PUBG: Demon King System

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StressByMortals

Well -2 stars bcoz Im an apex player 😂 ...................................................................................................

LV 13

Mute

If you're like me and were hoping he would only play PUBG as a way to gain useful skills and items for use in real life, like the description hinted, you will be disappointed, so far all he has got is money and skills he can use ingame, it's boring ****, but i bet it will still get picked because most webnovels viewers taste is ****. The translation quality is the only saving grace, i rated it 1 star just so my total score is low as imo the novel review should be about the story, character design and world background, i feel that update stability and translation quality shouldn't impact the star rating.

LV 4

FirmPillow

Love this novel ❤️ hope it get chosen. Love the Mc personality, it make the novel more entertaining. Let me warn you though, I dont think a single day passed by during these 60 chapters but it didn’t actually bother me at all, it feel very natural. There could be romance in the future. *SPOILER* He met a female streamer in the game and completely destroyed her. Then she started paying attention to him and stuff just read it if you want more. The MC is Overpowered. The system gave him OP ability to fk everyone with a sniper. The system also give ability that could be use outside of PUBG but that will be in the future. MC is narcissistic and handsome so yea. Chance of Webnovel picking this? Probably less than 10% so read mtl or raw

LV 14

Oto

Extremely dragged out. Every person in the novel is written dumber than rocks. Idiotic plays based on the MC wanting to be a righteous player. What else should even be said? I spent many hours reading this, yet hardly 1.5h passed in game. Chapters 5 to 60 are just two games (1h). And the second game isn’t even over yet. I expect it to last for at least another 10-20 chapters. The author writes the same thing many different times so you feel deja vu and feel like you’re reading the same thing four times in the same chapter. Let’s not even go into the ReactAndy chat and how that takes up more than half the novel, and another 20% is taken up by [XX donated YY gift] spamming. Below is essentially how I looked at the end of almost every chapter.

LV 3

SMplayer

My feeling for author when he learning stretching dao: ....................................................................................................................................

LV 12

mithun

after reading first 15 chapters I give you summery. Lin ye got pubg system.linye playing pubg. linye shot gun. linye killed player x headshot. bullet comments; linye is god, smug, blah,blah..etc "nothing more from 15 chapters" "read this review you can atleast skip fisrt 15 chapters.any way I can only help you like this .my jurny with this Book end here." LINYE HEADSHOT PLAYER MITHUN

LV 3

hung_up_my_coat

heh its just an author dragging out fights, making thr mc get lucky items, some how get involved with drama regarding top players (its funny cause modern drama are all mostly fake), and then his abilities dont really apply to the real world. ngl go watch twitch, thia isnt a novel, really. nothing has happened in the plot so far, cause im not gonna consider "phony" drama bc the author doeant have the ability to write about real drama as plot.

LV 12

NiceGuy

The F*** kind of novel is this?? Complete Trash Story repeats for 2 chapters , just different set of words or some changes in perspective 16 chapters for another game , just wow 3 chapters for last 60 seconds of blue circle?? *DBZ smiles in the corner* Suddenly so much popularity?? Hmmm... K ,you win Expressions in pubg?? Are we talking about the same game? Bear Squad of 20+ in same solo game?? Bro your logic is ..... And some things out of order in almost every chapter... Maybe someone will read it out of boredom( like me) But don't expect us to really like this "out of order, full of loopholes" novel

LV 10

Astolfo_My_Waifu

Dont even bother reading this its so boring it would be a smarter decision to just watch 5minutecrafts in youtube its not as braindead as this novel ...AND WHY WOULD SOMEONE NAME IT THE DEMON KING SYSTEM like it gives me braindamage the more i read this

LV 14

GingerClanger

Hmm.. I like the story, but when 20 chapters are spent on 1 game and MC turns from poor and weak to rich and OP in a 20 minutes game.. Then you spend 30 chapters on another game where 5 chapters are spent talking about 3 sniper shots and how the MC had a sudden personality change halfway through.. There started to be some gammar mistakes happening 30+ chapters in.. Now the MOST annoying thing about this book.. This is EVERYWHERE; 'Amazing', 'Truly Amazing', 'Absolutely Amazing' 'Scary', 'Truly Scary' 'Cool', 'So Cool', 'Really Cool' 'Regret', 'Regret so Much', 'Too much Regret' 'Thrilling', 'Too Thrilling', 'Wonderful Thrill' 'Lost?', 'Lost', 'Actually Lost' 'Crushed', 'Truly Crushed', 'Absolutely Crushed' 'Quiet', 'Silent', 'Dead Silent' 'Stiff', 'Incredibly Stiff' 'Smug', 'Really Smug', 'Too Smug' 'Pretentious', 'Too Pretentious' 'Crazy', 'Too Crazy' 'Kill', 'Kill You', 'Gonna Kill', 'Killing', 'Say Kill, Will Kill' 'Too Strong', 'Too Manly', 'Too Domineering' 'Incredible', 'Too Incredible' And Many More.. (some paragraghs are just complete Copy&Paste) THEY ARE REPEATED EVERY CHAPTER!!

LV 13

PizzaPete02

story repeats over and over, it's really horrible .

LV 14

GingerClanger

409 chapters in MTL.. Only 10 odd days have gone by.. MC is OP when facing NO.1 sniper is asia.. MC is super WEAK when facing any person with 2 or more people wether they are Pro Noobs or Top Pros but still wins with super luck.. Still only has Sniper Mastery so any other guns make him worse than Pro Noobs.. 400 odd chapters and he still at chapter 2? in Gun Mastery

LV 13

aviprince

loved it 🔥🔥🔥🔥….......……………………………......…......................................................…......................................👍👍

LV 13

Dr_Chad

Hahaha PUBG never think anyone could come up with that.

LV 13

Argentum

Wow. I started the novel and was immediately excited to see what the MC would do next. The cliffhangers were annoying but almost always had me swiping down to get to the next chapter and continue with the story. The MC himself is arrogant but after reading the last few chapters I found myself finding the MC's behavior was acceptable and for some reason refreshing. This novel kept me on my toes throughout the entire reading of it and I hope this story continues getting updates or becomes an official novel on this site. 10/10 novel and I recommend everyone reading this to either continue reading because you will not be disappointed, or to start reading it.

LV 4

TurtleAudience

Giving it 5 stars because the author's name is Boss Pei and he loses money to be a tycoon!

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Zaw_Paing_Phyo

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LV 3

GoldLucIfeR

Well i liked it a lot but Who the fk would fking pay for it haaaa! I fking read another fanfic bye and rot you ahole . Even if i had money i would rather spent it on something productive than to fking read a stupid fanfic.

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