirement with updates is (7ch/d for og) & (14ch/d for tl). But this is my personal scale so you might as well ignore it. 3) There are few typo errors. No prob with grammar.. (well there are prob with pronoun at the last chaps i read like mistaking mc for she) but mainly spelling mistakes and misplacement of words. 4) The writing.. I already mentioned many times in my comments but it is confusing few times who is speaking what. 5) Even though the interactions are awesome, we many times fail to grasp the emotions and facial expressions of the characters, since it's never mentioned what expressions the characters really have on their face. 6) pacing i felt sometimes it was little slow. It would have been better if it was a little faster. IMO: - maybe if the confusion of who is speaking which line is reduced it might become a better read - RATINGS: writing: 8/10 (pro-4&6 & con-3&4) update: 8.5/10 (con-2) plot: 8.5/10 (pro-1,2&3, con-1) characters: 8.5/10 (pro-5,6&8) pacing: 8/10 (con-6) dialogues: 9/10 (pro-7 con-5) entertainment: 8.5/10 OVERALL: 4.2/5 Conclusion: As a harem fan, I would definitely want this novel to get more attention!! Also to the readers please support this novel with at least powerstones if possible!! And thanks to the author for the chaps as always! WARNING: *SPOILER (not exactly)* - MC may seem a little edgy. - rather than a anti hero, one might as well refer him as evil - sometimes mc is sharp and sometimes dumb (there is a reason tho) - mc is dense af!
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I have just started reading this and been enjoying it but I was checking the comments and they were saying there is to be a reboot? Has that been announced or released yet?
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BE WARNED AUTHOR is deleting everything below 4 or 3.5 stars. This story is so bad dont waste your time and money. It was supposed to be a vrmmo game story but now unnecessary mystery and romance drama.
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im kinda u know poor but i like reading atleast foure chapters but cant really do that since the max amount of tickets i can get aday is two so its sad that it costs money if i wanna continue reading the way i do so im unfortunetlly just going to look around for free novels
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First of all, WN recommended this, so I just skimmed through within 15 mins. First few chapters already put me off. The guide AI is insulting MC a lot. There's no cuteness in it, it's a pure annoyance. If I started a game with this kind of setting, I will just quit this game and find a better one.
Too much plot armor, made it unreadable. ...............................................................................................
Well, i have been reading this novel for a while.It was ok,i would say.Well theres kinda a lot of thing that bugging me : 1.The Plot -The pacing was way too slow,i personally think that it had the same pacing as a slice of life novel. 2. The Tittle -The first one was a bit misleading because the VR world wasnt even the main idea of the story(MC exploring VR world) 3.The R-18 -I have been waiting too long for the MC and his gf to do it.But there is always something that stopping them to seal the deal.(Like the palace is under attack,GF was sick,GF needs to move to her grandparents house) Anyway,Im looking foward for the reboot.Thanks for the Novel Author
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hey author when will the new book released? ............................................................................................................
ahh im so sad that I came lare to this story. i do love it and wish to read more .but if you no longer have the drive I understand it happens to everyone. though i started your other ones I still hope for this one to continue i need to know who is August and zero /system people to much information lol
I'm not much of a review guy but I'm more or less trying to help people sort whether or not this story is for them. guy plays game. guy suffers pain irl from lvling in game. first chapter has him attacking his gf and her sister as a monster. his body has its own system that affects his mind and crashes the game at times. it's not for me but I consider it to be not perfectly written but still excellent. if you like twisting your head around plot development then you'll enjoy this far more than I did it's a good read as far as I made it. just to conflicting for me.
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I stopped around 60 or something (it was really good) and I'm planning to read it again then I saw the title has changed and even the synopsis? Well, I saw the tags of multiple love Interest, beautiful Female Leads (with an s) and lastly polygamy. So is this harem. I'm a harem fan so it would be great if it is.
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Reveal Spoiler heyo crazy cronie here, review on 31/03/2021 @chap373 (released chap till date: 444) review divided in: Short review Long review IMO Ratings Conclusion Warning (includes spoilers) short review: A must read story for harem fans. A good romance story but not for those who are coming after VRMMORPG tag. long review: pros: 1) Author did a nice job in romance here. A 'true hidden gem' for harem fans. 2) This is a little dark novel. But also has fluffy side. Contradictory huh? Read it and you might understand. 3) One word for world building: FANTASTIC! With put real hard work in creating the plot and the mystery. This world still after so many chaps is a mystery. 4) I love the writing format of the novel. Especially those moments of system (not a spoiler since it's in tags) but yeah! I loved it.. 5) Characters created by the author are awesome! They all feel real, they have their own personalities and ambitions, something many authors of these days lack. 6) This novel surprisingly contains humor. Yeah ik there is a comedy tag, but despite the tag most of the novel do stupid jokes.. like fart jokes and the likes. This one I truly enjoyed the comedy moments. 7) the interactions between the characters are awesome!! This is how conversations in reality takes place, something which cannot be easily portrayed! The interactions between the mc and his girls never failed to put a smile on my face at the end of the chapter 8) I love how the author released few chaps with his girls POV (tho mainly focused on FL, but still a plus) cons: 1) [NOT REALLY A CONS] As mentioned above this novel has a dark side despite the fluffy romance moments. (This depends person to person, for me a pro) 2) [NOT REALLY A CONS] No probs with updates. My basic requirement with updates is (7ch/d for og) & (14ch/d for tl). But this is my personal scale so you might as well ignore it. 3) There are few typo errors. No prob with grammar.. (well there are prob with pronoun at the last chaps i read like mistaking mc for she) but mainly spelling mistakes and misplacement of words. 4) The writing.. I already mentioned many times in my comments but it is confusing few times who is speaking what. 5) Even though the interactions are awesome, we many times fail to grasp the emotions and facial expressions of the characters, since it's never mentioned what expressions the characters really have on their face. 6) pacing i felt sometimes it was little slow. It would have been better if it was a little faster. IMO: - maybe if the confusion of who is speaking which line is reduced it might become a better read - RATINGS: writing: 8/10 (pro-4&6 & con-3&4) update: 8.5/10 (con-2) plot: 8.5/10 (pro-1,2&3, con-1) characters: 8.5/10 (pro-5,6&8) pacing: 8/10 (con-6) dialogues: 9/10 (pro-7 con-5) entertainment: 8.5/10 OVERALL: 4.2/5 Conclusion: As a harem fan, I would definitely want this novel to get more attention!! Also to the readers please support this novel with at least powerstones if possible!! And thanks to the author for the chaps as always! WARNING: *SPOILER (not exactly)* - MC may seem a little edgy. - rather than a anti hero, one might as well refer him as evil - sometimes mc is sharp and sometimes dumb (there is a reason tho) - mc is dense af!
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