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Alright dude, I am rating this cause I like this fic, to be honest I've never read a Supreme Kai fic, this is a first and I am liking it so far. It has great potential, still I want to know if you a re gonna do the mass realease tho!?? Also is MC gonna be stronger than Jiren than if he doesn't want anyone above him on his universe!??????
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damn man this sh*t makes me hyped. i already love it keep up the awesome work😍🙏 please keep on making this story it is really good👍👍👍👍
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Great read definitely should read this if your like dragon ball. Filllllerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
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Unique take on dragon ball, can't wait to see how sumata will create evil races and righteous ones and focus on the conflict between them, would be pretty cool if later on down the line you focus of the pov's of some mortal races to have a better understanding on how their society works.
What are you reading this? Go read it already. Don't forget to share with friends and family. And give it a like when your done. 😆
Good job on the story and character build, keep up the good work. =P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P
First drogan ball z fan fic of its kind ive seen. Cool to see it froms kais pov not sayians--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
this is a very good fanfiction and it really unique i dont think i have ever seen a fanfic where mc is reborn as a god in DBZ world its very good and i recomend it
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This is a new story with great potential- and reviewing the first few chapters, the grammar is good, the character seems okay for the most part and the story or rather plot is promising. A great story- and I would hope it is not turned into something like a harem- Ciao
A bit quick paced so far, but the concept and writing quality are amazing and it as a lot of potential! Please dont drop this fanfic I cant wait to see how things turn out!!!
Interesting! This has a lot of potential. Can add all the animes into his universe is he wants. Another good thing is, it doesn't even have to be anime, it can be anything.
It’s pretty original then all the other dragon ball fics my main question would be why be birthed in U13 when you could have been born in U 7 now wouldn’t that be an interesting thing even as a supreme Kai you could have more ideas and chapters since it’s canon and all but in U13 you’ll have to build everything from scratch. At least in U7 with your skills and power you would be able to argue with beerus and not be afraid of him. But anyhow let’s see where this goes good luck
it's a original as far as I can tell I've never seen someone get reborn as a supreme Kai and make his own universe in the dragon Ball world I'm super excited for more I love universe building FanFictions Please don't drop!!!
Perfecto me encanta sigue con el buen trabajo . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ... ... . . . . . . . . .
OMG I love it! Please keep writing! This concept is very unique to the dragon ball fan fiction genre! I can't wait to see how it develops, and please no harem!
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Shameless 5 star review! This will be a long ride so why don't you give it a read? This is going to be a very, very unique Dragon Ball fanfiction!
Alright dude, I am rating this cause I like this fic, to be honest I've never read a Supreme Kai fic, this is a first and I am liking it so far. It has great potential, still I want to know if you a re gonna do the mass realease tho!?? Also is MC gonna be stronger than Jiren than if he doesn't want anyone above him on his universe!??????
Reveal Spoiler damn man this sh*t makes me hyped. i already love it keep up the awesome work😍🙏 please keep on making this story it is really good👍👍👍👍
Reveal Spoiler Great read definitely should read this if your like dragon ball. Filllllerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
Nice nice ........................................................................................ —“-“-“-“-“-“——“-“-“-“-“——“-“-“-“-“”—“”—“-“”—“-“-“”-
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great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great
Unique take on dragon ball, can't wait to see how sumata will create evil races and righteous ones and focus on the conflict between them, would be pretty cool if later on down the line you focus of the pov's of some mortal races to have a better understanding on how their society works.
What are you reading this? Go read it already. Don't forget to share with friends and family. And give it a like when your done. 😆
Good job on the story and character build, keep up the good work. =P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P=P
First drogan ball z fan fic of its kind ive seen. Cool to see it froms kais pov not sayians--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
this is a very good fanfiction and it really unique i dont think i have ever seen a fanfic where mc is reborn as a god in DBZ world its very good and i recomend it
Reveal Spoiler YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSS !AWESOME SAUSE! thanks for the story! YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSS !AWESOME SAUSE! thanks for the story!
This is a new story with great potential- and reviewing the first few chapters, the grammar is good, the character seems okay for the most part and the story or rather plot is promising. A great story- and I would hope it is not turned into something like a harem- Ciao
A bit quick paced so far, but the concept and writing quality are amazing and it as a lot of potential! Please dont drop this fanfic I cant wait to see how things turn out!!!
Interesting! This has a lot of potential. Can add all the animes into his universe is he wants. Another good thing is, it doesn't even have to be anime, it can be anything.
It’s pretty original then all the other dragon ball fics my main question would be why be birthed in U13 when you could have been born in U 7 now wouldn’t that be an interesting thing even as a supreme Kai you could have more ideas and chapters since it’s canon and all but in U13 you’ll have to build everything from scratch. At least in U7 with your skills and power you would be able to argue with beerus and not be afraid of him. But anyhow let’s see where this goes good luck
it's a original as far as I can tell I've never seen someone get reborn as a supreme Kai and make his own universe in the dragon Ball world I'm super excited for more I love universe building FanFictions Please don't drop!!!
Perfecto me encanta sigue con el buen trabajo . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ... ... . . . . . . . . .
OMG I love it! Please keep writing! This concept is very unique to the dragon ball fan fiction genre! I can't wait to see how it develops, and please no harem!
...........................................................................................................................................................................................................keep writing...............................................................
Shameless 5 star review! This will be a long ride so why don't you give it a read? This is going to be a very, very unique Dragon Ball fanfiction!