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it is a very good storry with very good characters comedy elements good storytelling a fleshed out world and realistic interactions I really enjoyed this fic and the mc has a character I can somwhot get behind and in my opinion is likable even though he has his own flaws. The flaws he has however are part of his character and not the result of bad writing anf in my personal humble opinion I would say that characters who aren't perfect mary sues are easyer to emphasize with than merlins image of a king
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour Β½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs Β½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
This author thought many ideas and tried to write many fic and burnou without even going into much in the fic written in and abandoned writing. Waste
MC has white hair. With that information, I suspected that it would be a pathetic Mc with mental retardation... and it was worse. MC is more than 6000 years old. but he acts, thinks and talks like an autistic child with anger issues and is racist.
What's with the hate? the story is good to me. only a few misunderstandings and stuff. the mc is supposed to be mature and not biased against Rias? because he lives on the throne of heroes? really? I don't even know if that is possible, training with heroes with different ideologies, values and stuff would make you twisted in so many ways. why the hate lol.
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my ONLY beef with this story is exactly this updation honestly this is not the first time author has left his stories and i can t take it!!!!!!! the story itself is good no doubt about it but why oh why do you not update your stories!!!! its one of the reasons i have stopped reading your stories and wait until it gets at least 30 chaps else i will simply be disappointed like with this one and this world is out to get me i am sure of it! please please update your stories!!!!!!!!1
Yah yang agak kurang pengembangan ceritanya aja... Dia sudah berada di tahta pahlawan selama 6000 tahun tapi tidak bisa mendeteksi sedikitpun aura iblis? Are you serius?π.... Yah..intinya Ceritanya bagus dan sangat menarik bagi saya..
5/3/4/4/3 this is DxD world, dont expect high about it. MC is ordinary kid, but he get trained by heroes in Throne Of Heroes from Nasu. Get reincarnated in DxD, how mc think and how DxD think is very different so they clash especially Issei. If you Nasuverse fans and Hate issei this is for you
it was one of the best dxd novels with mc not siding with rias or original main cast . The mc way of becoming strong is not some oppai b*** but by knowledge and research.
really good story !!!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]can't understand why there are so many hater when this is one of the most Amazing dxd fanfic I have ever read ! anyway thanks author and please keep writing!!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
at first it's good novel, but went downhill for the past chapters. i like this novel, but it's just disappoint me. 46 chapters, this is it mc is unnecessarily 'smart' and hardheaded resulting in a bunch of dumb decisions, one of them is his bias toward devil. he learns the best from his mentors, but he also take their worst. thousands of years of training, he shouldn't have been this bad at making decision. basically there'll be many forced plot for the sake of drama. the first thing He should've done when goes back to dxd is gathering infos whether his common sense is skewed or not, he knew his mentors are crazy people, but his bias(fgo's common sense) 'force' him to just use fgo common sense which just add unnecessary drama to the whole thing, i wonder if his training with the hasans have any meaning at all. the way he just goes to sona and 'rampage' because momo became devil is just dumb. oh, he's also unnecessarily petty against issei, he literally torture a high schooler for being pervert just because issei is a part of devils(rias). this is when the 'quality' went downhill. alsp, mc feels like cao-cao's(char from this novel) copycat. willingly do anything for the sake of being called true hero. fgo heroes being considered as heroes because they're being themselves, they have their own aspirations, being a hero is not even their goal, what our mc does is just opposite, he's trying to be humanity's hero, not being Soma Hanakai. this story feels like cheap version of irregular at magic highschool. according to chapters length, it should be about 100 chapters. No character development for mc yet. which is something he need long chapters ago, especially at 'saving' momo from sona part.
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Tenia la idea y todo... Pero decayo todo en el capitulo 3... Mato a asia uno de los personajes principales u.u casi mata a kiba aunque no importa se ve que el autor quiere hacer las cosas diferentes pero al hacerlo asi retuerce todo el dxd y lo hace otra cosa como con los heroes y cao cao ya le quito todo mayor drama
This Fanfiction doesn't deserve all these negative reviews. And a beautiful one where you can see that Author put his effort into building Mc (Soma) and the other characters as well.
Everything was fine until the chapter with the harem. This is such nonsense to be honest. Why are there so many useless characters that are forgotten after three chapters? And these girls are also sorceresses. This is still accepted until the moment when you realize that the author is going to write them into history on a permanent basis.
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all of mc women is a underage middle schooler which are a jailbait I'm not into that. author is a lolicon. but I still keep reading cuz I'm bored. someone need to call the fbi on this author
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Yeah m8 I think you done fk'd up with this. Your character doesn't act like someone who spent 6000 years in the throne of heroes being trained by legends. The guy acts like a toddler and an absolute amateur. You'd think this guy spent 6 eons with them he'd actually learn something but nah.
This is 4.5 at worst, not sure why it is only rated as a 4 .................................................................................................
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I'm... really, really, really astonished, to see so many bad reviews... Well, I will be quick. If you like cliche fanfic where MC charm every girls with his look and is OP, then this is not for you. If you like fanfic where MC has a character, is alive (more than a blank sheet of paper on which we put the words "OP MC"), then this is more for you. The majority of people here don't like the fact that the story is logic (yes, yes, the world itself isn't logic at all considering it's DxD). MC's character is a BREATH OF FRESH AIR, he is certainly not good, but not bad either, he is ruthless and cruel (too much even) when he needs too (that is to say, one must NOT be his ennemy), and is not incoherent at all in his actions. I think the simple fact that Rias and her peerage isn't in the harem is something people hate. In this story, Rias is and acts like her original self, that is to say : a spoiled "princess". And... as a normal person... I wouldn't like a character such as her, which is the same for MC. I will repeat, if you like "story" where bland OP handsome MC get every girls who get excited just by seeing his face, this is not for you. If you are ready to accept that MC has a character proper to himself, and that the story has developement, that the original characters acts like they would, then you will surely like it. This story is a breath of fresh air.
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The Story was pretty decent at Start but god I hate the MC it has been 46 Chapters and he still uses his old Nasuverse logic in the world of DXD also I live how he hates demons and Vampires because they are hated in the nasuverse, but his cool with the church cuz Church good, lol even the church was hated in the Nasuverse, The mc Also tries so hard to act like he is above everyone this part is a spoiler, His way of teaching the bratty Rias a lesson is by asking her to somehow get like a Million dollars in a month without using her Powers, Something the even the MC himself wouldn't be able to do without his powers, also what's the point of that anyway, you could found another way to teach her a lesson, he also pretends to be this righteous moral man but then allows Ria's to be forcibly married Cuz Duty, lol that's not morally right, it isn't my duty as living person to marry someone my family wants me to marry, Oh and to add insult to injury, he actively nudges Rias to lose her virginity to some reach guy so she can get him the money, the audacity of this MC now to the Author, genuine advice, Never apply real world Logic to fantasy, it just never works, and never do what you readers want, do what YOU want
Either the Author has some kind of misunderstanding Fetish or just plain hates the Original DxD and decided to make a FanFic to destroy it even more... Sigh... $tupidity at its finest.
How could you kill Asia she was the only good girl in dxd aside from koneko. Why did you have to kill her. I wish i never read this novel.
it is a very good storry with very good characters comedy elements good storytelling a fleshed out world and realistic interactions I really enjoyed this fic and the mc has a character I can somwhot get behind and in my opinion is likable even though he has his own flaws. The flaws he has however are part of his character and not the result of bad writing anf in my personal humble opinion I would say that characters who aren't perfect mary sues are easyer to emphasize with than merlins image of a king
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour Β½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs Β½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
This author thought many ideas and tried to write many fic and burnou without even going into much in the fic written in and abandoned writing. Waste
MC has white hair. With that information, I suspected that it would be a pathetic Mc with mental retardation... and it was worse. MC is more than 6000 years old. but he acts, thinks and talks like an autistic child with anger issues and is racist.
What's with the hate? the story is good to me. only a few misunderstandings and stuff. the mc is supposed to be mature and not biased against Rias? because he lives on the throne of heroes? really? I don't even know if that is possible, training with heroes with different ideologies, values and stuff would make you twisted in so many ways. why the hate lol.
Reveal Spoiler my ONLY beef with this story is exactly this updation honestly this is not the first time author has left his stories and i can t take it!!!!!!! the story itself is good no doubt about it but why oh why do you not update your stories!!!! its one of the reasons i have stopped reading your stories and wait until it gets at least 30 chaps else i will simply be disappointed like with this one and this world is out to get me i am sure of it! please please update your stories!!!!!!!!1
Yah yang agak kurang pengembangan ceritanya aja... Dia sudah berada di tahta pahlawan selama 6000 tahun tapi tidak bisa mendeteksi sedikitpun aura iblis? Are you serius?π.... Yah..intinya Ceritanya bagus dan sangat menarik bagi saya..
5/3/4/4/3 this is DxD world, dont expect high about it. MC is ordinary kid, but he get trained by heroes in Throne Of Heroes from Nasu. Get reincarnated in DxD, how mc think and how DxD think is very different so they clash especially Issei. If you Nasuverse fans and Hate issei this is for you
it was one of the best dxd novels with mc not siding with rias or original main cast . The mc way of becoming strong is not some oppai b*** but by knowledge and research.
really good story !!!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]can't understand why there are so many hater when this is one of the most Amazing dxd fanfic I have ever read ! anyway thanks author and please keep writing!!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
at first it's good novel, but went downhill for the past chapters. i like this novel, but it's just disappoint me. 46 chapters, this is it mc is unnecessarily 'smart' and hardheaded resulting in a bunch of dumb decisions, one of them is his bias toward devil. he learns the best from his mentors, but he also take their worst. thousands of years of training, he shouldn't have been this bad at making decision. basically there'll be many forced plot for the sake of drama. the first thing He should've done when goes back to dxd is gathering infos whether his common sense is skewed or not, he knew his mentors are crazy people, but his bias(fgo's common sense) 'force' him to just use fgo common sense which just add unnecessary drama to the whole thing, i wonder if his training with the hasans have any meaning at all. the way he just goes to sona and 'rampage' because momo became devil is just dumb. oh, he's also unnecessarily petty against issei, he literally torture a high schooler for being pervert just because issei is a part of devils(rias). this is when the 'quality' went downhill. alsp, mc feels like cao-cao's(char from this novel) copycat. willingly do anything for the sake of being called true hero. fgo heroes being considered as heroes because they're being themselves, they have their own aspirations, being a hero is not even their goal, what our mc does is just opposite, he's trying to be humanity's hero, not being Soma Hanakai. this story feels like cheap version of irregular at magic highschool. according to chapters length, it should be about 100 chapters. No character development for mc yet. which is something he need long chapters ago, especially at 'saving' momo from sona part.
Keep up good work Author san and olz dont drop thos novel this is the second best dxd fanfiction ive read [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Reveal Spoiler Tenia la idea y todo... Pero decayo todo en el capitulo 3... Mato a asia uno de los personajes principales u.u casi mata a kiba aunque no importa se ve que el autor quiere hacer las cosas diferentes pero al hacerlo asi retuerce todo el dxd y lo hace otra cosa como con los heroes y cao cao ya le quito todo mayor drama
This Fanfiction doesn't deserve all these negative reviews. And a beautiful one where you can see that Author put his effort into building Mc (Soma) and the other characters as well.
Everything was fine until the chapter with the harem. This is such nonsense to be honest. Why are there so many useless characters that are forgotten after three chapters? And these girls are also sorceresses. This is still accepted until the moment when you realize that the author is going to write them into history on a permanent basis.
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all of mc women is a underage middle schooler which are a jailbait I'm not into that. author is a lolicon. but I still keep reading cuz I'm bored. someone need to call the fbi on this author
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Yeah m8 I think you done fk'd up with this. Your character doesn't act like someone who spent 6000 years in the throne of heroes being trained by legends. The guy acts like a toddler and an absolute amateur. You'd think this guy spent 6 eons with them he'd actually learn something but nah.
This is 4.5 at worst, not sure why it is only rated as a 4 .................................................................................................
Its a NOPE........Trust me when I say this,DO NOT WASTE YOUR TIME ON THIS !!! ________________________________________________________________ ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ________________________________________________________________ ----------------------------------------------------------------------------
I'm... really, really, really astonished, to see so many bad reviews... Well, I will be quick. If you like cliche fanfic where MC charm every girls with his look and is OP, then this is not for you. If you like fanfic where MC has a character, is alive (more than a blank sheet of paper on which we put the words "OP MC"), then this is more for you. The majority of people here don't like the fact that the story is logic (yes, yes, the world itself isn't logic at all considering it's DxD). MC's character is a BREATH OF FRESH AIR, he is certainly not good, but not bad either, he is ruthless and cruel (too much even) when he needs too (that is to say, one must NOT be his ennemy), and is not incoherent at all in his actions. I think the simple fact that Rias and her peerage isn't in the harem is something people hate. In this story, Rias is and acts like her original self, that is to say : a spoiled "princess". And... as a normal person... I wouldn't like a character such as her, which is the same for MC. I will repeat, if you like "story" where bland OP handsome MC get every girls who get excited just by seeing his face, this is not for you. If you are ready to accept that MC has a character proper to himself, and that the story has developement, that the original characters acts like they would, then you will surely like it. This story is a breath of fresh air.
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The Story was pretty decent at Start but god I hate the MC it has been 46 Chapters and he still uses his old Nasuverse logic in the world of DXD also I live how he hates demons and Vampires because they are hated in the nasuverse, but his cool with the church cuz Church good, lol even the church was hated in the Nasuverse, The mc Also tries so hard to act like he is above everyone this part is a spoiler, His way of teaching the bratty Rias a lesson is by asking her to somehow get like a Million dollars in a month without using her Powers, Something the even the MC himself wouldn't be able to do without his powers, also what's the point of that anyway, you could found another way to teach her a lesson, he also pretends to be this righteous moral man but then allows Ria's to be forcibly married Cuz Duty, lol that's not morally right, it isn't my duty as living person to marry someone my family wants me to marry, Oh and to add insult to injury, he actively nudges Rias to lose her virginity to some reach guy so she can get him the money, the audacity of this MC now to the Author, genuine advice, Never apply real world Logic to fantasy, it just never works, and never do what you readers want, do what YOU want
Either the Author has some kind of misunderstanding Fetish or just plain hates the Original DxD and decided to make a FanFic to destroy it even more... Sigh... $tupidity at its finest.
How could you kill Asia she was the only good girl in dxd aside from koneko. Why did you have to kill her. I wish i never read this novel.