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Chapter 17: Leviathan.... (rewritten)

2 years later...

Max could be seen in the Apollo cabin, competing against the the resident sons and daughters of Apollo shooting arrows and throwing javelins. He spent most of the time with Thalia, Hermes kids or with the Apollo cabin kids. Seeing as Pan was the son of Hermes, they where very comfortable around him, even if they realised that Max was technically their nephew which got a few laughs.

Max loved archery, it gave a sense of accomplishment every time he hits the bullseye. It came natural to him. Little did he know that this target practice would come to good use in the near future when he meets with the Hephaestus cabin.

He spent his spare time with the hephaestus kids who happily showed him how to forge weapons and armour after he shoulders interest in handling metal. Although Max made many mistakes, they were patient enough to correct him and repeated their explanations slowly.

But the thing that weirded Max out was, every time he was engrossed in his work somebody would squeeze his butt. And every time he turned back to see who it was he would find a bunch of girls standing behind him with an innocent expression.

Max had tried to tell them that he has a girlfriend but, that just made there attempts to escalate, she even found them pressing themselves on him from the back.

After 2 years of practice Max had made 4 identical knives made of celestial bronze and had kept one and given the other three to Thalia, Annabeth and Luke.

On weekends he would visit the satyrs and the cloven council. The first order of business Max had given them is to calling all the Satyrs looking for Pan. The second was to build a training arena for demigods and satyrs.

The arena was modelled after the Colosseum but with natural obstacles like Rock formations, sand dunes and clumped together trees to block the vision from either side.

Max wanted to build this Arena for squad battle simulations and battalion command training. He had pitched this idea to Chiron and he accepted readily and remarked it was good training for demigods who show leadership qualities.

The construction was Halfway through and he had also had got the nymphs and the dryads to change the arena's terrain every week. They were happy to help for mainly two reasons. One they were overjoyed to help the son of Pan, and two they felt bored and did nothing most of the day. And changing the terrain with obstacles and traps felt like a challenge for them, especially if its for tricking demigods, and the satyrs who keep flirting with them.

Last year Annabeth had taken up sword fighting and she was like fish in water. She even almost caught up to Luke. Thalia on the other hand was very proficient with the bow, joining the rivalry between Max and the Apollo cabin. She was a demon with the spear; swung and twirled it around like those Shaolin temple monks.

Max strength was well known in the camp and was constantly asked to spar with children of Ares. He even met with a shy Clarisse La Rue, the constant bully of Percy Jackson. He wondered how a shy little girl turned into the camp bully.

The spars ranged from swords, spears and maces to brawling hand-to-hand fistfight, which he and the kids of Ares thoroughly enjoyed.

After trying many weapons, Max was good with neither swords nor spears, they just dint feel right in his hand. But one night there was a tomahawk throwing challenge between the Hermes Ares, Appolo and the Athena cabin , which Max and Thalia also participated.

Max placed second only for a kid from Apollo cabin to take first. The tomahawks in his hand felt very balanced and felt the weight of the blade-head which dipped the weapon forwards slightly. He had at last found his weapon- the axe.

He had gone to the Hephaestus cabin forge and asked them if the could make an axe out of celestial bronze. They had asked for the specifics of the blade to which he gave the exact shape and size of the two-handed Leviathan axe wielded by Kratos in the God of war game, which he played in his past life.

He included the details of the axe's handle to be curved slight to stabilize his grip when he throws it. He also asked to make tomahawks, to which the head councillor Alex Steele had given him a set of 23 tomahawks saying, "Well nobody uses them so I might as well just wash them of my hands or melt them down to make armour or something. And I hate melting perfectly good blades if I say so myself. One more thing, your axe will be made by 2 people; me and Charles over there, so you gotta pay up."

Seeing Charles Beckendorf, Max made a mental reminder to save this guy from an exploding ship, the princess Andromeda in the future.

But the payment was not what Max expected, So he had to lend the Hephaestus cabin his bike for a month. But the thing he did not see coming was, the sons of Hephaestus outdid themselves by modifying the bike into an absolute beast.

For starters, it had high powered military grade fog lights, a NOS (nitrous) system, a holster for his Leviathan Axe and a biatchin' sound system. Not to mention the Mist producer to hide his Axe and changing Max's appearance to a 30 year old.

Alex made sure no one was watching pulled out a nice polished wooden box, with he words, 'property of Max' and gave it to Max as if out of reverence. Max confused by his actions opened the box, tk quickly close it. His face looked exactly like Enel when he found out Luffy was impervious to lightning.

Inside the box was the gun he took from the biker guy, reforged with celestial bronze. and another box filled with celestial bronze bullets. "HOLY SH-" "ssshhh! its a secret . Dont let Chiron find it and don't tell anyone.....okay" "Damn dude! how they hell did you pull this off?!"

To which Alex just shrugged grinning, "Lets just say, I found it in the bike, but when disposing it by melting it in the forge I was struck by a novel idea. Although there was a lot of trial and error and hell a lot more of sneaking around and unexplainable explosions we got it right."

Max caught on to something he said, "We?" Alex replied, "Oh yeah. The whole Hephaestus cabin helped on this project."

Max shook Alex's hand promising they could take his bike for a spin whenever they wanted, except if and when he was on quests.


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