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Write a reviewloved the story a lot .. both the male leads are amazing .. hope you would write more stories ...
such a nice story......I liked very much .............hope you would write more stores like this .. will definitely read your stories .. its really entertaining..
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Hi, This is Nelly, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on LGBT Fictions. After reading your story "A love so unexpected", I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there is so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via nelly@dreame.com, then I should take the opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story. Sincerely Nelly
This really needs to be edited. One example is edited they meant "Nothing more than that" but said "Nothing much than this". It's bad English through some and others could have flowed better. The characters were cute. I think the communication between characters shouldn't be clumped until one paragraph. It makes it hard for the reader to figure out who said what. The plot wasn't anything special. I've read these types of stories a lot. I wish she would put a unique spin on this kind of plot. For a new writer It's not terrible. I wish the author good luck on her other books, if the author is a she.
loved the story a lot .. both the male leads are amazing .. hope you would write more stories ...
such a nice story......I liked very much .............hope you would write more stores like this .. will definitely read your stories .. its really entertaining..
This story is really good [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Hi, This is Nelly, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on LGBT Fictions. After reading your story "A love so unexpected", I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there is so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via nelly@dreame.com, then I should take the opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story. Sincerely Nelly
This really needs to be edited. One example is edited they meant "Nothing more than that" but said "Nothing much than this". It's bad English through some and others could have flowed better. The characters were cute. I think the communication between characters shouldn't be clumped until one paragraph. It makes it hard for the reader to figure out who said what. The plot wasn't anything special. I've read these types of stories a lot. I wish she would put a unique spin on this kind of plot. For a new writer It's not terrible. I wish the author good luck on her other books, if the author is a she.