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as a science otaku, i can tell you. IF YOU ARE A GODAMN SCIENCE OTAKU, THIS IS GONNA SATISFY OUR HUNGER. MUAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! , i dont have to say it much. the rating spoke it out of my honesity !
I have never read anything like this before but this story sure has some potential. The plot is interesting and the pace is descent. The mc is a mad scientist and just like the name suggests - yeah, he's MAD! There's still scope for improvement. Keep it up author!!
Ahh the irony of an 'evil scientist' Will update this as I read further. So far, the story is looking pretty good, garnered my interest :) So far in the earlier chapters, they need a few edits for punctuations and etc to better the flow and readability, though even without the edits it's still readable and understandable.
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This is a very different novel atleast for me. It is very interesting, different from the usual cultivation novels. I haven't seen much of cliche scenes in this novel. Also I felt the ideas are unique and refreshing. So what we have is a scientist who is a self proclaimed the most evil person. This is related to his promise to his parents(father I guess, I dont remember). He thinks he is evil but he isn't. He dedicates most of his life to research and acting evil to the world. While he was going to succeed in his experiment on the verge of death he got transported to another world. He has a secret which he himself doesn't know 100% about it. That secret saved him twice but MC never knew about it and even after the secret perished MC is still ignorant. Now MC is stumbling here and there, trying to adjust to this new world. He finds it a little difficult since everything is so technologically backward but advanced in cultivation which is completely new to MC. MC is living on loan meaning he has to earn life everyday else he would die once the days go down to 0. MC has a system helps him quite a lot but doesn't make him OP. This novel isn't like other system novels where you have an MC going to new world and just accepts everything where his personality takes a 360 degree turn due to his transmigration, getting a system and killing stuff mindlessly to become the most OP character. MC has to go step by step, learn everything starting from the most basic thing. He has to grow in all aspects. And the most imp thing is MC is scared of woman so you can see panicking around woman. This is his flaw from his previous world. MC views everything curiously and values knowledge a lot. All in all I feel this story has great potential. Updates are stable. Characters are well made. Writing style is good. Grammar is well above average. World building isn't introduced much as MC doesn't have the most basic knowledge about everything yet. Keep going author
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Although I could see Bai Jie enthusiasm to grow strong, probably in order to get revenge, he's too dependent on the system. I wish he could grow outside of the A.I. Minion is a dear savage. Bai Jie should be roasted by him too. I like that Yiying is assertive of Bai Jie's shortcomings. Also, a character I adore is Ming Xue. She's good at taking care of other people, such a cutie. Bai Jie is a crafty fellow and at the same time, so wary of people. It's a good characteristic for someone who wants to be a mad scientist. The integration of cell mutation with an A.I. system is quite unique. However, it seems that their direct effect on each other was not detailed properly, adding to the matter of cultivation. Thus, proving to be confusing sometimes. I'm looking forward to your in-depth explanation on the matter regarding this, since it's a very important aspect of the story. I'm still wondering if the parasites are quick to learn or not? They should've learned cultivation in the window of coma for Bai Jie. (By the way, the most inactive part of the brain is an obsolete way of saying it. The Brain uses different parts in every action that we take, so the parts are dominant when not in use. However, there are inactive neurons and cells. ) [[[ The following are comments regarding the Technicalities of writing. Please dismiss it if you like.]]] I can see why you don't prefer my way of writing. You have such a straightforward way of narrating things. There are people who will opt to read yours rather than mine because this novel is easier to read. You go straight into action. As opposed to my detailed style of writing, you're inclined to leave it to the reader's imagination with such simple descriptions. That is also your style of writing, so I won't say anything bad about it. Now, there are a myriad of comma splices, run-ons, lack of conjunctions, forgotten capitalizations, and misuse and absence of punctuation marks. These mistakes in grammar cuts the flow of your sentences, making it look like the progression is hasty. There are also several questionable word choices and redundancy. If you would like me to point it out, just please tell me. I will take my time in pointing them out, so you'll be able to proofread them. I'm not pointing out your grammar mistakes out of spite. I want you to improve since this story of yours has an even better way to narrate it, and that is to edit it with the proper use of grammar. You have a very good setting and plot. I've seen your improvements regarding technicals over the course of reading the chapters. I hope that you will continue writing this since there are a lot of people who will like it. I'll be cheering you on. Thank you for the effort you've given in reviewing my work. I am also asking for an apology apropos my misbehaviour. Again, thank you so much. p.s. You might gather readers who aren't familiar with the world of cultivation. I suggest that you incorporate some explanations along the way, so they'll know.
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Hmmm... Quite confusing tho a great read... The novel itself is nice but I think the concept is too generic and I've seen it a lot from other novels so...... I'm gonna pass on this one... I stayed till the end to see if there's going to be any changes and if it'll be quite different but. No. It didn't... Still the same kind of novels that plagued Webnovel.
I like the story, i won't say anything about those grammatical errors since my own English is not that good. I like the way Bai jie think himself evil, well, not just think......... the way he rip off that man's arms and legs, i think he do is evil.
It's such a smooth ride, I was able to binge read it all in a day. This story is definitely a roller coaster ride. The protagonist starts as a funny, eccentric, and bubbly fellow. The narrative complements the protagonist as well, with goofy antics and jokes. However, over time the character and his world grow more complex. A story of a mad scientist grows into one of martial artists cultivation and a large world to boot. It was an definitely and enjoyable read!
Honestly, I'm not fond of reading stories with this kind of genre. However, this story was very captivating. I see a lot of potential in this work. There are mistakes in the punctuation and grammar but there are only few that can be resolved so easily by using an app like Grammarly. The story line was well-plotted! I can say that the writer is naturally talented in writing for coming up a creative story. Keep up the good work author!
i'm brazilian and i don't know english so i use google translator so sorry for grammatical errors sincerely incredible the fact that the protagonist and the other characters do not have cliches doesn’t have a generic personality the System didn’t come out of nowhere the creation of the world is also great the character to have genophobia is also very creative these days the best wuxia I’ve read
Another author review thank you, readers, for your support. Dear reader if you like the novel please leave a review it will help my novel to have a rating it lacks review thank you for giving it a read.
The beginning of the story needs a rewrite, the english on display needing to be interpreted by webnovel veterans. This is still a problem as I'm writing this but it is getting. Otherwise, assuming I'm interpreting it correctly, the story as a whole is on point. The protagonist is a work of art, the thing with Minion was a bit forced but probably necessary, and the female lead is suitably non standard.
How come such a good novel with 22k views doesn’t have any review other than the author’s? Anyways this story is a pretty nice story with a very enjoyable MC. The plot is enjoyable and isn’t forcefully developed. The characters seem pretty 3d,alive, and enjoyable. The only slight problem I would have is with the capitalization not being done correctly and the slight grammar problem. But Author GOOD JOB and keep up the good work 👍
Its a evil novel so i will wvily give 5 stars to myself mc i chose is a bit funny i think may be u can say he is hit in the i wanted try something diffrent so yeah read and plz make time to give comment thank you from ur evil author
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
as a science otaku, i can tell you. IF YOU ARE A GODAMN SCIENCE OTAKU, THIS IS GONNA SATISFY OUR HUNGER. MUAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! , i dont have to say it much. the rating spoke it out of my honesity !
I have never read anything like this before but this story sure has some potential. The plot is interesting and the pace is descent. The mc is a mad scientist and just like the name suggests - yeah, he's MAD! There's still scope for improvement. Keep it up author!!
Ahh the irony of an 'evil scientist' Will update this as I read further. So far, the story is looking pretty good, garnered my interest :) So far in the earlier chapters, they need a few edits for punctuations and etc to better the flow and readability, though even without the edits it's still readable and understandable.
Reveal Spoiler This is a very different novel atleast for me. It is very interesting, different from the usual cultivation novels. I haven't seen much of cliche scenes in this novel. Also I felt the ideas are unique and refreshing. So what we have is a scientist who is a self proclaimed the most evil person. This is related to his promise to his parents(father I guess, I dont remember). He thinks he is evil but he isn't. He dedicates most of his life to research and acting evil to the world. While he was going to succeed in his experiment on the verge of death he got transported to another world. He has a secret which he himself doesn't know 100% about it. That secret saved him twice but MC never knew about it and even after the secret perished MC is still ignorant. Now MC is stumbling here and there, trying to adjust to this new world. He finds it a little difficult since everything is so technologically backward but advanced in cultivation which is completely new to MC. MC is living on loan meaning he has to earn life everyday else he would die once the days go down to 0. MC has a system helps him quite a lot but doesn't make him OP. This novel isn't like other system novels where you have an MC going to new world and just accepts everything where his personality takes a 360 degree turn due to his transmigration, getting a system and killing stuff mindlessly to become the most OP character. MC has to go step by step, learn everything starting from the most basic thing. He has to grow in all aspects. And the most imp thing is MC is scared of woman so you can see panicking around woman. This is his flaw from his previous world. MC views everything curiously and values knowledge a lot. All in all I feel this story has great potential. Updates are stable. Characters are well made. Writing style is good. Grammar is well above average. World building isn't introduced much as MC doesn't have the most basic knowledge about everything yet. Keep going author
Reveal Spoiler Although I could see Bai Jie enthusiasm to grow strong, probably in order to get revenge, he's too dependent on the system. I wish he could grow outside of the A.I. Minion is a dear savage. Bai Jie should be roasted by him too. I like that Yiying is assertive of Bai Jie's shortcomings. Also, a character I adore is Ming Xue. She's good at taking care of other people, such a cutie. Bai Jie is a crafty fellow and at the same time, so wary of people. It's a good characteristic for someone who wants to be a mad scientist. The integration of cell mutation with an A.I. system is quite unique. However, it seems that their direct effect on each other was not detailed properly, adding to the matter of cultivation. Thus, proving to be confusing sometimes. I'm looking forward to your in-depth explanation on the matter regarding this, since it's a very important aspect of the story. I'm still wondering if the parasites are quick to learn or not? They should've learned cultivation in the window of coma for Bai Jie. (By the way, the most inactive part of the brain is an obsolete way of saying it. The Brain uses different parts in every action that we take, so the parts are dominant when not in use. However, there are inactive neurons and cells. ) [[[ The following are comments regarding the Technicalities of writing. Please dismiss it if you like.]]] I can see why you don't prefer my way of writing. You have such a straightforward way of narrating things. There are people who will opt to read yours rather than mine because this novel is easier to read. You go straight into action. As opposed to my detailed style of writing, you're inclined to leave it to the reader's imagination with such simple descriptions. That is also your style of writing, so I won't say anything bad about it. Now, there are a myriad of comma splices, run-ons, lack of conjunctions, forgotten capitalizations, and misuse and absence of punctuation marks. These mistakes in grammar cuts the flow of your sentences, making it look like the progression is hasty. There are also several questionable word choices and redundancy. If you would like me to point it out, just please tell me. I will take my time in pointing them out, so you'll be able to proofread them. I'm not pointing out your grammar mistakes out of spite. I want you to improve since this story of yours has an even better way to narrate it, and that is to edit it with the proper use of grammar. You have a very good setting and plot. I've seen your improvements regarding technicals over the course of reading the chapters. I hope that you will continue writing this since there are a lot of people who will like it. I'll be cheering you on. Thank you for the effort you've given in reviewing my work. I am also asking for an apology apropos my misbehaviour. Again, thank you so much. p.s. You might gather readers who aren't familiar with the world of cultivation. I suggest that you incorporate some explanations along the way, so they'll know.
Reveal Spoiler Hmmm... Quite confusing tho a great read... The novel itself is nice but I think the concept is too generic and I've seen it a lot from other novels so...... I'm gonna pass on this one... I stayed till the end to see if there's going to be any changes and if it'll be quite different but. No. It didn't... Still the same kind of novels that plagued Webnovel.
I like the story, i won't say anything about those grammatical errors since my own English is not that good. I like the way Bai jie think himself evil, well, not just think......... the way he rip off that man's arms and legs, i think he do is evil.
It's such a smooth ride, I was able to binge read it all in a day. This story is definitely a roller coaster ride. The protagonist starts as a funny, eccentric, and bubbly fellow. The narrative complements the protagonist as well, with goofy antics and jokes. However, over time the character and his world grow more complex. A story of a mad scientist grows into one of martial artists cultivation and a large world to boot. It was an definitely and enjoyable read!
Honestly, I'm not fond of reading stories with this kind of genre. However, this story was very captivating. I see a lot of potential in this work. There are mistakes in the punctuation and grammar but there are only few that can be resolved so easily by using an app like Grammarly. The story line was well-plotted! I can say that the writer is naturally talented in writing for coming up a creative story. Keep up the good work author!
i'm brazilian and i don't know english so i use google translator so sorry for grammatical errors sincerely incredible the fact that the protagonist and the other characters do not have cliches doesn’t have a generic personality the System didn’t come out of nowhere the creation of the world is also great the character to have genophobia is also very creative these days the best wuxia I’ve read
Another author review thank you, readers, for your support. Dear reader if you like the novel please leave a review it will help my novel to have a rating it lacks review thank you for giving it a read.
The beginning of the story needs a rewrite, the english on display needing to be interpreted by webnovel veterans. This is still a problem as I'm writing this but it is getting. Otherwise, assuming I'm interpreting it correctly, the story as a whole is on point. The protagonist is a work of art, the thing with Minion was a bit forced but probably necessary, and the female lead is suitably non standard.
How come such a good novel with 22k views doesn’t have any review other than the author’s? Anyways this story is a pretty nice story with a very enjoyable MC. The plot is enjoyable and isn’t forcefully developed. The characters seem pretty 3d,alive, and enjoyable. The only slight problem I would have is with the capitalization not being done correctly and the slight grammar problem. But Author GOOD JOB and keep up the good work 👍
Its a evil novel so i will wvily give 5 stars to myself mc i chose is a bit funny i think may be u can say he is hit in the i wanted try something diffrent so yeah read and plz make time to give comment thank you from ur evil author
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.