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like most of this author, great story with great potential. but grammar and spelling is really bad. and the update stability started good, but crumbled recently.
- Work Days - Monday - The Mind God Tuesday - The Mind God Wednesday - The Supreme Lord Shapeshifter Thursday - The Supreme Lord Shapeshifter Friday - The Mind God or Supreme Lord Shapeshifter Sunday - Free-time or working on next book
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Horrible grammar and hypocritical MC. Follows cliche plot. If you don’t like those things… move on.…………………………………………………………………………… . Z z z z z z
Sorry, didn't even finish chapter 1, that's how bad the spelling is. I have to write this additional sentence to fulfil 140 character length review.
Just up to chapter 85 at the moment, felt like I had to leave a review for other readers to an accurate expectation of the novel. **SPOILERS BE WARNED** The intial world background in the first 20 chapters is rather good, however there are quite a few inconsistencies that come about later on. One example of this is the specific money the exclusively use in other continents. This however, doesn't really explain what they DO use instead of this 'mage currency', or in general the setting of which normal people live. The MC later also says he can just imagine the currency into reality and yet he continues to look for his opponents money after defeating them. Another problem is how fast paced and overpowered the MC got got, sort of destroying story development as theres just not enough time to get to know the other characters well enough. Another issue is the most blatant is the characters dialogue, grammer and in general the writing. The potential of this novel is great however the bland dialogue and bland personality of side characters such as the MCs apprentices is just horrible. Just a few chapters in we got to know there specialities but that all the individuality they have. They continues to say things 'at the same time' in sync but the amount of times this has happened is just lazy writing at this point. In contrast the Mcs creations happen to be more interesting than any other character. The last issue I find is the pacing, currently the MC during chapter 85 is at the power level he should be at chapter 250, the immediate growth and powerhouse he becomes after entering the world is just offputting and feels more like a brief power short book than a actual novel. Overall the novel is subpar, it could go far however the issues involving the pacing, poor writing and lack of interesting individuals leads to a lesser than average read.
to be honest the novel has a great potential but i just can't accept the part of brain evolution because no sense at all no matter the excuse i use to accept it it gives me an uncomfortable feeling first you could have just add some test to increase his life rate like a higher form of a human as high human or something but a different creature brain its impossible because the brain will overload the body and the body can't supply enough energy for it to work so the novel mind god has a meaning in the name changing the brain gives an opposite meaning to the title as if you are telling me you just need a better creature brain to become mind god nah you cut the meaning of the path entirely in my point of view and ah he keeps upgrading his mind attribute but ignores the body wrong totally wrong also human brain made for human body using a different creature brain on a human body to many unnecessary things will happen for the body reaction or the body self mechanism itself won't since it is not scientific novel we can ignore that but atleast there exist a bottom line q brain of a butterfly ?? man thats a complete different body not even close to human so sorry for that bro and goodluck for novel
I liked the character design and the story of the world. I did not understand about the system, because he received new functions in the system or they changed and where did the meditation of the mind disappear to? He stopped pumping it. I look forward to continuing this and Supreme Lord Shapeshifter.[img=рекомендую]
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Hi! I can't write in english so i'm using google translator sorry if this gets confusing. I'm an avid reader of novels in general, a year ago I started and stopped at the last of your novel and I loved everything about it, the way you showed the world, how the story went with the protagonist's quests, I just want to say that this was all brilliant for me. I read another novel of yours and loved it too. You're the only author who makes me look up your name every month to see if any new chapters of my favorite novel come out😁 I don't know why it stopped, but I want to tell you that I really enjoyed it from the beginning to the hiatus hahaha, thanks for your work !!!❤️❤️ I think you're a writing genius, your creativity is out of this world.💯
this is not mind's god novel this is ability maker novel ............................................. ............ .....................................................................................................................................
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It's such a waste... The story has great potential and a decent protagonist but the grammar is awful. 90% of the meaning is lost because of that. Just hoping that it will be revised since the novel is honestly quite good.
I liked the story, even if the ideals of the protagonist are somewhat troubling to me buts it's your story so I can't speak about the ideals of the MC. There are not many plotholes, at least i haven't found any noticeable one and the story is going on pretty smoothly. Its a great read and the MC is op yess i like op mc, its fun reading about op mc, I will keep reading it.
The story is very good, it may seem slow to others but there is a lot of world building, foreshadowing, character development. I like all the details, especially those about the power system and the world background. I woudn't mind to know even more about the world. The characters are also quite likeable in my opinion. I really like the style of writing, it flows naturally and it seems "clean". Also, I didn't notice grammatical errors, just a name switch between Heima and Henrietta in a chapter I think, but that is understandable.
как и большинство этого автора, отличный рассказ с большим потенциалом. но грамматика и орфография действительно плохи. и стабильность обновления началась хорошо, но недавно рассыпалась.
very good, the start of the work is fantastic despite being slow, the MC tries hard to discover his powers and abilities, he is in no hurry to leave the forest to meet humans like other works, he stays there and trains to improve, read 59 chapters before evaluating, 5 stars easy, I hope the MC gets 2 or 3 women as wives
This might have been good but I can't read it because right at the beginning in the first chapter there are so many grammatical errors it looks silly and not enjoyable at all, might want a proofreader or just read it once after you finish writing, they are plain to se, you don't even have to look for them, they'll slap you in the face as soon as you show yourself.
This novel is really good I don't have much to say so I will stop here. 4,2 stars :)! ------------------------------------------------------
I like it because it's uniq and common at the same time. I love the storie and I hope thet it wont be dropted any time soon. I recomend it to people for casual read.
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Good concept ruined by really bad grammar and underwhelming writing. This story is pretty much just one missed bad opportunity as the author is unable to convey anything they would want to past the terrible grammar that is seen in pretty much ever chapter. To the author, if you could possibly dedicate a week or two to editing the previous chapters and correcting bad grammar and weird bolding patterns I feel like that would be a lot more helpful to the popularity of this WN than just continuing with the current quality.
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[Disclaimer: This is a personal opinion] Good writing, way too gruesome story, sometimes disturbing. I highly suggest to avoid this novel unless you are strongly into antiheroes/villains and maybe gore (is this the right word?). If you are into it, however, you may love this. Background kinda typical cultivational world. **: I couldn't read a lot of chapters because I found this novel increasingly disturbing, so not sure if it gets better
Hi, guys sorry for the not posting for four days straight, I had an traffic accident, that was the reason I could not write and post, Again, sorry about the I could not post chapters.
like most of this author, great story with great potential. but grammar and spelling is really bad. and the update stability started good, but crumbled recently.
- Work Days - Monday - The Mind God Tuesday - The Mind God Wednesday - The Supreme Lord Shapeshifter Thursday - The Supreme Lord Shapeshifter Friday - The Mind God or Supreme Lord Shapeshifter Sunday - Free-time or working on next book
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Horrible grammar and hypocritical MC. Follows cliche plot. If you don’t like those things… move on.…………………………………………………………………………… . Z z z z z z
Sorry, didn't even finish chapter 1, that's how bad the spelling is. I have to write this additional sentence to fulfil 140 character length review.
Just up to chapter 85 at the moment, felt like I had to leave a review for other readers to an accurate expectation of the novel. **SPOILERS BE WARNED** The intial world background in the first 20 chapters is rather good, however there are quite a few inconsistencies that come about later on. One example of this is the specific money the exclusively use in other continents. This however, doesn't really explain what they DO use instead of this 'mage currency', or in general the setting of which normal people live. The MC later also says he can just imagine the currency into reality and yet he continues to look for his opponents money after defeating them. Another problem is how fast paced and overpowered the MC got got, sort of destroying story development as theres just not enough time to get to know the other characters well enough. Another issue is the most blatant is the characters dialogue, grammer and in general the writing. The potential of this novel is great however the bland dialogue and bland personality of side characters such as the MCs apprentices is just horrible. Just a few chapters in we got to know there specialities but that all the individuality they have. They continues to say things 'at the same time' in sync but the amount of times this has happened is just lazy writing at this point. In contrast the Mcs creations happen to be more interesting than any other character. The last issue I find is the pacing, currently the MC during chapter 85 is at the power level he should be at chapter 250, the immediate growth and powerhouse he becomes after entering the world is just offputting and feels more like a brief power short book than a actual novel. Overall the novel is subpar, it could go far however the issues involving the pacing, poor writing and lack of interesting individuals leads to a lesser than average read.
to be honest the novel has a great potential but i just can't accept the part of brain evolution because no sense at all no matter the excuse i use to accept it it gives me an uncomfortable feeling first you could have just add some test to increase his life rate like a higher form of a human as high human or something but a different creature brain its impossible because the brain will overload the body and the body can't supply enough energy for it to work so the novel mind god has a meaning in the name changing the brain gives an opposite meaning to the title as if you are telling me you just need a better creature brain to become mind god nah you cut the meaning of the path entirely in my point of view and ah he keeps upgrading his mind attribute but ignores the body wrong totally wrong also human brain made for human body using a different creature brain on a human body to many unnecessary things will happen for the body reaction or the body self mechanism itself won't since it is not scientific novel we can ignore that but atleast there exist a bottom line q brain of a butterfly ?? man thats a complete different body not even close to human so sorry for that bro and goodluck for novel
I liked the character design and the story of the world. I did not understand about the system, because he received new functions in the system or they changed and where did the meditation of the mind disappear to? He stopped pumping it. I look forward to continuing this and Supreme Lord Shapeshifter.[img=рекомендую]
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Hi! I can't write in english so i'm using google translator sorry if this gets confusing. I'm an avid reader of novels in general, a year ago I started and stopped at the last of your novel and I loved everything about it, the way you showed the world, how the story went with the protagonist's quests, I just want to say that this was all brilliant for me. I read another novel of yours and loved it too. You're the only author who makes me look up your name every month to see if any new chapters of my favorite novel come out😁 I don't know why it stopped, but I want to tell you that I really enjoyed it from the beginning to the hiatus hahaha, thanks for your work !!!❤️❤️ I think you're a writing genius, your creativity is out of this world.💯
this is not mind's god novel this is ability maker novel ............................................. ............ .....................................................................................................................................
💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞
Тут самая тупая "система" из возможных . Непродуманный мир , силы , персонажи и действия . Читайте на свой страх и риск . Хрень хрень хрень хрень
Reveal Spoiler It's such a waste... The story has great potential and a decent protagonist but the grammar is awful. 90% of the meaning is lost because of that. Just hoping that it will be revised since the novel is honestly quite good.
I liked the story, even if the ideals of the protagonist are somewhat troubling to me buts it's your story so I can't speak about the ideals of the MC. There are not many plotholes, at least i haven't found any noticeable one and the story is going on pretty smoothly. Its a great read and the MC is op yess i like op mc, its fun reading about op mc, I will keep reading it.
The story is very good, it may seem slow to others but there is a lot of world building, foreshadowing, character development. I like all the details, especially those about the power system and the world background. I woudn't mind to know even more about the world. The characters are also quite likeable in my opinion. I really like the style of writing, it flows naturally and it seems "clean". Also, I didn't notice grammatical errors, just a name switch between Heima and Henrietta in a chapter I think, but that is understandable.
как и большинство этого автора, отличный рассказ с большим потенциалом. но грамматика и орфография действительно плохи. и стабильность обновления началась хорошо, но недавно рассыпалась.
very good, the start of the work is fantastic despite being slow, the MC tries hard to discover his powers and abilities, he is in no hurry to leave the forest to meet humans like other works, he stays there and trains to improve, read 59 chapters before evaluating, 5 stars easy, I hope the MC gets 2 or 3 women as wives
This might have been good but I can't read it because right at the beginning in the first chapter there are so many grammatical errors it looks silly and not enjoyable at all, might want a proofreader or just read it once after you finish writing, they are plain to se, you don't even have to look for them, they'll slap you in the face as soon as you show yourself.
This novel is really good I don't have much to say so I will stop here. 4,2 stars :)! ------------------------------------------------------
I like it because it's uniq and common at the same time. I love the storie and I hope thet it wont be dropted any time soon. I recomend it to people for casual read.
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Good concept ruined by really bad grammar and underwhelming writing. This story is pretty much just one missed bad opportunity as the author is unable to convey anything they would want to past the terrible grammar that is seen in pretty much ever chapter. To the author, if you could possibly dedicate a week or two to editing the previous chapters and correcting bad grammar and weird bolding patterns I feel like that would be a lot more helpful to the popularity of this WN than just continuing with the current quality.
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[Disclaimer: This is a personal opinion] Good writing, way too gruesome story, sometimes disturbing. I highly suggest to avoid this novel unless you are strongly into antiheroes/villains and maybe gore (is this the right word?). If you are into it, however, you may love this. Background kinda typical cultivational world. **: I couldn't read a lot of chapters because I found this novel increasingly disturbing, so not sure if it gets better
Hi, guys sorry for the not posting for four days straight, I had an traffic accident, that was the reason I could not write and post, Again, sorry about the I could not post chapters.