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Write a reviewStory started good with the slight problem of low side characters but recently (100+) i have the feeling like the author is on a LSD trip and wants to run in several directions at once. Killing the sidekick? Reviving her? Who is she now? Some Crossbreed persona between the goddess and herself? Or is the goddess controlling her with console controller while siting on a sofa? Who is the MC now? Still darkelf or some dragonkin? Where did the skeletal dragon come from? Now the party has their levels, classes and memories reset to zero? Are the first 100 chapters optional and can now be skipped?
Reveal SpoilerGods interfere way too much, basically anything MC does don't/won't matter if the gods decide that it won't. MC and her GFs souls are overtaken by gods and they become some ticking bombs or some **** (not important as you really will drop it at that point anyway). So mc really has nothing she can do, gods are playing her and her GF like a fidle, making them their champions/slaves/soul raped slaves. Gods integrate with mcs GF basically changing her. MCs mother magically knows that MC is a lesbian after talking to her for a couple of lines (and no there wasnt any MC staring at boobs and salivating at them or flirting with girls in front of her mother), she just KNEW. and 2nd biggest bull**** that will make you quit if you already didn't after Gods basically have the final say on anything and they say a lot, is how they have to reveal all their stats and secret skills etc. First to the MCs mother and her soon to be GF, with this i somehow got past it as they were "friendlies" "family to be", but when they have to enter a dungeon A DUNGEON... WHEN THEY HAVE TO ENTER A DUNGEON... WHEN they HAVE to ENTER a DUNGEON.... THEY.. they have to FUCKING show all their skills/level/secret skills/stats TO THE FUCKING GATEKEEPER SO THAT HE LETS THEM IN. WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF
It starts good but it gets stupid after chapter 7. Come on. Where is the suspence or some other ****. Too fast I mean she was a poison master and after a chapter she became a necromancer, that will be killed by a God, who have control of her girlfriend which she began to love after 1 day. Sucks.
It's a pretty poor novel. There isn't really any semblance of a story. The whole novel reeks of constant dungeon grinding for little to no reason and being ****ed over by higher beings cos they....apparently don't have anything better to do with their time?
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TLDR: It's pretty MEH. It starts out well with a fun idea, but that gets lost and rather quickly and the problems dominate. First, the writing is at best bland. Almost everything, is the protagonist's inner monologue, and it's very passive. I don't even know how to properly describe it. Second the plot, it's really driven from on high. I have no trouble with fate/destiny/the gods/higher powers screwing with a character but there has to be rhyme or reason to it and there has to be a limit to how often it happens. The main character is now on his 4th reroll, the love interest her third and the only reason is the higher powers intervened once again, That's just big stuff, for small things they show up around every ten chapters Third the characters. I started out liking the mc, but he (girl body definitely still a guy) just got so undefined it was painful. The rest well so far there really aren't any. Closest you get is the FL, and she is not very interesting at this point Finally the world is incoherent. There's just too much lazy writing and 'oops wrote myself into a corner I'll just do an a$$pull to fix it'. Where it stands now it reads like video game grinding novel, where the MC is grinding away like a gold farmer but isn't allowed to progress or gain anything.
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I wanted to make this review as short as i can, so all i wanted to say is: yuri is life.πππ P.S. I love this. I would recommend for people who genuinely like gender benders. π
Such a great story about reincarnation with an interesting take on the premise.The characters are interesting and relatable and the world building gets better as time passes. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Absolutely love this<3 The updates are regular and almost more than 3 chapters a day and that's a huge + for me. Keep up the good work Author @MorbidWishes !!!
It's a great story honestly, but a rather rushed one ..................................................................................
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Reveal Spoilerβ‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘
I am enjoying the story. The development of characters are bit fast , but not to sudden as well. Overall well done bro. **: I think you should find a new name for your wb. She evolves at the beginning of the story and apart from goblin god curse ( which is nullified now ) title has little to do with your wb.
Reveal Spoiler..............Cerita nya lumayan menarik......................Untuk mengurangi kebosanan cocok banget.......sayang-nya chapter nya lumayan pendek.........
Very Good...................................................................................................................................
Reincarnation to be goblin but Female Goblin? that interesting................................................................................
MAYBE This will be another Re monster story...............if you saw goblin and evolution............... But let's see if this novel will be interesting......
ββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββ ββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββSUPPORT GENDER BENDER YURI NOVEL βββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββ
#####################################THIS NOVEL GENRE IS GENDER BENDER, YURI, EVOLUTION.... This will be interesting### ##################################
I really do enjoy this novel so far. I am a massive fan of novels that include non-human main characters and evolution. This novel really does take a different route in the fantasy world, I am looking forward for more chapters! Only problem I have would be the grammatical errors throughout, however these are very manageable in my opinion and don't obstruct reading all that much.
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Starts out intresting, howecer the writing quality tanks around chapter 15. I wish that I could continue reading it but the constant spelling errors and almost nonsensical sentences kind of ruin the story for me. I may pick the novel up again sometime in the future if the author gets around to editing the chapters instead of releasing something that seems a bit rushed.
Story started good with the slight problem of low side characters but recently (100+) i have the feeling like the author is on a LSD trip and wants to run in several directions at once. Killing the sidekick? Reviving her? Who is she now? Some Crossbreed persona between the goddess and herself? Or is the goddess controlling her with console controller while siting on a sofa? Who is the MC now? Still darkelf or some dragonkin? Where did the skeletal dragon come from? Now the party has their levels, classes and memories reset to zero? Are the first 100 chapters optional and can now be skipped?
Reveal SpoilerGods interfere way too much, basically anything MC does don't/won't matter if the gods decide that it won't. MC and her GFs souls are overtaken by gods and they become some ticking bombs or some **** (not important as you really will drop it at that point anyway). So mc really has nothing she can do, gods are playing her and her GF like a fidle, making them their champions/slaves/soul raped slaves. Gods integrate with mcs GF basically changing her. MCs mother magically knows that MC is a lesbian after talking to her for a couple of lines (and no there wasnt any MC staring at boobs and salivating at them or flirting with girls in front of her mother), she just KNEW. and 2nd biggest bull**** that will make you quit if you already didn't after Gods basically have the final say on anything and they say a lot, is how they have to reveal all their stats and secret skills etc. First to the MCs mother and her soon to be GF, with this i somehow got past it as they were "friendlies" "family to be", but when they have to enter a dungeon A DUNGEON... WHEN THEY HAVE TO ENTER A DUNGEON... WHEN they HAVE to ENTER a DUNGEON.... THEY.. they have to FUCKING show all their skills/level/secret skills/stats TO THE FUCKING GATEKEEPER SO THAT HE LETS THEM IN. WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTFWTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF
It starts good but it gets stupid after chapter 7. Come on. Where is the suspence or some other ****. Too fast I mean she was a poison master and after a chapter she became a necromancer, that will be killed by a God, who have control of her girlfriend which she began to love after 1 day. Sucks.
It's a pretty poor novel. There isn't really any semblance of a story. The whole novel reeks of constant dungeon grinding for little to no reason and being ****ed over by higher beings cos they....apparently don't have anything better to do with their time?
good..................... ............................. ............................ ........................................ .................................................
TLDR: It's pretty MEH. It starts out well with a fun idea, but that gets lost and rather quickly and the problems dominate. First, the writing is at best bland. Almost everything, is the protagonist's inner monologue, and it's very passive. I don't even know how to properly describe it. Second the plot, it's really driven from on high. I have no trouble with fate/destiny/the gods/higher powers screwing with a character but there has to be rhyme or reason to it and there has to be a limit to how often it happens. The main character is now on his 4th reroll, the love interest her third and the only reason is the higher powers intervened once again, That's just big stuff, for small things they show up around every ten chapters Third the characters. I started out liking the mc, but he (girl body definitely still a guy) just got so undefined it was painful. The rest well so far there really aren't any. Closest you get is the FL, and she is not very interesting at this point Finally the world is incoherent. There's just too much lazy writing and 'oops wrote myself into a corner I'll just do an a$$pull to fix it'. Where it stands now it reads like video game grinding novel, where the MC is grinding away like a gold farmer but isn't allowed to progress or gain anything.
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I wanted to make this review as short as i can, so all i wanted to say is: yuri is life.πππ P.S. I love this. I would recommend for people who genuinely like gender benders. π
Such a great story about reincarnation with an interesting take on the premise.The characters are interesting and relatable and the world building gets better as time passes. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Absolutely love this<3 The updates are regular and almost more than 3 chapters a day and that's a huge + for me. Keep up the good work Author @MorbidWishes !!!
It's a great story honestly, but a rather rushed one ..................................................................................
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Reveal Spoilerβ‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘
I am enjoying the story. The development of characters are bit fast , but not to sudden as well. Overall well done bro. **: I think you should find a new name for your wb. She evolves at the beginning of the story and apart from goblin god curse ( which is nullified now ) title has little to do with your wb.
Reveal Spoiler..............Cerita nya lumayan menarik......................Untuk mengurangi kebosanan cocok banget.......sayang-nya chapter nya lumayan pendek.........
Very Good...................................................................................................................................
Reincarnation to be goblin but Female Goblin? that interesting................................................................................
MAYBE This will be another Re monster story...............if you saw goblin and evolution............... But let's see if this novel will be interesting......
ββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββ ββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββSUPPORT GENDER BENDER YURI NOVEL βββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββ
#####################################THIS NOVEL GENRE IS GENDER BENDER, YURI, EVOLUTION.... This will be interesting### ##################################
I really do enjoy this novel so far. I am a massive fan of novels that include non-human main characters and evolution. This novel really does take a different route in the fantasy world, I am looking forward for more chapters! Only problem I have would be the grammatical errors throughout, however these are very manageable in my opinion and don't obstruct reading all that much.
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Starts out intresting, howecer the writing quality tanks around chapter 15. I wish that I could continue reading it but the constant spelling errors and almost nonsensical sentences kind of ruin the story for me. I may pick the novel up again sometime in the future if the author gets around to editing the chapters instead of releasing something that seems a bit rushed.